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Isha Rani
Isha Rani
The Smart School
Moldy's Fruit Cake
Published On Dec 19th 2013
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One day there was a teenager named Moldy. He was 18 years old. He loves to make sweets. His sweets were very popular in the whole city and there was another man who also makes sweets and his name was Subasa. He was always jealous from Moldy. Everyone come to Moldy’s shop but no one come to Subasa’s shop. Subasa’s shop was in front of Moldy’s shop. Subasa became more angry and jealous. One day, Subasa challenged Moldy in front of everyone that who will make the best cake. Moldy accepted the challenge and went back to work. He thought that which cake should I make? Suddenly an idea flashed in his mind of making a fruit cake. He started preparing the cake. He put some plain floor, sugar, eggs, butter, fruits and his secret ingredients and mixed them and put it into the oven. When it was ready, he put the cream at the end and said: ‘Done’ finally! I have made my cake. There, Subasa have also made the cake. It was chocolate cake. When people eat Subasa’s cake, they all said that it is very bitter. Then they ate Moldy’s cake and everyone admired his fruit cake. Moldy was very happy Subasa became more and more and more Jealous from moldy.
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Laibah Great job Laibah
Jan 1st 2014
 
 
Bushra Nice job but you have mistakes in tenses and it is flour not floor well do keep it up and good Bushra
Dec 25th 2013
 
 
KHAN Good Khan
Dec 25th 2013
 
 

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