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Maryam Aamir
Maryam Aamir
Notorious Room (part 2)
Published On Oct 4th 2013
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While I was in a deep thought someone knocked the door. I consider it my imagination because of that lady .I heard the knocking sound again. This time I was sure that someone really knocked the door.
It was a like challenge for me to imagine who was behind the black door at 3:00am. It was only a 'Black Door' in Hostel because it was the door of notorious room.
I got up from my bed visualizing the person and ran towards the door. When I opened the door I surprisingly found a pale girl nearly of my age.
She was wearing a long black dress but had white blond hairs tied in long and heavy ponytail. Flashing grey eyes and dark red lipstick.
"Hello! I am Sarah Anderson can you please lend me your Chemistry book. I will return you the next morning." I guess Maybe she introduced herself.
"I had never seen you before." That time I want more information from her.
"I am in evening students that’s why you never seen me before." she gave me some details. That time my mind struck and then I lend her my book.
 
 After sometime I was on my bed thinking about the incident happened few minutes ago. I asked myself 'Why I believed to all what she was saying?' Why I lend her my book even I don't know her?' Why my mind struck?' 'Why she come to me so late?' At that time too many question marks were popping in my mind like popcorns.
 DOES SARAH WILL RETURN MY BOOK?
TO BE CONTINUED....
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Comments 145
Shaheer Hey but check it out. You have written "That time my mind struck." And thnx for the help. :-) Shaheer
Aug 18th 2014
 
 
Maryam How that 'R' come there. exclude that 'R', its stuck. Maryam
Aug 16th 2014
 
 
Shaheer I don't understand. How did your mind struck? With a board or did Sarah hit you? Shaheer
Aug 16th 2014
 
 
Maryam Thanx Maryam
Jul 11th 2014
 
 
Hafsa Cool!!! Hafsa
Jul 4th 2014
 
 
Maryam So what you think Is my grammar improved or not Maryam
Jul 2nd 2014
 
 
Maryam So what you think Is my grammar improved or not Maryam
Jul 2nd 2014
 
 
Laibah Good story but improve ur grammar. at some parts i couldn't understand the story Laibah
Jul 1st 2014
 
 
Maryam Th@nk ou $o much:)))) Maryam
Jul 1st 2014
 
 
Hafsa Bravo!!!! Hafsa
Jun 30th 2014
 
 
Maryam I must say It is too late in holidays. Secondly my vacations just started it's 2nd day. Yes! I went to school on Monday but i heard that in Pakistan vacations started from June 1st. I am playing ludo type games with my sis. so what about your vacations.How you are enjoying them and Happy Ramadan Kareem. Ramadan is also approaching I am so excited. Maryam
Jun 25th 2014
 
 
Hiba Hey maryam, miss u so much n my result will come in august IA. which month will urs come in? how r summer vacations going? Hiba
Jun 24th 2014
 
 
Maryam Well It doesn't matter because I was also really very busy. About my result It will come in summer vacation but I think Your result would have been announced. You know its too hot here in Jubail and today it was even worse like a little dust storm. Maryam
Jun 12th 2014
 
 
Maryam @Tooba Thank you so much dear. and about 3rd part there is some problem in my browser or net, when I submit the part vshine signed me out and all my hard work goes in deep deep deep well. :(( Maryam
Jun 12th 2014
 
 
Hiba Hii maryam, sorry for the late reply, was having ,my exams till 15 may then there was so much happening that didint get time to use vshine. so how's everything going? how was ur result? im sure it must be good :D Hiba
Jun 4th 2014
 
 
Tooba Nice and will you publish the 3rd part Tooba
Jun 1st 2014
 
 
Maryam I will pray for you dear. my result will be announced in holidays. Maryam
May 1st 2014
 
 
Hiba Awww.... Im not free , my finals are starting on 6 mAy. pleas pray me . my progress wa 88%. what about u dear? Hiba
Apr 30th 2014
 
 
Maryam I'm freeeeeeee, let it go let it go...... I mean i'm free till 4th of May. I was waiting for your comment.What about your exams? Has been the result announced and What is your progress? You asked what I'm doing; what a free student should do. I am watching movies like Frozen and some Pakistani movies and dramas, playing online games and learning new hairstyles. Maryam
Apr 26th 2014
 
