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Fatimah Latif
Fatimah Latif
Pakistan International School (pisj)
Fantasy And Nightmare
Published On Oct 31st 2013
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Have you ever wondered about mythical creatures? Pixies, fairies, mermaids, elves. What is the first picture that forms in your head when you think about them? I guess I know, and you do too. We see them as one of the most beautiful and magical fantasy beings. Unlike witches, ghosts, clowns and vampires. But have we ever tried to see the real picture, the real truth. And the answer to that is no, we haven’t. This might indeed sound odd to you but the fact is the opposite of what we hear, watch and read.
Here is a story of fairies in real world. The truth behind the lie. So, my dear friends lets go deeper into this story to find out about them.
There once lived an orphan girl named Suzie Viny. She was a very different girl with unique personality. Even though she was thirteen she believed in fantasies and happy endings. A life without any guardian or friend, she was quite into her own world which she believed was real. Each day her imagination would get the better of her and she would start to dream of meeting magical creatures. People tried to convince her that no such things exist but we can’t change a person now, can we? But Suzie was becoming more and more mentally attached to her imaginary world and she started to act weirdly towards her fellow orphans and caretakers. And no sooner they thought that she had gone mad so they decided to take her to IMDC, institute for mentally disordered children. Now poor Suzie had to leave tomorrow. But that night she lay in her bed thinking of running away from this orphanage then she won’t be placed with the people she didn’t belong with. She gave a second thought to this and made up her mind. In the darkness of the night she escaped past the gate guards. Unnoticed by anyone she fled into the forest, the only place she could think of to escape this world. She walked past the huge dark trees. The owls hooting, the crickets cricketing. But she wasn’t a bit afraid. The forest had been her world for mythical creatures. Silly of her for not taking any food or even a piece of cloth, she soon felt hungry and cold. Her feet shortly gave in and she had to sit down to rest. As she sat she noticed a really beautiful bush of blue berries, and they were dissimilar to those with ordinary bushes, just a further away from her. Sparkling like diamonds in the moonlight, they made her want to taste each one of them. As if every berry would have a distinctive taste and flavor. She ravenously ate with pleasure. And soon started to feel warm and drowsy so she lay under a well sheltered tree with a thick grown grass which made a perfect bed for her.
Sorry to interrupt my dear friends, but I guessed that you would be wondering about this beautiful bush of berries. Well this bush actually belonged to fairies. Let me tell you this once again that fairies are not very friendly creatures and this tempting shining bush was a trap. So let’s see what kind of trap this was and why.
When Suzie woke, it was still dark and she was no longer on her grass bed; instead she was being carried away in a net on a long stick like a pig being taken to be roasted by some really hideous creatures. Size like a child’s, wings like a torn sheet of black and had no bodily shape. Their hands differed in size as were their legs and it made them walk like a crippled person. She tried to free herself but it was helpless and she didn’t even scream for she knew she was far away from humans. As there came a gap in the trees, the moonlight shone on the faces of these creatures. And a scream escaped her mouth. Rotten and raw, it was hard to identify where their eyes or mouths were for there were some places sliced off of their faces and black skin dangling like saliva of a dog’s mouth.
 
