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Ayesha  Imran
Ayesha Imran
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The Twins Baby-sit The Twins
Published On Dec 28th 2013
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The day that I baby sat my younger twin brothers is the most laughable and memorable day of my life. At the last moment, my mom said, "Are you sure you can do it, kids?" Khadijah, my twin sister, said "See, mom? The fact that you call us "kids" explains that you don't think we can do it! And it's not just me alone, Mom, I've got Ayesha.... Oh! And I've also got the rats.'' She said, referring to the rats who were in our kitchen and weren't going away. My mother said, “Hey, be careful of the rats, okay? Do not go in the kitchen. Of course I think you can do it! It's just, you guys are not like Fatimah, and She’s so well-organized. She baby sat you guyz when she was 10 and you girls were 7." Me and Khadijah rolled our eyes at each other. This was one of our mom's favorite stories to tell.
After lots of lectures and reassurances from my mother, She finally left. Khadijah closed the door, sighed, and plopped down on the red couch and grabbed the remote and started channel HBO, where "Hunger Games: Catching Fire" was on. I was still a little nervous. I said, " Now Khadijah, don't be careless. This is serious business, you know. We shouldn't be ignoring Hasan and Essa." Deejah, being the don't-care type, said, "Oh shut up. They're probably fine. Look, they're asleep and dreaming of sweet things. And we don't need to be by their side every minute, or they will get all clingy to us, okay?"Hearing my sister speaking in such a carefree way, I relaxed and sat by my sister, enjoying the movie...
WHAT WILL HAPPEN NEXT? WILL WE BE SUCCESSFUL IN BABYSITING OUR BROTHERS OR NOT? FIND OUT IN THE NEXT PART WHICH IS... COMING SOON!! (By the way, if you enjoyed this, let me know in the comment section below, and I'll send the next part very soon, that is)
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Comments 74
Munkashay Ahem, wot? Munkashay
Dec 30th 2015
 
 
shehram Dont make a mountain out of a molehill stupids(stupids for making u laugh) Shehram
Aug 31st 2014
 
 
Tooba Nice Tooba
May 12th 2014
 
 
Munkashay It IS, Ayesha. At least, " I " think so. Munkashay
Apr 30th 2014
 
 
Tooba Cool Tooba
Apr 22nd 2014
 
 
Irum Whaaaa??? I thought THIS was over!! Irum
Mar 27th 2014
 
 
Munkashay I-I meant, fight, not foght.... SORRY! :D Munkashay
Mar 23rd 2014
 
 
Munkashay Hey hey, slow down! I know Urdu alright, and sorry if you thought I started the fight. Let me explain: When I opened my ID and saw those comments in which u people were calling me rude, it hurt my heart. My czn, kinda my best cousin, saw it too.As my ID was on, when I went for lunch, she wrote that "fast-forward" comment as she was angry on you and couldn't control herself.The next week she told me it when I went to her home. I quickly turned the computer on and saw that reply. It again made me feel sad. So now you see, it wasn't me. You hurt my feelings at that time, but now I forgive ALL of you. Get it now, Khadija Imran? STOP THE FOGHT NOW!!!! Munkashay
Mar 17th 2014
 
 
HAFSA Oh acha Hafsa
Mar 7th 2014
 
 
Irum I am talking about Khadijah Imran. Irum
Feb 27th 2014
 
 
HAFSA Whooo? Ayesha lakho i didnot understand:( Hafsa
Feb 22nd 2014
 
 
Irum Please don't mind Khadijah, Everyone. She's a really good girl. She just gets a little mad sometimes. Other than that, she's the world's most mischievous, awesome and funny girl.. And a good friend too.;) Irum
Feb 15th 2014
 
 
HAFSA Youre right khadijah Hafsa
Feb 13th 2014
 
 
Khadijah Oooooooh, someone's getting a little Jazbati!!! (You know what that means , right?It's an Urdu word)Don't have much time to talk but I just wanna say that I'm not fast forward..If anything, I think that you're fast-forward . Yammering around like that!! Bad girl!! :) Khadijah
Feb 12th 2014
 