 
Hiba Awww, Thats soo sweet of u maryam , u made my day:*. i love u to the moon and back <3. anyways, whats going on? :) Hiba
Apr 24th 2014
 
 
Maryam Thats so sweet of you. You wished me exactly on 29 but i wished you on 6th 7 days later. One more thing i love hiba so you don't need to tell me! :))) Maryam
Apr 13th 2014
 
 
Hiba Thank u sooo sooo much Maryam. it doesnt matter if u are late, the only think thing is that u wished me. Atleast u made my day :) :* Hiba
Apr 9th 2014
 
 
Maryam I was not allowed to use any device as i am giving board exams so sorry for wishing u late Maryam
Apr 7th 2014
 
 
Maryam ..!!!***HAPP¥ B!RTHDA¥ $₩€€T¥***!!!.. wish you have many more. SORRY FOR BEING TOO LATE. Maryam
Apr 7th 2014
 
 
Hiba Oh acha . anyways , where r u maryam? im also having my assesments so dont get tto use vshine that much :( Hiba
Apr 2nd 2014
 
 
Maryam (AMEEN). I am giving exams from Federal board of Islamabad. Maryam
Mar 15th 2014
 
 
Hiba Thats great Maryam :). Inshallah u will come 1st in board exams (Ameen ). :D. which board are u giving ur exams with? Hiba
Mar 9th 2014
 
 
Maryam 1 mark less than 3rd. I know its not good enough for board and in class too but im working hard for board. Maryam
Mar 6th 2014
 
 
Hiba How was ur result Maryam ? i hope it is great :). teell me ur result :D Hiba
Mar 2nd 2014
 
 
Maryam Exams went good and my result is on 2nd March. Maryam
Feb 26th 2014
 
 
Hiba It's okay , Maryam I understand. How did ur exams go? When is ur result dear ? Hiba
Feb 25th 2014
 
 
Maryam Thanx hadia AND munkashay no need of sorry dear I was also not allowed to use internet but i'm so happy that u remembered me thank you sooooooo much Maryam
Feb 23rd 2014
 
 
Maryam We won't get winter vacations. sorry dear for my late reply actually I wasn't allowed to use net because i was giving pre-board exams. Maryam
Feb 23rd 2014
 
 
Munkashay SORRY MARYAM! I forgot to say Happy Birthday, cuz any electronic device except TV is forbidden on us....and I got permission for a BIT time!:( Sorry, but.... HAPPY BIRTH DAY!! Munkashay
Feb 7th 2014
 
 
Hadia Nice Hadia
Feb 7th 2014
 
 
Hadia Nice Hadia
Feb 7th 2014
 
 
Hiba Thats great :D i even watch thm but sometimes. :). when r ur vacations ? Hiba
Jan 29th 2014
 
 
Maryam I watch tv dramas. Maryam
Jan 27th 2014
 
 
Hiba Same but i hardly watch t.v , its boring :P Hiba
Jan 23rd 2014
 
 
Maryam My pleasure Maryam
Jan 21st 2014
 
 
hibba Ur welcummm Hibba
Jan 20th 2014
 
 
hibba Ur welcummm Hibba
Jan 20th 2014
 
 
Maryam Thanx Hibba and yes Hiba news is boring I see weather report on net. q k mein saudi channel to dekh ti ni Maryam
Jan 17th 2014
 
 
Hiba Hahhah okay . i dont watch news either. i only hear the weather news. Hiba
Jan 16th 2014
 
 
hibba Hey its nyc i like it Hibba
Jan 16th 2014
 
 
Maryam Yahan pr to har saal record tuta hai maybe! I don't watch saudi news channels. Maryam
Jan 13th 2014
 
 
Hiba Thats great Maryam. ajj kal its very cold in karaachi, it was even 4 C few days back. Pakistan main itni sardy in all the areas is like after 30 years Hiba
Jan 12th 2014
 
 
Maryam Finally we got our previous DSL back. weather is too bad no rains this year except a bit of shower on sunday. jubail ka mausaam kuch kuch karachi jaisa hai. Maryam
Jan 8th 2014
 