You must have guessed that these were fairies. Why were they so ugly? Why didn’t these things have hands or legs of the same size? I hope you know the answer to the first question for I have already told you. As for the second, these creatures had no limbs of their own. You see, these fairies had set up many traps in these woods for humans to get attracted toward these traps. Why? For they ate humans. And not the whole of them. They would leave their limbs aside so they could use them later as their own. That’s why they differed in sizes. Now, not every magical creature has full strength of evilness some do have weaknesses also. Because of their different sized limbs they were quite weak but there were many of them so they usually caught their victims without any stress.
Now Suzie didn’t know any of this nor did she know that these were fairies, she thought of them as some outer space aliens. They carried the shaking girl to their hideout under the berry bush and into the darkness of the earth. And soon arrived at a place which looked as huge as a ball room but rather ugly and smelly with a huge fire in the middle. Creepy and rotten, they were everywhere. The fairies placed her down and started to untie her. During this process she didn’t make any efforts to escape for she was still in shock. She had a strangest feeling that the fire was for her to be cooked upon. Then one of these ugly creatures chattered like a squirrel to its fellows and they then moved in on Suzie and each fairy sat on each of her limbs. She didn’t knew what they were doing but had a hint of what was going to happen for one of the fairies had gone to pick up a really huge shinning piece of metal; a knife. She struggled hard, kicked and tried to raise herself but they were very heavy and it was all so useless. She cried and prayed and begged, but nothing happened. A sharp and stabbing pain was felt in her right arm. She screamed so loud that the fairy holding the knife and the others covered their ears. The excruciating pain started an angry fire inside her and she took her chances. She suddenly kicked out the fairies holding her legs then punched with her left hand with so much strength that a crunching sound came from her fingers. Ignoring both her pains she got to her feet and started to push every single one who tried to stop her. It was like a lion had awakened inside a mouse. As there were so many, she tried to run past them but one of the fairies bit into her leg with its stabbing fangs and almost broke her bone. Screaming savagely she ran like a gust of wind and no sooner reached the entrance and into the forest again. Her leg and arm bleeding badly, she ran as fast as she could. Her face full white from the loss of blood. A bright white light fell on her face and she fell down. Voices could be heard, someone started to pick her up and then it all vanished into the night.
She opened her eyes to see that she was in a white colored room. She thought herself to be in heaven. A really sweet voice was heard “How are you feeling my dear?” “Safe” was what she replied.
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fatimah Nope 9th board exams..:) Fatimah
Apr 3rd 2014
 
 
Arooba Ohhhh I am soso sorry for disturbing you you are giving exams of class 8 ? AND FROM MMMMMMMMMMEEEEE GOOD LUCK FOR YOUR EXAMS:)))))) BTW MY RESULT OF CLASS 8 will be announced on31st march plz pray for me :( Arooba
Mar 28th 2014
 
 
fatimah So sorry board exams going on , btw thnx :0 Fatimah
Mar 27th 2014
 
 
Arooba Fatimah why you are not replying? Every thing is okkk????? Arooba
Mar 24th 2014
 
 
Arooba Hi fatimah how are you?too long to talk you and good your fantasty and nightmare story really like it Arooba
Mar 5th 2014
 
 
Ayesha Hey, check out my new story! I really need some comments! Ayesha
Dec 29th 2013
 
 
aleena Tooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo looooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooong story but good Aleena
Dec 25th 2013
 
 
Anusha Nice Anusha
Dec 25th 2013
 
 
Anusha Nice Anusha
Dec 25th 2013
 
 
Ayesha Okay I wanna tell u guyz sumthing. Me and ayesha lakho are also friends on some other social website. At first, we didn't know that we were on VShine as well. but when we found out, we became even good friends, and we gave each other our Vshine passwords. So thats why you guyz have been recieving comments which are relly mine from ayesha lakho's account./....... I hope u dont think that I am a bad girl from now on. It is not my fault at all.and also, i didnt use ayesha lakho's account for the unkind comments, only the ones in which it looked like ayesha lakho was me!!! Ayesha
Dec 25th 2013
 
 
Muhammad What? Is Ayesha Lakho's account hacked by Ayesha Imran? Muhammad
Dec 23rd 2013
 
 
Irum Srry my acc is hacked Irum
Dec 22nd 2013
 
 
Irum We arrived 2day on karachi this morning at 12. We're staying at Marriott Hotel. I got jet lag. It's so annoying, right?? Irum
Dec 22nd 2013
 
 
Irum We arrived 2day on karachi this morning at 12. We're staying at Marriott Hotel. I got jet lag. It's so annoying, right?? Irum
Dec 22nd 2013
 
 
Munkashay All of you are right!The new stuff came, but not mine or Shumaim's were published! I think they are saving good stuff for new year, perhaps. Munkashay
Dec 21st 2013
 
