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Rafia Ahmed
Rafia Ahmed
Usman Public School
Sunrise
Published On Oct 31st 2013
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Today I saw a sunrise ...
Which made me feel wise ...
The wind whispered in my ear ...
Chirping of birds I heard ...
I stood and stared very still ...
The sun rising behind a hill ...
That moment grabbed my eyes ...
The surrounding made me feel nice ...
I couldn’t just blink my eye ...
Everything was that much nice ...
But, then I closed my eyes ...
And opened them after a while ...
I found myself in room of mine ...
And realized that a dream made me shine ...

 

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Comments 66
Hiba Yeah , i understand Maryam dear . hows life in Jubail? Hiba
Mar 9th 2014
 
 
Maryam Surely okay. About late comments i wrote reason in my story's part 1 Maryam
Mar 6th 2014
 
 
Maryam Surely okay. About late comments i wrote reason in my story's part 1 Maryam
Mar 6th 2014
 
 
Hiba Where R u Maryam ? Everything ok? I hope for the best :) Hiba
Feb 7th 2014
 
 
Hiba I wish i could lower down my burden , but i cant :(. hows life ? Hiba
Jan 23rd 2014
 
 
Maryam I know study's load is too much. Maryam
Jan 17th 2014
 
 
Hiba Yaar , Im soo sorry for my late replies :(. I will try to reply u as soon as possible. Yaar study load is soo much :(. Hiba
Jan 16th 2014
 
 
Maryam Aap ka keh dena hi kafi hai. bus reply jaldi kiya karo. Maryam
Jan 13th 2014
 
 
Hiba Yaar that s so sweet of u Maryam , i really dont know how to repay u back for this Hiba
Jan 12th 2014
 
 
Zainab Amazing Zainab
Jan 11th 2014
 
 
Maryam Aaj to mein srif aap k liye online aai hoon. Maryam
Jan 6th 2014
 
 
Hiba So ur vacations havent started yet? and yaar abhi to sirf half centuary hoi hai. kets quickly make it a full one :D. But Rafia Ghaib ho gayi :( Hiba
Dec 29th 2013
 
 
nazish 2 gud rafia sis n plzzzzz comment on my stuff 2. Nazish
Dec 24th 2013
 
 
Maryam CENTURY!!! Maryam
Dec 22nd 2013
 
 
Maryam I wish I could per vacations to millien. pata nahi Pakistan aayein gay ya nahi. Maryam
Dec 22nd 2013
 
 
Hiba U r the most welcome maryam :) yaar karachi aajao vacations main :D . we will have fun together :) and wht are ur plans for ur vacations? :) Hiba
Dec 22nd 2013
 
 
Maryam My tests are over so i am also free. and thank you. Maryam
Dec 19th 2013
 
 
Hiba Maryam this is especially for u. :"A BEST FRIEND IS LIKE A FOUR LEAF CLOVER, HARD TO FIND , LUCKY TO HAVE " -Sarah Parker Hiba
Dec 17th 2013
 
 
Hiba Maybe or Rafia kay exams ho raha hoon gay . today was my last exam . immmmmm free hehheh. which exams are left? Hiba
Dec 17th 2013
 
 
Maryam You can't find a friend who is........................................................ 95% Talented..... 96% Funny..... 98% Loving... 99% Intelligent...... and 100% Sweet because the one and only remaining is mine! Maryam
Dec 16th 2013
 
 
Maryam Mere to test ho rahe hain. Tomorrow is 2nd last and then last. phir mein FREE. whats up Hiba? Rafia to aadhe rastay mein chor kar chali gai hai. ho sakta hai is baar UAE chali gai ho. Maryam
Dec 16th 2013
 
 
Hiba Hahahhahahahaha but we'll help u make a centuary :D. whats going on theses days , Maryam and Rafia? Hiba
Dec 13th 2013
 
 
Maryam No problem with it but I am not greedy for the comments dearest Rafia and Hiba! Maryam
Dec 12th 2013
 
 
Rafia Yeah! so what do u say about it maryam? :) Rafia
Dec 11th 2013
 
 
Hiba Hahahaha rafia , im sure maryam wont mind :) shes a really nice person just like u :) Hiba
Dec 10th 2013
 
 
Rafia I do want to join u both but on maryam's stuff (if maryam dont mind) ... well em helping u maryam dear to have tons of comments :)) tell me where i should come to comment?? Rafia
Dec 9th 2013
 