 
Ayesha Can you guyz stop? Ayesha
Feb 10th 2014
 
 
Munkashay Right, so am I , so don't go on teasing my sis! If you are straight-forward or fast-forward, I DON'T CARE! Just stop saying that, cuz honestly, your sis is much nicer than you. When YOU people started the fight, how can you say "I" did?? Please stop being forward-or-whatever, cuz I DON'T LIKE IT!! Munkashay
Feb 7th 2014
 
 
Khadijah Okay, but next time just look closely before pointing answers. and don't cover up by saying that it's just a normal conversation. It's not , okay? And you should know that I am very posessive over my sister. Whatever happens to her, happens to me,.. Now you see our differences? She's quiet, nice , and kind, and protect her , fight for her, and I'm straightforward. Khadijah
Jan 19th 2014
 
 
Muhammad Hey hey friends, it's me Shumaim from Muhammad's ID(he's my bro)....look, in our last comment, we said we don't wanna fight.....then how r u saying WE started the fight?? look friends, we are peace loving sisters and hate fights and I also know how it feels wen u r telling the truth but everyone say ur lying....but we were just ASKING man! Come on....relax Khadija...I was seriosly laughing on ur comment, Cheer up now! Muhammad
Jan 18th 2014
 
 
HAFSA Oh acha acha Hafsa
Jan 18th 2014
 
 
Irum Munkashay and Shumaim are the Latif sisters... Irum
Jan 18th 2014
 
 
Midhat I enjoyed it really great Midhat
Jan 17th 2014
 
 
HAFSA Who are latif sisters i didnot understand Hafsa
Jan 16th 2014
 
 
Ayesha Well, these ARE my twin brothers on Khadijah's D.P. And u found it on Google because it was me who put it there. Ayesha
Jan 16th 2014
 
 
 яυмαιsα And thnkk U latif sisters...............FOR STNDING UP FOR ME, I LUV U FRM MY HEARTTTTT<3<3 яυмαιsα
Jan 15th 2014
 
 
 яυмαιsα ANNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNND BREAKING NEWS!!!!!! THIS FIGHT BETWEEN ME AND TWINS FINISHES (It never wuz a fight....jst me trying to make those twins not lie to us/me anymore) яυмαιsα
Jan 15th 2014
 
 
 яυмαιsα AYESHA....SHE DID SAY THT THOSE BABIES IN THE PIC WERE HER BROTHERS яυмαιsα
Jan 15th 2014
 
 
 яυмαιsα AYESHA....SHE DID SAY THT THOSE BABIES IN THE PIC WERE HER BROTHERS яυмαιsα
Jan 15th 2014
 
 
Irum This time she didn't lie, she just took a picture that HAPPENED to be on a website and she put it there , and that is NOT called LYING. Lying is when you say something and it's not true.She didn't say that this was NOT in a website, did she?she didn't say anything! , SO WHAT??!! what's your problem? Irum
Jan 14th 2014
 
 
HAFSA Oh rumaisa leave these twin sisters alone you look like a baby when you fight and ayesha imran just wanted to say that in this part you forgot to write part 1.understand. i mean you just wrote the twins babysit the twins .you should have writtten part 1 also.but no prob we can understand Hafsa
Jan 14th 2014
 
 
 яυмαιsα And khadija ur dp...the one of ur bros is frm the internet too...and its on manyyyyyy websites....will u plz stop freaking lying to us about evrything яυмαιsα
Jan 13th 2014
 
 
 яυмαιsα Khadijah and Ayesha..we are not being rude...we are jst telling y not to lie...why are u lying ur previous dp was also frm net and this one too...u have a great imagination for making up stories like we have accounts on other websites and tht all.......and me or munkashay are not fighting Khadija яυмαιsα
Jan 13th 2014
 
 
Khadijah @The Latif Sisters:I am a straight forward person, unlike my sister and if you pick on y sister, I won't answer nicely and sweetly like my sister. You guyz are just taking her niceness for granted. Me and my twin are totally opposite . So be careful what you say about her. And if you don't believe her, then just leave us sisters alone. You do not know what we sisters can do when we are united. And Fatimah Baji joins us, then you both will run with your tail between your legs. I am not being rude, just defending my twin.*angry* Khadijah
Jan 13th 2014
 
