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Eraj Javed
Eraj Javed
St. Gregory's High School
A Magical Place That Never Exist
Published On Dec 19th 2013
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Walking on the unblemished path, searching for many different things, and exploring the whole world. All these things are beautiful in nature. But there is one place that is the most beautiful and that is a Magical Place!
I have never been to a magical place before. It becomes remarkable to see a magical place in which we could explore magical stuffs. But it never exists and I sometimes felt sad about it. I felt like relevance in myself about that place.
It was Monday morning; I was getting ready with my family for a tour to the Giethoorn, the most beautiful place in Holland, which was enclosed by water everywhere .It was a long drive until we reached there and originate a wonderful and suitable place for me and my family. We strolled around the place. I could feel the arctic breeze. We were accosted by our cousins. They showed us our rooms and we began to unpack our things. After that I went to explore the garden of my cousin’s house. It was incredible. I went to the steep hills near the valley and began to observe it. Then precipitously I saw a small cave from a distance of the valley. Just Because I love to discover many things, I thought why not we discover the cave. I walked pass the grass beneath my feet and went to the cave. I terraced inside the cave. I could see the webs of the spider scattered at the whole cave. I walked through it and saw some curtains dangling from above.”Tring, Tring”my cell phone began to rang .I precipitously became alarmed by the sudden noise. I quickly answered the call. My mother was at the phone, she scolded me for going out too late and told me to come back home. I wanted to stay and pull of the curtains of the cave, but my mother was a bit rigorous, and would scold me if I come late, that’s why I ran to all my way home. That night I couldn’t go to sleep .My head was full of thoughts about that cave I saw this morning. I decided that I will wake up early in the morning on the next day and I would depart to the cave.
The next day I woke up early in the morning unpredictedly.I wore my clothes, put on my boots and scampered to the cave. I went inside .Some bats suddenly hovered above me. At first I became timorous but then I re-gain my consciousness and went towards the curtains. When I pulled the curtains I saw the most astounding thing in my life. A beautiful garden filled with roses, forget-me-nots and many other flowers. There was a waterfall pouring down in the water. And the most astonishing thing was that I saw many fairies soaring above the sky .It was like the magical place that never existed before. I move forward a little and then I found myself walking in the garden. Some fairies came to me and told me that they were those fairies who grant wishes. I became really elated I was going to tell my wish to the fairy, when suddenly dark clouds directly above my head and thunder buffered down. I asked the fairies about the situation. They notified, me that long time ago there was a princess who was ruling this whole place but later an evil fairy came and try to take over the kingdom. But the princess refuses, so she took the princess away. The evil fairy name was gylon and she lives in the valley of cave hold. I thought it was a fake story but then I saw the evil fairy approaching towards me .She was having a staff in her hand. She was going to attack the fairy .I ran in a pursuit to where the fairies were standing and quickly came in front of them. “Stop gylon”I said to the evil fairy,” you are not to hurt the fairies”. “How dare you speak to me like that?”Said gylon and she wave her staff in front of me and began to cast a spell. I suddenly grab the staff and began wrench the staff from gylon, she refused it, suddenly I let go of the staff and it flew towards the fairies who promptly picked it up. I grab hold of the gylon and asked her to tell me where the princess was.”You will never find her “said gylon.I took the staff from the fairies and deceptively try to break it. “No don’t you ever do that” said gylon.”Tell me where the princess is “I said. Gylon was so furious so she cast the spell unpredictably and the princess appeared in front of us.Gylon was going to snatch her staff from me .I rapidly threw it on the ground. The fairies immediately picked a boulder and crushed the staff. We were so glad that the princess had came back. “Thank you “said the princess.”Your welcome your highness’ ‘I said .And she crowned me as the Queen of the valley. I was very glad and thanked her .I  said goodbye to the fairies and went home. As I got home I saw my parents packing things for their return .I was sad to leave the house, but since I had a great adventure I kept that as a secret.
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Comments 15
shinza I have accepted your request. Shinza
Nov 29th 2014
minahil Great Touch Minahil
Sep 29th 2014
Eraj Well Areesha I really don't know how,Sorry!!! :( Eraj
Sep 28th 2014
Areesha Nice story Eraj please tell me how to write or send something for magazine because I want to. Areesha
Jul 13th 2014
Eraj Thank you fatima,I think the magazine people wanted to high light the evil fairy and me!!!:) Eraj
Apr 1st 2014
Fatima This is a great story but I don't understand why the magazine ppl changed it a little in the magazine. Cuz It's AwEsOmE as it is. Fatima
Mar 31st 2014
Ashra Good wriiter Ashra
Feb 25th 2014
Atiya Please tell me how wouls i know that my poems or something is published in the vshine magazine?answer me on my poem pls Atiya
Feb 2nd 2014
Eraj Thanks Souson!!! Eraj
Jan 19th 2014
Eraj Thanks Souson!!! Eraj
Jan 19th 2014
Souson Congradulation!This story got published in the magazine. Souson
Jan 18th 2014
Eraj Thanks alot!!!! Eraj
Jan 5th 2014
Anusha Awesome loved it :) Anusha
Dec 29th 2013
Eraj Thanks!! Eraj
Dec 29th 2013
HAFSA Wowwwwwwwww!!!!!! Hafsa
Dec 25th 2013

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