 
Irum Uh-huh Irum
Dec 20th 2013
 
 
fatimah Lol Munkashay, u r absolutely right, girls will be girls :P, and Ayesha i would rly rly rly rly love to upload my recent stories but something is definitely wrong with Vshine, its been like this for a month now...:( Fatimah
Dec 15th 2013
 
 
Irum I KNOW< RIGHT!! Munkashay, Fatima Latif and Ayesha and Khadijah Imran, whats happening to yu is happening to me. I think VShine is malfunctioning. Like I love to read, I also love to write stories. I always had 1st position in Creatie Writing, and I just wanna share my stories , everyone loves them and they're veryy long.. But VShine is destroying our dreams*sighs dramatically* (btw, I'm just Kidding bout the last comment Irum
Dec 15th 2013
 
 
Munkashay I SENT DRAWINGS AND THE NEXT PART OF MY STORY, AND THEY DIDN'T UPLOAD IT!! Well, I wrote a novel myself, very long, its name is "Five Girls In Vampo" about five brave girls who go on an Island ruled by Vampires. "Girls can do anything," you know!;] Munkashay
Dec 15th 2013
 
 
Ayesha Wow, I LOVE that book. You really are a fan of Hollywood movies!! Can you add that story"Diverged" to VShine? Pweeeasssse!!(if they choose to upload itt, I uploaded a story about hasan and essa but they didnt even upload it:( Ayesha
Dec 14th 2013
 
 
fatimah Ya i saw its trailer and its just AmA-Zing, one more hero to add in the list of "Heroes of our generations" btw i wrote a book named "Diverged" but its totally different then the movie Divergent. Fatimah
Dec 13th 2013
 
 
Ayesha Hey Fatimah! Nowadays, I am reading a book called "Divergent".It is THE moost awesome book ever! And its movie is releasing in 2014 too. You heard of it? Ayesha
Dec 11th 2013
 
 
Munkashay Welcome pally! Munkashay
Dec 6th 2013
 
 
Maryam @Gul Noor, You are/might be right, I myself believe in fairies, but not the fantasy ones, but the ones told by GOD. Just like there are humans, angels, jinns, there are fairies too. I have heard true stories about them, and soon, I shall tell you guys the story (true) about fairies or pixies(whatever you want to call 'em) Maryam
Nov 18th 2013
 
 
fatimah Gotta use its some day, buddy. hehehe :P thnx Fatimah
Nov 17th 2013
 
 
Munkashay Hey Fatimah, there's a great brain you've got there pal! Munkashay
Nov 17th 2013
 
 
fatimah Thnx alot Ali, well i live in Saudi Arabia-Jeddah-Jammiah :) :D Fatimah
Nov 15th 2013
 
 
Ali Nice,Fatima I Appreciate your story keep up the good work by the way where do you live Ali
Nov 15th 2013
 
 
fatimah Hey guyz ma next story is coming up, maybe next week. so sat put..... Fatimah
Nov 11th 2013
 
 
Maryam Fatmah u r rite. Maryam
Nov 7th 2013
 
 
Ayesha Very nice fatima dear u such a telented person Ayesha
Nov 7th 2013
 
 
Aisha Hey Fatimah do you know a girl named Mahnoor Elahi in your school... Aisha
Nov 7th 2013
 
 
Gul Noor @shumaim,thanx 4 believing@fatima i am so sorry i can't stop myself but i'll sure try,oh,Heeyy!!!!"like" ur story n accept my request:) Gul Noor
Nov 7th 2013
 
 
fatimah Let me tell u this Gul Noor. the books we read and the movies (Hollywood or Bollywood) we watch r made by non-Muslims. now, wats the main aim of non-Muslims? its to destroy Muslim unity, to make us feel low like we dont belong anywhere, to make a fool of us. and according to my guess the r getting their wishes completed. these movies bout tooth fairies, Santa clause, easter bunny and talking toys is to make us believe in these stupid worthless things, to believe in a lie, they make these for its in there religion. but its not in our religion. have u ever read Prophet S.A.W talking about them? no we haven't cuz they aren't real. my point for this story was not to start believing in fairies it was actually a lesson to scare kids away from doing stupid stuff like running away, or believing in fantasies......i hope u get my point...and dont mind bout anything, didnt said this to hurt u, u r my friend so just showing u the way............. Fatimah
Nov 6th 2013
 
