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Bushra Idrees
Bushra Idrees
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Legend Of The Horrible Mermaid
Published On Nov 1st 2013
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A long time ago when this world was young there lived a very horrible and dreadful mermaid called Crash at the bottom of the deepest ocean. All the sweet and friendly mermaids were very scared of Crash because she was destroying the ocean and she even ate mermaids. While Crash even went to land at mid night on her flying carpet and she stole little babies and ate them. But there was one very brave mermaid called Ruby. Ruby had the power to make Crash loose and die. A battle was held in the biggest shell in the ocean that was fifty-four meter long and forty-seven meter wide. In the first and second round Crash won, but in the Ruby had killed Crash by making her crash in an enormous sea mountain with her flying carpet. But now when millions of years have passed people say that Crash's legend is haunting the people of the world at mid night on her flying carpet and she rules the Dead Sea.
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Comments 17
Wajeeha Masood I like it very much Wajeeha Masood
Apr 18th 2015
 
 
Wajeeha Masood It is good but plz don not comment on other status negatively Wajeeha Masood
Jan 25th 2015
 
 
Anusha Cool story keep it up Anusha
Dec 25th 2013
 
 
qasim Coooool!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Qasim
Dec 13th 2013
 
 
Areeba WoW!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!? Awesome...................... Areeba
Nov 15th 2013
 
 
Maryam Ur welcome Bushra Maryam
Nov 7th 2013
 
 
Bushra Thanhks alot maryam Bushra
Nov 6th 2013
 
 
Maryam The thing which I like the most is, your story has a proper end. many stories have 1 line end.like " villan was dead". but your short story has a complete end. Maryam
Nov 4th 2013
 
 
Bushra I am happy you all like it Bushra
Nov 3rd 2013
 
 
Gul Noor As i have said before dear ,bushra it's up to you;) Gul Noor
Nov 3rd 2013
 
 
ajwa Its okay if u do or u dont.....duznt make a difference really Ajwa
Nov 3rd 2013
 
 
Gul Noor Oh,good 'cause i really got scared;) Gul Noor
Nov 2nd 2013
 
 
Bushra Can any one tell me that should i use numbers in words like good 4 you 1derful or gr8 Bushra
Nov 2nd 2013
 
 
Bushra Thankyou and it is not at all true I made it up Bushra
Nov 2nd 2013
 
 
ajwa Awwwsum!!! Ajwa
Nov 2nd 2013
 
 
Gul Noor Is 't true???does she rule the dead sea or is just a rumour??? Gul Noor
Nov 2nd 2013
 
 
Gul Noor Is 't true???does she rule the dead sea or is just a rumour??? Gul Noor
Nov 2nd 2013
 
 

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