 
Hiba I'm sooo sorry Maryam dear but yes I will comment there IA. And my dear , I don't comment that much on other stuff . I only comment on the stuff I am talking with some one . And about Lahore it's been 5 yrs since I have been there., though my chacha lives there but we dont go there . U come to khi then we will go to Dolmen City mall , Port Grand , Nueplex and so many other places. Hiba
Dec 7th 2013
 
 
Maryam Hiba dear Kiya mera stuff is kabil nahi k aap comment karo! :(( Maryam
Dec 6th 2013
 
 
Maryam Y not? ur most welcome. so u can come to work from today! ;)) I wish I could But y don't come to Lahore. We both will visit Zoo and museum. It would be great fun! Maryam
Dec 6th 2013
 
 
Hiba Awww that's so sweet of u Maryam and don't u come to Karachi ? And yeah Rafia why not? U can surely join us. Maryam and I would love to have u within our chat. I an sure you would love it Maryam, wouldnt u? I can't wait till u join us Rafia:) Hiba
Dec 6th 2013
 
 
Rafia Hi! well dear maryam nd hiba , having a great time :) can i join both of u????? :))) Rafia
Dec 6th 2013
 
 
Maryam Last time I visited in 2012 and I went to Lahore. (*__*). I find you more friendly than I thought. great keep going on! Maryam
Dec 6th 2013
 
 
Hiba So Maryam dear, how often do u visit Pakistan ? And which city do u go to? Hiba
Dec 6th 2013
 
 
Maryam Oh! but orange marinda is best. I know three flavors, Strawberry, Citrus and my fav orange marinda. my fav food is also biryani and i also like kofta. Maryam
Dec 5th 2013
 
 
Hiba In Pakistan we only get the orange one. and dear I don't like any fruits. but yes I do eat apples and my mom makes me fresh home made orange juice daily. so whats ur fav food? Hiba
Dec 5th 2013
 
 
Maryam Same here dear. I like miranda more especially the orange one. my fav fruit is Orange, Whats your fav fruit? Maryam
Dec 1st 2013
 
 
Hiba Thanks my dear and biryani is my fav food and miranda or Fanta my fav drinks . What about u? Hiba
Nov 30th 2013
 
 
Maryam Nothing much good. I will pray for you. I am living in Saudia for may years. what is your fav food and drink? Maryam
Nov 29th 2013
 
 
Hiba So what's going on these days ?? Please pray for me , my exams are starting on Monday. IA. Since how many years are u living in Saudia ? Hiba
Nov 28th 2013
 
 
Maryam Yes Saudia is flooded but Jubail is not. so we travel easily. Riyadh side is flooded a lot. :(( Maryam
Nov 24th 2013
 
 
Hiba Dear Azka I will pray for u as well. and Maryam I don't know the the direction either . :p nd I have heard that Saudia is all flooded. how do u travel? Hiba
Nov 23rd 2013
 
 
Maryam I live in Jubail. It is a small Industrial and has Arabian sea on East, West, North or South (I don't know the direction). I had to wait for a year for this rain. I am missing my school alot because I can enjoy this type weather conditions in school the best way wid friends. AND SURE I WILL PRAY FOR YOU AZKA. Maryam
Nov 20th 2013
 
 
Azka Sub mere liay dua mangain k mein 1st aa jaon with full marks.......and ill do it 4 u........every body pray 4 meeeeeeee to cum 1st 1st n 1st........plllllllzzzzzz....specially pray that i get full in literature......... Azka
Nov 20th 2013
 
 
Hiba AaH , I love holidays . Where in Saudia do u live dear ?? We don't have any rains in this month in Karachi .:(( Hiba
Nov 20th 2013
 
 
Maryam Thank you so much Hiba its the story of the week. I went to school on Sunday (as our week starts on Sunday). Half passed and Saudi health ministry gave the rest of the day off due to rain and thunderstorm. the next day Monday was also off.but on rain.today on Tuesday its raining. And I think Wednesday is also going to be off. Maryam
Nov 19th 2013
 
 
Hiba That's great Maryam dear , congratz for securing 2nd position and keep on working this hard :))))). Love u <33. aur sonao Hiba
Nov 18th 2013
 
