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Fatimah Latif
Fatimah Latif
A Coward!
Published On Nov 4th 2013
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The sensation,
The pain,
The tension,
Goes through my veins,
When a chance is near,
When I can be what I want to be,
But as I would have feared,
The feeling comes back to me,
Chances come and go,
Just like an arrow shot by a bow,
But the feeling comes back,
And I don’t let my passion show,
Deep inside,
I know what to do,
But my body doesn’t respond,
To the actions I want to do,
It’s as if it’s tightly bond,
With the world’s thickest glue,
No matter what I do,
The feeling comes back to me,
The feeling of cowardness,
That I wonder what would my future be,
I fear,
These chances might stop,
Just like falling of the last water drop,
And I won’t be able to do anything,
Because the shower would be over and there would be nothing.
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Comments 22
Munkashay You didn't? You mean you closed the panel or something?? Munkashay
Jan 11th 2014
fatimah I didnt post that comment over there, i hate it when vshine does this..uhhhhggg. anyways what i rly said was thanx soooooo muchy Munkashay.... Fatimah
Jan 5th 2014
Munkashay Aww, what could I do? I liked it sooo much!=D Munkashay
Jan 1st 2014
fatimah My Dear, the length doesnt matters as long as the theme is good.... Fatimah
Dec 28th 2013
Munkashay WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW!!!!!!! Munkashay
Dec 16th 2013
fatimah Awww thats sooo heart touching Ellina, thnx and btw iam 15 years old :) Fatimah
Dec 15th 2013
Ellina Fatimah I really luved ur poem ....... I really luv it U rocked !Fatimah wat was ur age? Ellina
Dec 14th 2013
fatimah Whoa hold on buddy, gotta hold to ur words.......thnak you soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much Ellina n every1 , every word jsut touched ma heart.. <3 :D ;) Fatimah
Dec 13th 2013
Ellina Fatimah U rock love it,Splendid,hands off,outstanding,Exellente,Voila,Magnificeeint Wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Ellina
Dec 12th 2013
Ashadiya AwEsOmE ....!!! :):) Ashadiya
Dec 10th 2013
ayesha Delightful and truthful poem , excellent effort shown !! :) Ayesha
Dec 7th 2013
Samia Good 1 Samia
Nov 26th 2013
Gul Noor Wh@ a poem!!!!!!!!8-) Gul Noor
Nov 25th 2013
ajwa Its gr888!!!! Ajwa
Nov 23rd 2013
KHAN Good :-) Khan
Nov 18th 2013
fatimah Thats all to u guyz support...... Fatimah
Nov 17th 2013
Maryam You always amazed me! Maryam
Nov 17th 2013
fatimah Aww, thnx Farya n Yousma...... Fatimah
Nov 11th 2013
Yousma Wow! never heard such an splendid poem! I got only few words "splendid my dear, keep it up" Yousma
Nov 8th 2013
Anonymous Awesome great!!! Anonymous
Nov 8th 2013
fatimah Thx Shumila...:D Fatimah
Nov 5th 2013
shumila It's wonderful...!! Shumila
Nov 5th 2013

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