 
Hiba Awww, get it fixed. I love u so so much. So Maryam dear , hows the weather ? Hiba
Jan 7th 2014
 
 
Maryam You are so sweet and friendly. My DSL is not working properly bus yehi barish say nuqsaan hua hai. Maryam
Jan 6th 2014
 
 
Hiba Awwwwww..... dear Maryam , i really dont know what to say :) Hiba
Dec 29th 2013
 
 
Maryam Love u too dear. Speechless karna to aap ka kam hai mera nahi. Maryam
Dec 22nd 2013
 
 
Hiba that's so sweet of u Maryam , love u to the moon and back and I am speechless Hiba
Dec 17th 2013
 
 
Maryam Impossible! I know a person nicer than me. Hiba dear please see a mirror if you want to meet her! Maryam
Dec 16th 2013
 
 
Hiba Awww that's so sweet of u dear but u are way more nicer than me :) Hiba
Dec 13th 2013
 
 
Maryam Aap ziyada achi hain more than me :)))))) Maryam
Dec 12th 2013
 
 
Hiba Nahi maryam aap bohat achi hain :) Hiba
Dec 10th 2013
 
 
Maryam Mujhe nahi lagta k mein itni achi hoon jitna aap ne likh diya hai. And 3rd will be coming soon Inshallah. Maryam
Dec 7th 2013
 
 
Hiba Maryam u have the skills of being a writer and when will the 3rd part come?? I'm waiting :) Hiba
Dec 7th 2013
 
 
Maryam Finally you found me! And GULNOOR your words are so valuable for me. Few words of appreciation from a friend encouraged me........! Maryam
Dec 1st 2013
 
 
Gul Noor Anyways it was nice!!!!!:D Gul Noor
Dec 1st 2013
 
 
Mariam Nice .. and hey Mariam
Nov 28th 2013
 
 
KHAN How to delete your comment? i heard of pt 1 Khan
Nov 18th 2013
 
 
Nuzhat When will 3rd part cme Nuzhat
Nov 17th 2013
 
 
Maryam You can find it on my screen or on page no.6 Maryam
Nov 16th 2013
 
 
KHAN I have not herd of part 1 Khan
Nov 16th 2013
 
 
Maryam My result is announced and I am second. Maryam
Nov 11th 2013
 
 
Rafia I love u morely more my dear :))))0 Rafia
Nov 10th 2013
 
 
Maryam App ne kon sa parhi hai Ayesha. And Rafia thank you so much I really need your wishes. love u dear. Maryam
Nov 8th 2013
 
 
Rafia INSHALLAH ... my best wishes r with u :)))) Rafia
Nov 7th 2013
 
 
Ayesha ^|^ \__/ Ayesha
Nov 7th 2013
 
 
Ayesha Acha baji mujay aur intazar nahi krna paray ga hai na Ayesha
Nov 7th 2013
 
 
Maryam App ko bhi. aur mein is month send kar doon gi. Maryam
Nov 6th 2013
 
 
Ayesha NEYA SAAL MUBARAK HO Ayesha
Nov 6th 2013
 
 
Ayesha Congratz app ney 50+ score kar liya wesay story bohat achi hai baji 3 part kab send kar rahi hain Ayesha
Nov 6th 2013
 
 
Maryam Han bus exams end ho gaye hain to mein free hoon is se ziyada kuch nahi. bus ab acha sa result a ajye :) :) Maryam
Nov 5th 2013
 
 
Rafia Nothing much yar! STUDIES ... STUDIES ND STUDIES ...... tum sunao .. anything new??!!?? :) Rafia
Nov 5th 2013
 
 
Maryam Me too. Aur sunao kiya ho rah hai ? Maryam
Nov 4th 2013
 
 
Rafia I LOVE U MORE THAN ANYTHINGGGGGG :) Rafia
Nov 4th 2013
 
 
Maryam May be Rafia but I LOVE U MORE then u Maryam
Nov 3rd 2013
 
 
Maryam Thank you dear Ellina your words are so precious and there are more great writers in vshine than me. thank you once again i am so happy because of you Maryam
Nov 3rd 2013
 
