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Aisha Abdul Quddus
Aisha Abdul Quddus
Bright Future Pakistani International School
The Surprising Dream
Published On Apr 29th 2011
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It was raining heavily. I was playing with my friends without thinking what will happen the next moment. I was riding my brand new bicycle. Suddenly I had a strange accident. I was riding my bike with full speed suddenly someone came in front of me. Instead of using my brakes I just turned aside and bumped against a pole. I soon became faint. When I woke up there was a great big rush around me. Different creatures gathered around me. I could hear lots of strange noises. I felt a little scared. Then I stood up and to my great astonishment there were all sort of goblins, witches, fairies, brownies and other fairytale creatures. The room was beautifully decorated with flowers and ribbons. I was very astonished to see them because all these creatures I have only read in books. Then these creatures lifted me and took me to a small carriage and carried me to a huge golden palace which was really a dear sight to me. When I went inside I was even more amazed to see glass tiles, golden bricks and other pretty decors. Soldiers were all around. Then they lifted me to a room which ought to be the throne room. In the room there were beautiful fairies. In between the fairies sat the King Queen. Suddenly the king said, "Do you know why I have brought you over here?" I answered, "No, but wait who are you"
The queen said, "Because we want you to make a promise that you will always be clean and keep your surrounding clean too and also remember your good manners". I said “Ok” , but first tell me who are you and As I was just completing the sentence I heard my mom's voice " Sana , Sana wake up it is time for school" Then I realized that it was just a dream but my best dream ever. And now I will obey what the dream said. Bye bye because I am getting late for school.
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Comments 26
Tooba Nice and my birthday is on 29 august only 1 day after you Tooba
Jun 15th 2014
Bismah Well written niceeeeeeeeeee. Bismah
Sep 25th 2013
FIZZA Reallyyyyyyyyyyy nice!!!!!!!!!!!.And please please accept my friend request I want to be your friend. Fizza
Jul 25th 2013
Ghumaisa Well written Ghumaisa
Dec 31st 2013
Aisha Thank you soo much Fatima and Sana for commenting on my story.... Aisha
Sep 7th 2012
Sana U are a gr8 writer Sana
Sep 6th 2012
Tooba OH :) Tooba
Sep 5th 2012
Aisha Because this is a fiction story...I made up the characters......and the story is written by a fictional character Sana... Aisha
Aug 8th 2012
Tooba Nice imagination but why did ur mom call u sana? Tooba
Aug 7th 2012
Emaan Wow, you are one heck of a story writer! Emaan
Jul 24th 2012
Rida I am very impressed!you are really good at imagining. Rida
Dec 28th 2011
Samrah ReallLly nYc:) Samrah
Sep 13th 2011
Bint waseem Nyc!!! Bint Waseem
Sep 8th 2011
l A L
Aug 27th 2011
Zainab Realllllly nyc!!!! Zainab
Aug 20th 2011
Aisha Bareera plz send sent me request once more as i didn't receive it.. Aisha
Aug 20th 2011
Bareera Seeeet...accept my friend request Bareera
Aug 18th 2011
Fatima Very nice story! Fatima
Aug 10th 2011
Itachi Nice story Aisha!!Please accept my friend request. Itachi
Jul 13th 2011
M@ry@m Hello!Are we only persons on My Screen?Dear I want u and your friends to be add inmy friend list.Please I would be Thankful to U. M@ry@m
Jul 13th 2011
Aleena Wow! Aleena
Jul 12th 2011
MaazaZafar Cool Maazazafar
Jul 11th 2011
MaazaZafar Cool Maazazafar
Jul 11th 2011
MaazaZafar Very nice yrrrr and plzz accept the request on my screen of mine Maazazafar
Jul 11th 2011
Aisha Thanx Aisha
Jul 9th 2011
Saniya You have a wonderful imagination Saniya
Jun 7th 2011

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