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Sana Mushtaq
Sana Mushtaq
Army Public School Hyderabad Cantt
A Strange World
Published On Oct 23rd 2013
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October 2013
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One day my mother and I decided to go to park. My mother cooked some sandwiches and packed them in a basket. When we reached the park, everyone was playing, even the old aged. Me and my mother sat on a bench and started to eat the sandwiches. The sandwiches were very tasty so i ate all the sandwiches. When i was going to take the swing someone pushed me. I was fainted, when i opened my eyes i found myself in a neat and clean park. There i saw an elephant wearing boots, a gorilla wearing glasses, a lion wearing pants, a dog having beard and a giraffe wearing sweater. I was laughing when i saw those things. A cat told me that all the animals in this park could talk. I was very glad because all the animals in this park were friendly. They were not fighting at all. Suddenly a tornado came towards me and i was fainted again. This time when i opened my eyes i found myself in the park where me and my mother went. I told the whole story to my mother but she did not believe it at all and scolded me for being late. I will never forget that daySmile.
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Comments 46
Muhammad Was the last word 'Smile' an emoticon? I don't think Vshine supports emoticons, and therefore it got converted to the original text string. Muhammad
Jul 8th 2015
 
 
sana Thanks again all of u Sana
May 19th 2015
 
 
Princess Great Princess
Apr 3rd 2015
 
 
Wafa Dear sana nice story i love it keep it up Wafa
Jul 7th 2014
 
 
qurratul Oh! i love it.sana.nyc jb Qurratul
Mar 15th 2014
 
 
hibba Hye yoooo !!! Hibba
Jan 24th 2014
 
 
Areeba Amazing one sana Areeba
Dec 30th 2014
 
 
Raniah Very nice Raniah
Dec 20th 2013
 
 
Sara Congragulations :-) Sara
Dec 17th 2013
 
 
MARYAM It was nice Maryam
Dec 13th 2013
 
 
aleena Awesome story wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww Aleena
Dec 13th 2013
 
 
sohaib NICE ! ooops I mean an awesome story Sohaib
Dec 8th 2013
 
 
aeman It was a good story. congrats Aeman
Dec 8th 2013
 
 
aeman It was a good story. congrats Aeman
Dec 8th 2013
 
 
Maryam Great Maryam
Dec 6th 2013
 
 
Muhammad Grammatical mistakes, bit over all nice Muhammad
Dec 4th 2013
 
 
sana Yes sarah i have received the gift hamp. thanks vshine Sana
Dec 4th 2013
 
 
raveeha CONGRATS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Raveeha
Dec 2nd 2013
 
 
raveeha CONGRATS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Raveeha
Dec 2nd 2013
 
 
Samia OK!SIDRA AND SELINA ARE CORRECT Samia
Dec 1st 2013
 
 
TOOBA NICE STORY Tooba
Nov 24th 2013
 
 
selina Its not 'me and my mom'it is ' my mother and i' Selina
Nov 23rd 2013
 
 
TOOBA Nice story very intrusting Tooba
Nov 18th 2013
 
 
Khadija Congrats !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Khadija
Nov 17th 2013
 
 
Hamzah Good job!! Keep it up and congratz Hamzah
Nov 14th 2013
 
 
sarah They cant tooba !!!! but this is a story and sometimes stories are not true. like cinderella is a story , will i say that dont be silly there is no such thing as magic ???????????? Sarah
Nov 10th 2013
 
 
ayesha Agreed with SIDRA ;) Ayesha
Nov 8th 2013
 
 
MALAIKA That's beautiful i love that story sorry your mother scolded you but at least you smiled :) Malaika
Nov 8th 2013
 
 
Ayesha Congratz on winning you deserve this award ^ | ^ \__/ Ayesha
Nov 7th 2013
 
 
Tooba You 2 ayesha can any animal talk Tooba
Nov 7th 2013
 
 
Tooba Dont be silly syeda fatima can animals talk Tooba
Nov 7th 2013
 
 
Anam Nyc story sana!!!!!! Anam
Nov 6th 2013
 
 
sana Yes thanks everyone Sana
Nov 6th 2013
 
 
sarah I like it :) soooooo have u recieved the gift hamp? Sarah
Nov 5th 2013
 
 
Midhat Nice but childish Midhat
Nov 4th 2013
 
 
Arwa Congratzzz Arwa
Nov 3rd 2013
 
 
Arwa Nycc its true?? Arwa
Nov 3rd 2013
 
 
Gul Noor Congratzzzzzzz:) Gul Noor
Nov 3rd 2013
 
 
Bushra Hafeez Nyx creativety Bushra Hafeez
Nov 3rd 2013
 
 
Bushra Nice and good 4 you that you won Bushra
Nov 2nd 2013
 
 
Hiba Nice and congratz Hiba
Nov 2nd 2013
 
 
ajwa Funnnyyyy......cOngrAtz.....funnyyyy!!!!!:)) Ajwa
Nov 2nd 2013
 
 
sana Okay sidra Sana
Nov 2nd 2013
 
 
Irum Goood, is it true? Irum
Nov 2nd 2013
 
 
Gul Noor Okay...... Gul Noor
Nov 1st 2013
 
 
Sidra You don't "cook" sandwiches, you make them. Sidra
Nov 1st 2013
 
 

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