I don’t like apples i dont like peaches i dont like strawberries i dont like leeches i just want a toffee i just want a french-fry i can't stand these fruits no matter how much i try but to be good in health i have to eat them all oh! i want to become big and i want to become tall since fruits are good for eye i just want to give it a try to eat the chunks of fruits no matter what I like.
Well Malaika, This is a great poem and Hiba also likes it very much. But you dont write to receive gifts , you write to express your feelings and show the world how you really feel. You can see my poem too at my page Feeman Annas. Though you shouldn't care about gifts or anything atleast your poem was published. Keep up the good work.
I hate vshine from nowonwards. they wrote on their page that share your ideas here and win a gift and afterwards their telling that young writers do not get gifts .I hate vshine guys don't disturb your lives wasting your time in vshine .vshine is a big frood.
But hey does someone knows I am the winner of this poem this poem is published in the magazine but why did not put the winner badge on my poem and they dind not even call or texted that we are sending a gift and I did not even receive the gift yet.
Hey guys I am the winner of the lattest issue of v shine magazine .do you know my poem tittled fruits is published in the lattest magazine.you guys must congragulate me.anyways I am very happy .I don't know a lot about v shine but the little that I know is that v shine is the best magazine company and the best entertainment and knowledge site ever in the whole world.may allah bless v shine and its members with a wonderful and a successful life.