 
HAFSA Munkshay dont be RUDE! NOW FIRST YOURE SAYING THAT YOU DONT WANT A FIGHT TO BEGIN AND YOU ARE STARTING IT. Hafsa
Jan 12th 2014
 
 
HAFSA Munkshay dont be RUDE! NOW FIRST YOURE SAYING THAT YOU DONT WANT A FIGHT TO BEGIN AND YOU ARE STARTING IT. Hafsa
Jan 12th 2014
 
 
Hiba Love this story Ayesha :) Hiba
Jan 12th 2014
 
 
Khadijah Why are you guyz picking on my sis? Look, everyone makes mistakes, no one is perfect. I'm not saying that she's some kind of angel, but we gotta accept ppl's mistakes. @ayesha; Dear sis, just ignore them, don't answer. The more you try to please ppl, the more they'll pick out mistakes, get it?@The Latif Sisters:I am a straight forward person, unlike my sister and if you pic Khadijah
Jan 12th 2014
 
 
Ayesha Okay, don't believe me. ;) Ayesha
Jan 12th 2014
 
 
Manahil Waiting for the next part! Manahil
Jan 11th 2014
 
 
Munkashay Ohhh Ayesha, please don't lie anymore, it is not only found from one website, we found it from about six to seven websites.....also we found it printed on a mug! Sometime you say ur mom doesn't allow u to give ur photo on V shine and sometime ur photos are roaming around the whole Internet! Stop lying and tell the TRUTH!Really don't wanna fight but PLEEAASE!! Munkashay
Jan 11th 2014
 
 
Ayesha Actually, me and Ayesha Lakho also have accounts on another social website. At first, we didn't know that we were friends on Vshine as well. one day we got to know that we were on Vshine too. we became such good friends that we even gave each other our Vshine passwords. I want one thing straightened out. If you guyz think that becuz of this Ayesha Lakho is a very bad person for using my acc, well then you're wrong. I gave her my password, and it doesn't make her a bad person. She's still the sweet girl you knew. And now we have agreed to change our passwords for avoiding other mishaps..... i hope everything's clear now, okay?? Please please please do not view Ayesha Lakho in a bad picture from now on, okay?? :) Ayesha
Jan 10th 2014
 
 
Ayesha @Fatima Raheel: Thank you! yes, I will send he next part as soon as possible!And it's just okay to be twins, it's nothing different, as we've been like that since the day I was born. I am stuck with Khadijah since the day she was born!:)Yes, this is me and my twin's picture! Ayesha
Jan 10th 2014
 
 
Ayesha @Rumaisa and Shumaim: You guys are right. The picture is from the Internet. And you know WHY you found it on the Internet? Because we put it on the website. The website was asking everyone to give twin girls' pictures. so we put it on the net. This was about a couple of years ago. And then when Ayesha Lakho asked me to upload the picture of us, I thought, why not upload the Internet one? So I did it!! Ayesha
Jan 10th 2014
 
 
dua I understand you now. please be careful next time. what do you say ? friends? Dua
Jan 9th 2014
 
 
Shumaim Don't wanna start a fight but if u concentrate on the pic of Ayesha Imran, u can see the website name from which this photo is saved! It's an"Istockphoto", Rumaisa is right! This is not your own photo Ayesha, right? Shumaim
Jan 9th 2014
 
 
KHAN Ok look it was a good story but Ayesha you commented yourself(the last comment).You are telling yourself to publish the next part.Please do not start a fight.Lets be friends:) Khan
Jan 9th 2014
 
 
Shumaim Nice.....Plz publish the next part soon, Vshine! Shumaim
Jan 9th 2014
 
 
Fatima Is this your and your sister's pic (in blue clothes)??? Fatima
Jan 9th 2014
 
 
Fatima Awesome story ayesha. Send the next part soon. How does it feel to be twins? Fatima
Jan 9th 2014
 
 
HAFSA Sorrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrryyyyyyyyyyy ayesha (lakho).plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz be friends:) pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeee..ill neveR DO IT again:)(just joking):) hahhahahhahahahah dont mind code language between cousins. hefelllefo afayesha :) Hafsa
Jan 8th 2014
 
 
HAFSA Dua i didnt understand what are you saying?and rumaisa these are real pictures of ayesha imran and khadijah imran becauze my cousin ayesha lakho told me that these are the real pictures. and ayesha lakho is a best friend of ayesha imran and they talk about it on emails:)thanks Hafsa
Jan 8th 2014
 
