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Mother! You Shouldn't Make Me Cry

Published On Dec 28th 2013

Total Comments : 30

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Mother! You shouldn't make me cry..
Because I’m the one who try!
i always try my best..
the be the greatest!
i feel so much bad..
when you teach me with hatred..
mother! you shouldn't make me cry..
because i'm the one who try!
i feel much alone..
when you are not with me!
so c'mon!
you will never understand..
the love i have for you in my heart!
Mother! You shouldn't make me cry..
because I’m the one who try!
to be the best in front of you..
first, i should make you feel...
that i love you!
then i will be your girl..
and live forever like a pearl!
that's the plan i have for you!
I will follow it so soon!

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Comments 30
	Thankuuuuuuu......:)	Abeera Jan 9th 2015


	So sweet of U Dua dear! <3 <3 <3 And I love Ur Name ;)	Anonymous Jan 9th 2015


	Loooooooovvvvvveeeeeee your poem and looovvveee profile ic	Abeera Jan 8th 2015


	Oh! Thanks a lot HADIA...<3	Anonymous Nov 26th 2014


	A great poem and outstanding vocabulary!!!............................................................keep it up!!	Hadia Nov 22nd 2014


	Hahaha ok	Amn Oct 27th 2014


	Shoo shweet! It is U buddy! ;)	Anonymous Sep 28th 2014


	Hmm.... I thought it was me :D	Amn Sep 26th 2014


	Lolx because it's just like me, that's why! (;	Anonymous Sep 25th 2014


	Mention not and your picture is so cute	Amn Sep 24th 2014


	Thanks Amn!	Anonymous Sep 20th 2014


	Wow too good	Amn Sep 20th 2014


	Sure!	Anonymous Sep 18th 2014


	Will accept my request or nt???????	Mubashra Sep 12th 2014


	Faryal your profile pic is looking so funky!!	Fatima Jul 9th 2014


	Yup, i'd love to be your friend Fatima<3	Anonymous Jul 6th 2014


	Thanks Faryal.I hope that we shall be good friends .	Fatima Jun 7th 2014


	Thanks guys!	Anonymous May 30th 2014


	Outstanding........	Ibrahim May 29th 2014


	That's Amazing Coco! <3	Ghazal Firdous Apr 8th 2014


	Very nice	Jandad Feb 14th 2014


	I like this and i think that you love your mother verrrrrrrrrrrrrrrryyyyyyyyyyyy much	Shiza Jan 20th 2014


	Very nice poem	Khan Jan 11th 2014


	Dont hurt your mothers they are like flowers who give their fragnant to us	Zanib Jan 10th 2014


	Hmmmm..... i mean 'to be the greatest' not 'the be the greatest' sorry!	Anonymous Jan 9th 2014


	It was okay hun.. =]	Anila Jan 7th 2014


	Thanks guys!!! that's what encourage me thanks alot!	Anonymous Jan 1st 2014


	Vvvvvvvvvvvgood	Hadia Dec 30th 2014


	Gooooooooooooooooooooooood	Minahil Dec 29th 2013


	Too nice ......... i also love my mother more than i love myself	Minahil Dec 29th 2013

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