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Bushra Idrees
Bushra Idrees
Beaconhouse School System
The Place I Love
Published On Dec 28th 2013
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Rank 9 Out of 10
I still remember the crystal river
When I went there I felt a shiver
There was always a cold breeze running
Oh! It was too much stunning
 The water there looked like glass
When I touched it I felt no mass
There were no fish over there
But still I had to stare
I loved to touch the river with my hands
And roll it on the nearby sand
I still remember this place
How it gave a smile on my face
I still remember the first time I came here
All my feelings I used to share
I came here night and day
Writing and gigantic essay
Here I always realized my mistakes
How they gave me horror shakes
Over here I never heard a word
Until I saw a frightening nerd
I loved to see myself in the water
Oh! How it made me look shorter
Here I saw my first dove
This is the place I still love
On this crystal river
Which made me shiver.
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Comments 5
Bushra Thanks malaika Bushra
Jul 17th 2014
Malaika Amazing and awesome job Malaika
Jan 3rd 2014
Bushra Thank you very much Bushra
Jan 2nd 2014
Muhammad Cool . You are a peot Muhammad
Dec 31st 2014
Afshan Awesome. Really amazing peom. Afshan
Dec 31st 2014

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