 
 яυмαιsα AYESHA....hmmm...ur DP...it frm the net...its not u and ur sis....PLLZZ DONT LIE 2 US:( яυмαιsα
Jan 8th 2014
 
 
fatimah Ppl can u comment anywhere without fighting?, it seriously feels like a childish thing to me, n am so damn tired of this website cuz of all this.... Fatimah
Jan 5th 2014
 
 
Areeba Well great effort my dear friend Ayesha :) I am really desperate for the next part of your story. Please publish it as soon as possible :) Once again a tremendous effort. Well done! Keep it up my dear! By the way how are your twin brothers? How old are they by now? Areeba
Jan 5th 2014
 
 
Irum Uh..... what are you saying, Dua? We keep on telling you that we didn't do it, the hacker did it. That hacker is the same one who is also hacking mine and Ayesha Imran's account.If you don't wanna believe us, fine, don't believe us. Just leave us alone, okay?Do we have a Deal? Irum
Jan 5th 2014
 
 
dua You are such a liar. you never ignore anything dear. you are also honest. you say that your face looks like as if it was burned and your stupid and a gullible person. it is all true darling. who asked you if i could join the vshine? definitely not me. want me to be your queen? i can rule over you! Dua
Jan 4th 2014
 
 
Irum I don't want to be friends Hafsa, you're way too rude. If Ayesha Imran is Friends with you, it doesn't mean that I am as well too! Irum
Jan 4th 2014
 
 
HAFSA I knoow ayessha imran.and ayesha lakho i apoligize for all my mistakes:):)they were a joke.i just wanted to see you angry.I FORGIVE you for all YOUR bad things:):)lets be friends:) Hafsa
Jan 3rd 2014
 
 
Ayesha Yes, I will publish the next part now. Ayesha
Jan 2nd 2014
 
 
Ayesha Yes, I will publish the next part now. Ayesha
Jan 2nd 2014
 
 
Ayesha Yes, I will publish the next part now. Ayesha
Jan 2nd 2014
 
 
Ayesha Dear Hafsa, I don't want to be rude to you as you are my friend's cousin, so I will just ignore you!! That's what i do. I ignore all my problems until they just go away!! Ayesha
Jan 2nd 2014
 
 
Munkashay Right. =) Munkashay
Jan 2nd 2014
 
 
HAFSA I hope it will:) Hafsa
Jan 2nd 2014
 
 
Munkashay Good! But will THEY publish the second part? Munkashay
Jan 1st 2014
 
 
HAFSA Ayesha ill say sorry to you when you say sorry to me on vshine or you will have to promise that you will say sorry to me when we meet i promise i ll say sorry to you when you say:0 Hafsa
Jan 1st 2014
 
 
Irum Ahem, Hafsa, don't you dare be rude to my friend. She is my friend, and anybody who disrespects her will be my enemy, okay? To ayesha imran, just ignore Hafsa, she constanly gets attacks of attention seeking, if ya know what I mean*winks* Irum
Dec 31st 2014
 
 
HAFSA Ha! sara why???its nice:)see everyone what ayesha imran has done commenting her own self acting like everyone who comment read her commennt:)i think she is going madddddd!!!! Hafsa
Dec 31st 2014
 
 
Sarah It's nice! Sarah
Dec 31st 2014
 
 
Sarah It's nice! Sarah
Dec 31st 2014
 
 
Sara I do not like your first part Sara
Dec 30th 2014
 
 
HAFSA Are you mad?ayesha imran. commenting urself.ur righting bad about urself tooo Hafsa
Dec 30th 2014
 
 
Maryam I hope I will enjoy the next part more than this. ;))) Maryam
Dec 30th 2014
 
 
hafsa Good one . keep it on . ayesha my sisters name is also ayesha . and u and ur sister are in ur picture. Hafsa
Dec 30th 2014
 
 
Ayesha Good one. Please publish the next part!! Now that I've met you and Deejah , I feel as if I know you guyz very well. Ayesha is the organized and careful twin. Deejah is the don't care type and a little proud.. Ayesha
Dec 29th 2013
 
 

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