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Munkashay Hyuuga
Munkashay Hyuuga
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Best Halloween Ever
Published On Oct 31st 2013
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"Today at school was boring, mom." Jane said to her mother."Why? Weren't kids talking about Halloween?" asked her mom, chopping tomatoes. Jane shook her head. "No decorations, either. I think this is going to be the worst Halloween ever" she replied." Don't jump to conclusions, dear. I'm sure things will get better." Comforted her mom. Jane gave her a hug."Thanks, mom." she said.
At night, Jane was writing her diary, that, she heard a voice. A scream, maybe. "Huh? I thought I heard something" she thought after looking out her window. Nothing was there. Quite suddenly, some ape-like creature ran by, as fast as a cheetah. Jane was so startled that she screamed and fell on her bed. Her father came in."Wh-what happened, dear? Why'd you scream?" he asked, confused." I saw a terrible dream, that's all." Jane lied.
The next day, it was Sunday, so she went to buy some cameras with her dog, Timothy. "I'm sure this is a prank." she thought on her way back. She remembered the last year's trick the boys had played on her. Suddenly, the scream and howl came again she had heard the night before. Her heart started beating fast. She looked around. No one. Even Timmy didn't care. He was busy sniffing the dustbin. Then, quite suddenly he started to growl."What is it boy? Why are you growling?" Jane asked, scared. Suddenly, the ape-like creature ran by, so fast that Jane could hardly see it. Timmy started barking. "Come on Tim! Hurry! L-Let's g-go Home!" she shouted. Quickly, they ran home.
The next day, she put the cameras in her tree house, garden and front door."I'll soon find out who's doing this." she thought. In the evening, something did come. It had an Ape-like structure, jet black fur, HUGE teeth and claws, and huge, white eyes.
So, What do you think it was?
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Comments 88
Munkashay Awwh- Thanks, Kashaf! Munkashay
Dec 25th 2014
 
 
kashaf Nice one buddy:D Kashaf
Dec 19th 2014
 
 
Munkashay Thanks!! Munkashay
Oct 20th 2014
 
 
zarmala WHAT IS IT?A BEAR......GR8 STORY ANYWAY. Zarmala
Oct 16th 2014
 
 
Munkashay Well, thanks Dua, and sorry for replying SOOOO late! Munkashay
Sep 17th 2014
 
 
Shumaim Hey Mahnoor, we are from Dera but we don't know saraiki....I can speak a very little but my dad,grandpa,grandma...many other relative know Saraiki! Shumaim
Feb 7th 2014
 
 
Munkashay Thanks Dua, and yes, Mahnoor, but I don't know how to speak in Saraiki.;D Munkashay
Feb 7th 2014
 
 
Mahnoor Munkashay please read my new stories...please... By the way are u from dera ismail khan and r u saraiki? Mahnoor
Feb 4th 2014
 
 
dua I like it Dua
Jan 23rd 2014
 
 
Ayesha Sure, Munkashay. Ayesha
Jan 22nd 2014
 
 
Munkashay Yes, my name is Turkish. Thanks, for counting me as your BF, Maryam, guys, actually my dad has forbidden us for using ANY electrical equipment except TV until the exams are over, so I can't chat with you guys. Sorry for that, hope you understood.(Reply but don't wait for my answer, OK?) Munkashay
Jan 20th 2014
 
 
Ayesha Come ONNNN!! Answer me, yaar!! I am really in love with Turkish things. Ayesha
Jan 20th 2014
 
 
Ayesha Hey Munkashay, your name is Turkish right? WOW! I absolutely LOVE Turkish things, whether it be rings, necklaces, trinkets, clothes, houses , names , history(I know the history part is boring, but still..), e.t.c... Are you of Turkish background? Ayesha
Jan 15th 2014
 
 
hibba Heya ... same here i also LUV chatting :) wht r u guys talkin abt i dont understand lol?? Hibba
Jan 13th 2014
 
 
Maryam @ shumiam: Munkashay ur sis. @shuney: i also love chatting. Maryam
Jan 11th 2014
 
 
Munkashay Thanks Hibba, and Yes! I love chatting, Maryam!! Munkashay
Jan 11th 2014
 
 
Shumaim Who???? Shumaim
Jan 10th 2014
 
 
Maryam Now l am gonna chat wid u here n help u to make century. 1 more thing i got another bff Maryam
Jan 9th 2014
 
 
hibba I love it itss too gud :) keep it up :) Hibba
Jan 8th 2014
 
 
Munkashay Heh. Advertiser. Just joking, I checked it and commented too! =) Munkashay
Jan 2nd 2014
 
