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Ellina Fatima
Ellina Fatima
Being Mature Takes Time
Published On Nov 1st 2013
Total Comments : 19
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Abdullah screamed "I am mature now mother I don't need your guidance". Abdullah's brother, Fahad said "Abdullah, being mature takes time" but, Abdullah boastfully gave his precious CD to his mischievous friend, Tahir. After a week or Tahir haven't returned hi CD. Abdullah asked him but, he gave a lame excuse that he is busy and don't have time for Abdullah. By hearing this Abdullah realized that he was cheated by his friend and lost his precious CD . He told her brother about this but Fahad refused and blamed at him. Now Abdullah was sitting alone on his bed and wept "Being mature really takes time". After that he heard a knocking on his door he opened and saw a surprise his CD has returned and her bought a new one he hugged his mom and said" Thanks mom I will never do anything like this after I am sorry".
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Comments 19
Ellina Yep m confused too! Urwa Ellina
Jun 2nd 2014
raveeha Urwa i am surprised dec 30 2014 has not come yet so how can u post a comment on that day???? i am really curios Raveeha
May 26th 2014
Ellina Urwa plz dont be soooooo negative!MADAM!!! Ellina
Jan 26th 2014
Affan Urwa look it the date of your say dec 30 2014 Affan
Jan 13th 2014
Urwa It's nice, but you need to work on your grammar... Please don't take any offence. Urwa
Dec 30th 2014
Anusha Nice, but the last lines are confusing Anusha
Dec 25th 2013
Manahil Cute 1 Manahil
Nov 25th 2013
Minahil Cute story :-) Minahil
Nov 10th 2013
Maryam That's so cute of you GUL NOOR dear Maryam
Nov 4th 2013
Gul Noor Ellina,it is such a good story i think you should "like" it 8-) Gul Noor
Nov 4th 2013
Gul Noor I meant to say Allina not Ellina,ooooooooops sorry.i'm telling u to say my name right n i'm saying your's wrong!!!i'm so silly!!!8-) Gul Noor
Nov 4th 2013
Gul Noor THNX!!!allina , but please don't call me gul either call me gul-noor OR noor,OK??? Gul Noor
Nov 4th 2013
Maryam Very very nyc story wid a gr8 moral. Maryam
Nov 3rd 2013
Ellina Thanx! Bushra , Ajwa , Hamzah and Gul Thanks for encouraging me! Ellina
Nov 3rd 2013
Bushra Nice one Bushra
Nov 2nd 2013
ajwa Yes,i like it Ajwa
Nov 2nd 2013
Hamzah Its good!! Hamzah
Nov 2nd 2013
Ellina Hope u all like it! Ellina
Nov 2nd 2013
Gul Noor Gud..... Gul Noor
Nov 2nd 2013

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