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Abdullah Khalid
Abdullah Khalid
Govt. Muslim
Haunted House
Published On Feb 12th 2010
Total Comments : 22
Total Views :  1205
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Rank 5 Out of 10

Every day in the middle of the night my door bell would ring. When I would open the door, a hand would come. In and go out by itself. One day I decided to follow the hand. So when it came the next day I followed it and it took me to a haunted house. I went inside and saw that it was full of different kinds of hands and they were all working. I saw an orange button and pressed it. The room changed into a computerised room and I saw two people who were controlling the hands. I took a hammer and hit them with it and took them to the police. I have always wanted to be a detective and the police told me that I would make a good one. When I went home and told my parents about the adventure, they were proud of me.

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Comments 22
Zainab Nice story Zainab
Dec 22nd 2017
Fajr Omair Nice Fajr Omair
Jul 4th 2017
azka Well I think its really creative nice job Azka
Jun 25th 2017
azka Well I think its really creative nice job Azka
Jun 25th 2017
azka Well I think its really creative nice job Azka
Jun 25th 2017
Fatima It is too shprt Fatima
Jun 20th 2017
Jan 21st 2016
Irza Urm.....the idea is nice but i'm sure you could add more details Irza
Dec 16th 2015
Gul Noor It was my hand that they were controlling. BTW, I'm more proud of you than your parents. Never follow handz. Gul Noor
Jul 17th 2014
Saadia The hammer hiting was totally funny Saadia
May 31st 2014
Tooba Nice Tooba
Apr 13th 2014
sulaima Y do every haunted story begin at midnight? Sulaima
Apr 5th 2014
Sara Different than the others.imaginative.good job Sara
Feb 21st 2014
mohammad aashir Is it real???????????????????????? Mohammad Aashir
Feb 7th 2014
mohammad aashir Its great Mohammad Aashir
Feb 5th 2014
KHAN ;-) Khan
Jan 22nd 2014
Wajiha Nice story (' . ') Wajiha
Jul 20th 2013
Laibah Is it a true story ?????? if it is not, then gud job Laibah
Jul 2nd 2013
Raniah Hehehe'funny sir Raniah
Jul 2nd 2012
Momina Gr8 Momina
Nov 16th 2011
Aamna I like your story Aamna
Dec 26th 2010

its nice

Apr 8th 2010

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