 
Ayesha Hey, check out my new story! I really need some comments! Ayesha
Dec 29th 2013
 
 
Munkashay ;D Munkashay
Dec 26th 2013
 
 
Irum :) Irum
Dec 19th 2013
 
 
Munkashay What is the need of thanks, my friend? Munkashay
Dec 16th 2013
 
 
Irum Thank you Irum
Dec 15th 2013
 
 
Munkashay Oh, you are REALLY MY BESTEST BUDDY! LOVE YA!! Munkashay
Dec 14th 2013
 
 
Munkashay I am a HUGE one, Maryam! =) Munkashay
Dec 14th 2013
 
 
Irum Okay, whatever you say:) Irum
Dec 14th 2013
 
 
Munkashay Yup, we don't. But Halloween is not a bad thing, it is used to scare away kids' fear. :) Munkashay
Dec 13th 2013
 
 
Maryam I am also a patriot. Maryam
Dec 13th 2013
 
 
Irum Nice, but it's Halloween(more like haram-0-ween). Anyways, We are Muslims and we dont celebrate Halloween Irum
Dec 12th 2013
 
 
Irum Nice, but it's Halloween(more like haram-0-ween). Anyways, We are Muslims and we dont celebrate Halloween Irum
Dec 12th 2013
 
 
Munkashay Yup, I am a Huge patriot of Pakistan. Munkashay
Dec 12th 2013
 
 
Maryam I love PAKISTAN so much but I am living in Saudi Arabia. Maryam
Dec 12th 2013
 
 
Munkashay WHY? Why do we live in Pakistan and you don't? :( I mean, I love Pakistan dearly, but you should be there too! Munkashay
Dec 11th 2013
 
 
Munkashay In which city do you live? Munkashay
Dec 10th 2013
 
 
Maryam U r in Pakistan and I'm not. So how? Maryam
Dec 8th 2013
 
 
Shumaim Why?? :( Shumaim
Dec 8th 2013
 
 
Maryam I am coming! oh no I can't :(((((( Maryam
Dec 6th 2013
 
 
Munkashay Gully, It is no problem for me... And if ya want my address, Here; Hayat Ullah Street, house no. 1611/C, Dera Ismail Khan, KPK. Munkashay
Dec 6th 2013
 
 
Gul Noor Dear raveeha!!i'll be sure to pray 4 uuuuuuu!!!:) Gul Noor
Dec 5th 2013
 
 
Shumaim I will pray 4 u Raveeha. Shumaim
Dec 5th 2013
 
 
raveeha AMAZING STORY,and guyz plzzzzzz,plzzzzzzz pray for me ,my exams r starting soon. Raveeha
Dec 2nd 2013
 
 
Gul Noor Munkashay,im soooo happy to see my name on yer 'bout me;)hhhhhuuuurrrrrrrrraaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaayyyyyyyyyyy!!!!! Gul Noor
Nov 29th 2013
 
 
Gul Noor Munkashay,u live where???? Gul Noor
Nov 29th 2013
 
 
Gul Noor What's funny???u callin me pal , of course............not used to it , pal hehehehehe Gul Noor
Nov 29th 2013
 
 
Munkashay What's funny, pal? :) Munkashay
Nov 28th 2013
 
 
Munkashay What's funny, pal? :) Munkashay
Nov 28th 2013
 
 
Gul Noor Thanx!! "pal" hehehehehe.......u r the first to call me that.....funny:) Gul Noor
Nov 26th 2013
 
 
Munkashay No worries, pal. Munkashay
Nov 26th 2013
 
 
Gul Noor Thanxxx , shumy;) Gul Noor
Nov 25th 2013
 
 
Shumaim No its Okay Gul Noor Shumaim
Nov 25th 2013
 
 
Gul Noor Im sorry munkashay n shumaim :( i wouldn't have said that if i knew he was ur fav character,soooo sorry:( :( :( Gul Noor
Nov 24th 2013
 
 
KHAN Good Khan
Nov 18th 2013
 
 
Munkashay And yeah, I've written the next part, wait for the approval! Munkashay
Nov 17th 2013
 
 
Munkashay Awwwww... Gul Noor don't say that.... He's my fav. character (:>.... I know it doesn't suit my nature, but if you see HIS nature, well, you'll say,"My God, he is much nicer than Munkashay herself!" You know, don't judge a book by its cover. P.S; Please don't mind! Munkashay
Nov 17th 2013
 
 
Shumaim Hey, it's the pic of Neji Hyuga, our favorite character in Naruto, yeah you are right it doesn't suits Munkashay but still, it's a very important pic for her and me. Shumaim
Nov 17th 2013
 
