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Bilal Khoso
Bilal Khoso
Shaheen Public School
The Forbidden Forest Part Ii
Published On Dec 28th 2013
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As Omar and Nasir ventured deep into the forest, something leaped at them. It was a tiger, very big and scary. Omar decided to go back but the forest was huge and they had lost their way. They ran until they reached a house, a house made of straws. Suddenly some people came from behind them. They were big and tall and spoke a language that neither Omar nor Nasir could understand. They were cannibals! They captured them and took them away but now something even bigger than the tiger attacked them and it was a..........
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Tooba Wow Tooba
Apr 22nd 2014
 
 
Nuzhat You are writing too little paragraphs i dont appreciate Nuzhat
Jan 18th 2014
 
 
Ayesha Did they die? I hope they died Ayesha
Dec 29th 2013
 
 
bilal Next part on 1 jan Bilal
Dec 28th 2013
 
 
bilal Next part on 1 jan Bilal
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