 
Rafia No dear I LOVE U EVEN MORE :) Rafia
Nov 2nd 2013
 
 
Ellina Wow u r a great writer wish i had been u wonderful and pleasureful I love the thrill please quickly write the next part of notorious room and be careful Albert Einstein said "Alphabets can take u to a-z but, imagination can take u anywhere"well BTW wats ur name?? Ellina
Oct 31st 2013
 
 
Maryam I love you more dear rafia. no need of thanx dear nimo! u r a gr8 friend. And thank you so much Tehreem. Maryam
Oct 29th 2013
 
 
tehreem Really superb..keep it up.. Tehreem
Oct 26th 2013
 
 
Nimra Oooo dearrrr thankxxxxxxxxx alotttttttttttttttt yesss i havvvv seennn ur about me... :) <3 Nimra
Oct 25th 2013
 
 
Rafia MARYAM ... i am speechless ... awwww... sooooooooooo sweeeeeeeet of u sweet-heart :):) love u sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much :) Rafia
Oct 25th 2013
 
 
Maryam Thanx Maryam
Oct 22nd 2013
 
 
sana You had written an amazing story :) Sana
Oct 22nd 2013
 
 
Aimen Cant wait for the next part......very interesting story Aimen
Oct 22nd 2013
 
 
Irum HAd a lot of fun doin that!!! Irum
Oct 21st 2013
 
 
Maryam Thats so sweet of u and thanx Maryam
Oct 20th 2013
 
 
Ajwa And check my about me Ajwa
Oct 19th 2013
 
 
ajwa Maryam !!!!! what r u saying ?!?!?!?!?!? have u lost ur brains???? ofcourse ur my BFF !!!!!!!!! and i like u so very very much !!!!!!! anywayzz thanxxx soooooo_oooo much !!!!!! Ajwa
Oct 19th 2013
 
 
Maryam No need of thanx dear Rafia. u r my BFF thats y i wrote ur name in 'about me' Maryam
Oct 19th 2013
 
 
Maryam You have to believe it bcoz u r my 1st BFF on v shine. i don't know u suppose me ur best friend or not But u r really my BFF. :) Maryam
Oct 18th 2013
 
 
Rafia Maryam dear thnx alot for adding my name in ur 'about me' .. sooo sweeeet of u honey :)) Rafia
Oct 18th 2013
 
 
Ajwa Maryam...i cant beleive it ... u wrote my name on ur screen az a best frnd....and on the frst ...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! thaaaaaaaanxxxxxx !!!!!!!! <<<<33333s to u !!!!!!!! Ajwa
Oct 17th 2013
 
 
Maryam Yes dear i have seen your 'about me' but have you seen my 'about me' Maryam
Oct 17th 2013
 
 
ajwa Eid mubarak!!! Ajwa
Oct 16th 2013
 
 
Nimra Ooo sooo sweet of u..!!! :) well thankx for it..!!! ;) btw have u seen my about me?? Nimra
Oct 16th 2013
 
 
Maryam Thanx Maryam
Oct 15th 2013
 
 
ajwa EID MUBARAK!!!!!! :) LOLzz to all!!! :D Ajwa
Oct 15th 2013
 
 
ajwa Its okaaaaaaay.........dont take tension...its just a story..take ur exams more seriously...okay?stay happyyyyyy and happy eid greeeeetings to alllll!!!!!!!!!:***: Ajwa
Oct 15th 2013
 
 
Nimra Oohhh.. thankxx.. :)) well have u seen my about me?? Nimra
Oct 15th 2013
 
 
KHAN A good story Khan
Oct 15th 2013
 
 
Maryam Sweet Nimra! i have made you BFF bestest friend forever and u still want to be best friend ??????? Maryam
Oct 14th 2013
 
 
Nimra U always welcum dear maryam.. :) Nimra
Oct 14th 2013
 
 
Gul Noor "does sarah will return my book"????? Gul Noor
Oct 14th 2013
 
 
Nimra Thankx :)) well will u be my best friend on vshine?? i hope u will?? Nimra
Oct 14th 2013
 
 
Minahil Dear maryam you have small mistakes in the u8se of have and had and that>.>>>>>>I really like your creativity and the way you leave the reader in suspense/////Have you submitted 3rd part ????Waiting......................................... Minahil
Oct 14th 2013
 