 
Gul Noor Munkashay, i really hope you don't mind but maybe u should change ur DP. as it does not suit you Gul Noor
Nov 16th 2013
 
 
Maryam I mean to say half story on v shine magazine and half story of time magazine. both are magazines. Munkashay ki mehnat hai to usi profile per achi lagay gi. Maryam
Nov 10th 2013
 
 
Gul Noor Well, i'll try to draw but i think u guyzzz (either one of you )shud rite story;) Gul Noor
Nov 10th 2013
 
 
Shumaim Don't worry! Good news! She is gonna write the next part! This time I am 100% sure, you can ask her! Shumaim
Nov 10th 2013
 
 
Shumaim 'half on times', what does that mean? BTW from my profile I meant my screen. Shumaim
Nov 9th 2013
 
 
Maryam no doubt it is a good idea but half story on v shine and half on times.!!!!!! Maryam
Nov 8th 2013
 
 
Shumaim Don't you worry guys...if she don't write the next part...then I will and publish it on my profile. What do you think? Shumaim
Nov 8th 2013
 
 
Maryam Yeah gul noor u r rite mere dimagh mein kyun nahi aya. Well Munkashay dear i want you to just tell what the creature was it doesn't matter u write the next part or not. it depends on you. Maryam
Nov 7th 2013
 
 
Ayesha Good one em nice one^ | ^ \ / Ayesha
Nov 7th 2013
 
 
Munkashay Hey Gul Noor, You could draw the creature I mentioned, post it on Vshine, then I could say what it was. And dol you guys want me to write the next part? Munkashay
Nov 7th 2013
 
 
Gul Noor Uuummmmm,maryam there is a lot to write eg.wat the ape thingy was and how wud she get rid of it ??? so i think shumaim is right;) Gul Noor
Nov 7th 2013
 
 
Maryam But i hope Munkashay would be correct because there is nothing left to write. Maryam
Nov 6th 2013
 
 
Maryam Agree wid GUL NOOR Maryam
Nov 6th 2013
 
 
Gul Noor Munkashay,shumaim either 1 of you guyzzzz is lying sooo EXcuSE mE(angry )tell me the truth!!!!is it the end or NOT???!!! Gul Noor
Nov 6th 2013
 
 
Gul Noor Don't tell meeeeeeeeee!!!is it?????????????8-( i just can't think about wat the thingy was??? Gul Noor
Nov 6th 2013
 
 
Munkashay No no no, Maimbaji, you troublemaker! She's lying, I m not going to write the next part, but if I see positive comments, Maybe I'll write it! Munkashay
Nov 6th 2013
 
 
Maryam My pleasure dear. if ur sister is correct then i am waiting to know what happened next. if she is wrong then very bad. Ache bachay jhoot nahi boltay! :) :) Maryam
Nov 6th 2013
 
 
Shumaim She is soon going to write the 2nd part Shumaim
Nov 6th 2013
 
 
Munkashay THANKYOU VERY MUCH Maryam! Yes khadijah I've read the Famous Five and I simply looooove it! Gul Noor, think what the thing can be because this is the end of the story! HEEE HEEE HEE Munkashay
Nov 6th 2013
 
 
Gul Noor Khadija,i don't read "the famous 5" i read "The Secret 7" also of enid blyton:) Gul Noor
Nov 6th 2013
 
 
Gul Noor Aren't u guyzzz eager to know what was the "ape thingy"??? Gul Noor
Nov 6th 2013
 
 
Maryam Good story MUNKASHAY dear. KEEP IT UP!!!!! Maryam
Nov 5th 2013
 
 
Gul Noor MUnkasHAy,tell us wat the thing was??? Gul Noor
Nov 4th 2013
 
 
Khadijah Have you read 'The Famous Five'? Khadijah
Nov 3rd 2013
 
 
unaiza Is this story over Unaiza
Nov 3rd 2013
 
 
Munkashay Thanks Guys! Munkashay
Nov 3rd 2013
 
 
Gul Noor Plllzzzzzzzzzzz tell me???? Gul Noor
Nov 3rd 2013
 
 
Bushra Nice one you are great at stories Bushra
Nov 2nd 2013
 
 
ajwa Gud! Ajwa
Nov 2nd 2013
 
 
Gul Noor WAIT!!!its her imagination!!! Gul Noor
Nov 2nd 2013
 
 
Gul Noor I dunno???maybe some magical creature,i guess........... Gul Noor
Nov 1st 2013
 
 

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