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Mother! You Shouldn't Make Me Cry
Published On Dec 28th 2013
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Mother! You shouldn't make me cry..
Because I’m the one who try!
i always try my best..
the be the greatest!
i feel so much bad..
when you teach me with hatred..
mother! you shouldn't make me cry..
because i'm the one who try!
i feel much alone..
when you are not with me!
so c'mon!
you will never understand..
the love i have for you in my heart!
Mother! You shouldn't make me cry..
because I’m the one who try!
to be the best in front of you..
first, i should make you feel...
that i love you!
then i will be your girl..
and live forever like a pearl!
that's the plan i have for you!
I will follow it so soon!
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Comments 30
dua Thankuuuuuuu......:) Dua
Jan 9th 2015
 
 
Anonymous So sweet of U Dua dear! <3 <3 <3 And I love Ur Name ;) Anonymous
Jan 9th 2015
 
 
dua Loooooooovvvvvveeeeeee your poem and looovvveee profile ic Dua
Jan 8th 2015
 
 
Anonymous Oh! Thanks a lot HADIA...<3 Anonymous
Nov 26th 2014
 
 
hadia A great poem and outstanding vocabulary!!!............................................................keep it up!! Hadia
Nov 22nd 2014
 
 
Amn Hahaha ok Amn
Oct 27th 2014
 
 
Anonymous Shoo shweet! It is U buddy! ;) Anonymous
Sep 28th 2014
 
 
Amn Hmm.... I thought it was me :D Amn
Sep 26th 2014
 
 
Anonymous Lolx because it's just like me, that's why! (; Anonymous
Sep 25th 2014
 
 
Amn Mention not and your picture is so cute Amn
Sep 24th 2014
 
 
Anonymous Thanks Amn! Anonymous
Sep 20th 2014
 
 
Amn Wow too good Amn
Sep 20th 2014
 
 
Anonymous Sure! Anonymous
Sep 18th 2014
 
 
mubashra Will accept my request or nt??????? Mubashra
Sep 12th 2014
 
 
Fatima Faryal your profile pic is looking so funky!! Fatima
Jul 9th 2014
 
 
Anonymous Yup, i'd love to be your friend Fatima<3 Anonymous
Jul 6th 2014
 
 
Fatima Thanks Faryal.I hope that we shall be good friends . Fatima
Jun 7th 2014
 
 
Anonymous Thanks guys! Anonymous
May 30th 2014
 
 
Ibrahim Outstanding........ Ibrahim
May 29th 2014
 
 
Ghazal Firdous That's Amazing Coco! <3 Ghazal Firdous
Apr 8th 2014
 
 
jandad Very nice Jandad
Feb 14th 2014
 
 
 Shiza I like this and i think that you love your mother verrrrrrrrrrrrrrrryyyyyyyyyyyy much Shiza
Jan 20th 2014
 
 
KHAN Very nice poem Khan
Jan 11th 2014
 
 
zanib Dont hurt your mothers they are like flowers who give their fragnant to us Zanib
Jan 10th 2014
 
 
Anonymous Hmmmm..... i mean 'to be the greatest' not 'the be the greatest' sorry! Anonymous
Jan 9th 2014
 
 
Anila It was okay hun.. =] Anila
Jan 7th 2014
 
 
Anonymous Thanks guys!!! that's what encourage me thanks alot! Anonymous
Jan 1st 2014
 
 
Hadia Vvvvvvvvvvvgood Hadia
Dec 30th 2014
 
 
minahil Gooooooooooooooooooooooood Minahil
Dec 29th 2013
 
 
minahil Too nice ......... i also love my mother more than i love myself Minahil
Dec 29th 2013
 
 

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