 
Shumaim Gul Noor is 100% right. My bro and sis once heard our toy dinosaur roar by itself...no one was pressing the button on it. Maybe it was due to the expansion and contraction that usually happen in every thing specially wood but the dinosaur was made up of plastic. Shumaim
Nov 6th 2013
 
 
Gul Noor Oh,from books and tv,WHy??? Gul Noor
Nov 6th 2013
 
 
fatimah @Gul Noor,may i ask, how did u started believing in these fantasies? like from books or movies? cuz things like these just dont pop into our heads not till we see them on tv or in books and stuff. Fatimah
Nov 5th 2013
 
 
Maryam Your welcome cute Maryam
Nov 5th 2013
 
 
Gul Noor Uummmmm.........OK......u guyzzzz are probably NEVER going to believe me but me n my bro actually HEARD my TOYS in the night. i thought it was my imagination if it were how come my bro have heard 't , so i don't think i'm going to stop believing.look , u may not believe me but i know what i heard so as you have said you did not believe it by heart but i do as i have seen (well heard) a magical thing.i know you are NOT believing me but it's the truth:) Gul Noor
Nov 4th 2013
 
 
Gul Noor OOOOHHHHHHHH, so she was in the the hospital .......... i mean she COULD also be in heavens as u may know the natural colour is also white B-) Gul Noor
Nov 4th 2013
 
 
Aisha Truly amazing story.the vocabulary and the sentence structure was great....Fatimah dear you have great talents within yourself and May Allah help you make more beneficial use of these talents...I wanna ask that you are in pisj right... Aisha
Nov 3rd 2013
 
 
fatimah Thnx u guys... :D :D :D Fatimah
Nov 3rd 2013
 
 
fatimah Look, Gul Noor. ppl believe in what they see and by ppl i mean me too. now, i have never in my life seen a fairy. in my eyes its just a fictional character. if i did believe in them that meant i started believing in peter pan , tinker bell, the little mermaid; they are just adventures fantasy stories, thats all. but my point is , it depends on a person, how much they believe in. we cant change a person, thats true as u must have heard this quote "once a liar always a liar" but it doesnt mean we shouldnt try. i myself used to believe in this stuff until i reached teenage-hood and thats when i changed for i didnt truly believed by heart. so it depends. oh and btw she is in a hospital in the end, the white room explains it. :) Fatimah
Nov 3rd 2013
 
 
Gul Noor As u have said"you can't change a person now" soooo no 1 can stop me frm believing in 'em, although sometimes i want to stop myself but i guess thier in my head,soooo nothin' i can do 'bout it,huh??? Gul Noor
Nov 2nd 2013
 
 
Gul Noor As u have said"you can't change a person now" soooo no 1 can stop me frm believing in 'em, although sometimes i want to stop myself but i guess thier in my head,soooo nothin' i can do 'bout it,huh??? Gul Noor
Nov 2nd 2013
 
 
ajwa Inspiring...yeah Ajwa
Nov 2nd 2013
 
 
Gul Noor Very nice but until today i thought fairys were rather nice!!!i dont think all of them are bad and ugly,do you???anyways i do believe in fairys.and wat place was she in ?(in the end) Gul Noor
Nov 1st 2013
 
 
Sidra Love it! Sidra
Nov 1st 2013
 
 
fatimah The actual name of this story is Fantasy+Nightmare as in combined but they changed it. NOTE: this story of fairies and such being is of course not true, so guys dont go believing that i started believing in this stuff its just a story and so enjoy :D :) Fatimah
Oct 31st 2013
 
 
Maryam Gr8 story Maryam
Oct 31st 2013
 
 

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