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Zaina Ahmad
Zaina Ahmad
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A Tale Of Tea House
Published On Nov 5th 2013
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November 2013
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The fan had been rotating
for an hour or so
it made creaking noises
which would continuously grow
the chair swung
As I tapped my feet
on one of its leg
which had not been cleaned
the dusty brown table
Looked a hundred years old
the nails spring out
from each of its fold
the red table cloth
Diagonally lay
had not been set
for more than a day
the table next to me
was even worse
Children had spilled tea
on table and mothers purse
finally came the moment
i had been waiting for
my cup of tea arrived
that i had waited for.
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Comments 18
zaina It was a stationery set Zaina
Jan 30th 2014
 
 
hibba Ohh congratzz wht was it??? Hibba
Jan 18th 2014
 
 
zaina I got the gift hibba and thnku sheeza Zaina
Jan 18th 2014
 
 
InNoXent Very very good keep it up girl !!!!!! Innoxent
Jan 15th 2014
 
 
hibba Ohh!!! did u get a mail or something frm admin abt it ??? Hibba
Jan 13th 2014
 
 
zaina Umm not yet hibba Zaina
Jan 8th 2014
 
 
hibba So... u got the gift hamper??? congratzz Hibba
Jan 7th 2014
 
 
zaina Thnku Zaina
Jan 4th 2014
 
 
hibba Nice poem and keep it up :) congratz for the winner:) plzz accept mr frnd request:) Hibba
Jan 3rd 2014
 
 
zaina Thnku all Zaina
Jan 1st 2014
 
 
Sarah It's coooooool!!!! Sarah
Dec 28th 2013
 
 
Hania Well written ! Keep it up ! Hania
Dec 28th 2013
 
 
hania I like this sooooooooooo much congratz Hania
Dec 27th 2013
 
 
ajwa Inspiring......n congrats Ajwa
Dec 26th 2013
 
 
Hiba Lovely poem Zaina , Congratz for being the winner ,u truly deserved it. :D Hiba
Dec 22nd 2013
 
 
Areeba Oh sorry about the misunderstanding dear. So would you mind introducing yourself to me? We would be best friends dear. Just introduce yourself :) Areeba
Dec 22nd 2013
 
 
zaina You are already my friend areeba thnxx a lot <3 Zaina
Dec 21st 2013
 
 
Areeba Tremendous effort dear :) Congratz for being the winner :) Love your poem truly :) Please send me a friend request dear :) I would love to be your friend :) Areeba
Dec 21st 2013
 
 

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