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Sadia Malik
Sadia Malik
Left Alone
Published On Nov 4th 2013
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Rank 8 Out of 10
In school
On a hot day
Thinking of myself fool
As I may
Standing in cafeteria
In a long line
With all those bacteria
I was kind and fine
My hair blowing because of breeze
Thinking of taking something freeze
Singing sad song without a tone
I was about to take two ice-cones
With the thought of all my fake friends had gone
I suddenly realized I was left alone.
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Comments 13
 Sadia Ashadiya thanks, Eman yeah IK Sadia
Jan 18th 2014
 
 
Ashadiya Oooh!! thatz nyc :):):) Ashadiya
Dec 10th 2013
 
 
eman It is not amazing it is okay i dont think its bad Eman
Dec 1st 2013
 
 
Gul Noor Sooo sad but still :(.......yu have great talent in poetry 8-) Gul Noor
Nov 25th 2013
 
 
Ajwa Omg such an emotional poem .., feeling like crying Ajwa
Nov 22nd 2013
 
 
KHAN $ $ ---- Khan
Nov 18th 2013
 
 
TOOBA Nice poem Tooba
Nov 17th 2013
 
 
mathilda Amazingg!!!!!! :) Mathilda
Nov 11th 2013
 
 
 Sadia Thanks alot farya i wish i could Sadia
Nov 9th 2013
 
 
Anonymous You can really be a great poet! Anonymous
Nov 8th 2013
 
 
Maryam Ur welcome :-D Maryam
Nov 6th 2013
 
 
 Sadia Thanks Sadia
Nov 6th 2013
 
 
Maryam Gòody good Maryam
Nov 4th 2013
 
 

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