 
Maryam NO NEED OF SORRY I also got so little time free. Ayesha is 12 years old. I am fine. my send ups result had been announced and i stood second and got A+. Maryam
Nov 17th 2013
 
 
Areeba First of all I am very very very very very sorry my dear. I mean I replied very late Maryam dear, so I am very sorry. Please forgive me dear :) You know actually with the exams right round the corner, I find it very hard to spend time on vshine. And from the past week I barely visited it :) Umm so Maryam dear, how are you? Alhumdulilah, I am fine! Jazakallah for all your great wishes :) Once again I am very very sorry dear :) Hope you understand :) Areeba
Nov 17th 2013
 
 
Hiba Sorry for a late reply Maryam dear but I sgree with u about the small bag for exams wala part but I hate the studying wala part. how old is Ayesha?? sorry again dear :))) Hiba
Nov 16th 2013
 
 
Maryam Why not its my pleasure to be your friend. I am lucky to have friends like you all. I am fine. How are you? I hope you are reading this comment in best of your health. Maryam
Nov 11th 2013
 
 
Areeba Walaikum A' Salam! Dear Maryam. I am Hiba Ahmed's cousin. Would you u like to become friends with me dear? How are you? Hope that all is fine! Areeba
Nov 11th 2013
 
 
Maryam No need of sorry Hiba you are my bestest friend. I am 13 years old. Ayesha Aamir is my younger sister. I also got 92 to 95% in exams. I love to attend exams as we only had carry a small bag. Okay take care and Say my Salaam to Areeba. Maryam
Nov 10th 2013
 
 
Hiba Oh are u are the most welcome dear Rafia. Well my dear Maryam good that u have started studying and get really good grades. well I hate to read and I am also the high achievers of my class. I always get my progress in 90s. I love to study and watch criket. Areeba Ahmed is my cousin. and I think that's all. I am 14 yrs old. how old re u dear??????. sorry for my late replies. Hiba
Nov 9th 2013
 
 
Maryam Hiba dear where are you??????!!!!! Maryam
Nov 8th 2013
 
 
Rafia Oh! thnkuu dear areeba nd hiba :)))))) Rafia
Nov 6th 2013
 
 
Maryam I am not like the most of girls in my age I am totally different. Well in studies I'm not bad i improved my studies since class 7. From 7 I got 600+ marks every term (out of 650). I love to read especially Goosebumps really great stories they are. Nowadays I am free so daily on computer, completing my bio practical and above all watching Pakistan's matches.........! :) :) so what about u?????? Maryam
Nov 6th 2013
 
 
Hiba I understand Maryam dear and its ok , no need of saying sorry again and again dear. please introduce yourself to mee. and Rafia dear i love u more than anything in the whole universe :)))) Hiba
Nov 6th 2013
 
 
Rafia I LOVE U THE MOST DEAR HIBA :):) Rafia
Nov 5th 2013
 
 
Maryam Dear Hiba meri ammi ne allow nahi kia sorry mein email nahi kar sakti :( :( I hope you will understand that. Sorry once again dear. Maryam
Nov 4th 2013
 
 
Hiba Love u even more Rafia and sure Maryam , why not. U are free to email me . My email address is amnakhan21@hotmail.com. It's beter to talk on email than vshine . I am waiting for ur email . Its more private . Hiba
Nov 4th 2013
 
 
Maryam Hiba kiya app meri friend bano gi best wali? Maryam
Nov 3rd 2013
 
 
Areeba Rafia my dear friend, I simply adore your work like anything! There is no doubt that you are a born-writer! May you continue this hard work which is truly amazing! But dear when will u mail me & hiba? Please mail us anytime u are free! I am just toooooooooo desperate 4 a reply from my dearest gem or pearl! just I hope I get one soon because I love u soooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much honey! May u always stay happy (Ameen) Areeba
Nov 3rd 2013
 
 
Rafia Awwww...... thatz really shweet of u dear :))) love u sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much :))) Rafia
Nov 3rd 2013
 
 
Hiba My dear Rafia , I find it my responsibility to help and support my friends. Love u soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much dear. Hiba
Nov 2nd 2013
 
 
Rafia Aww... u r the best my sister :) always first one to support me :)) love u sooo much :)))) Rafia
Nov 2nd 2013
 
 
Hiba Love it. indeed u are my writer sister :) Hiba
Nov 1st 2013
 
 

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