 
Maryam Thanx Fatima and Nimra Maryam
Oct 14th 2013
 
 
Nimra Hehehe maryam u r rite..!! Nimra
Oct 13th 2013
 
 
Fatima Marvelous story Fatima
Oct 13th 2013
 
 
Maryam I find some like 1st sen of last para is wrong. But i couldn't find MANY misatkes. If Sarah had find MANY, so she should correct them bcoz "insan ko galti tab nikalni chahiye jab woh us ko sahi kar skay". jab hum kisi k stuff ko cheated kehtay hain to jahan stuff parha hai woh site or book bhi batani chahiye agar mistake bata rahay hain to correction bhi kar ni chahiy. Maryam
Oct 13th 2013
 
 
Maryam U know dear Ajwa i'm preparing for my send up exams so i only got 10 min to use net thats y it took time. i want to send it on Thursday but i was toooooo busy. On the basis of send ups my admission will b sent for board exams. I hope u will understand. Maryam
Oct 13th 2013
 
 
Maryam Hello! FATIMAH i'm Maryam. Maryam
Oct 13th 2013
 
 
ajwa Sarah!!it duznt have soo many grammatical mistakes ......only the last sentence is wrong!!!and its not a good thing to pick out ppl's mistakes in public!!!hope u understood.... Ajwa
Oct 12th 2013
 
 
ajwa Plzzzzzz send the next part soooooon!!!!!!!!plzzzzzzzzzzzzz!!!!!!!!!!! Ajwa
Oct 12th 2013
 
 
Fatima Hi i'm Fatima. Fatima
Oct 12th 2013
 
 
Maryam U r my bestest friend forever BFF ! :-) :-) Maryam
Oct 11th 2013
 
 
eesha Hehehehehe...hope ayesha had a lot of fun :) :) Eesha
Oct 11th 2013
 
 
Khadijah Sarah, actually Ayesha is not commenting but actually she collected all the comment sent by us then posted it all together. Khadijah
Oct 11th 2013
 
 
Nimra Hey will u becum my bst friend?? Nimra
Oct 11th 2013
 
 
sarah This story belongs to Maryam then why is Ayesha responding? Sarah
Oct 10th 2013
 
 
Maryam Thank you so much Hiba Marium :) Maryam
Oct 10th 2013
 
 
hiba marium Interesting and curious. Nice creativity Hiba Marium
Oct 10th 2013
 
 
Maryam Hope u had alot of fun! :) :) Maryam
Oct 9th 2013
 
 
Irum Just for fun!!! Irum
Oct 9th 2013
 
 
Maryam Can u tell me dear Ayesha why u wrote all the comments Maryam
Oct 7th 2013
 
 
Maryam Inshallah i will send it this thursday you know the whole week is too busy and im also preparing my sendup exams. Maryam
Oct 7th 2013
 
 
Rafia Send the next part soooooooooooooooooooooon :) Rafia
Oct 7th 2013
 
 
Irum Thanx Soha and Awja. and my pleasure dear Eesha Maryam Oct 5th 2013 Me ko pata hai boht mistakes hain. meri story submit nahi ho rahi thi to me ne socha k shaid ab bhi na ho is waja se me proofread nahi kia tha Maryam Oct 5th 2013 I agree with Sarah, the plot is nice bt proofread the stuff b4 sending it.... Sana Oct 5th 2013 Ur most welcum maryam :) Eesha Oct 5th 2013 Realllllyyyyy guuuuuud!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Ajwa Oct 5th 2013 Woowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww intresting Soha Oct 5th 2013 Nice but there were many grammatical mistakes, misuse of vocabulary, and above all wrong sentence structure, plz next time read the thing you publish online, understood? Sarah Oct 4th 2013 Thanx Eesha and Khadijah i will soon it send it Maryam Oct 4th 2013 Oh it's such a small part. Anyway I appreciate it. It's Veryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy SCARY. PLEASE SEND IT SOONNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN. I love it.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Khadijah Oct 4th 2013 Next part...amazing story!!! Eesha Oct 4th 2013 Thanx dear. Maryam Oct 4th 2013 Wowwwwwwwwwwwwwww.............. Rafia Oct 4 Irum
Oct 7th 2013
 
 
Maryam Thanx Soha and Awja. and my pleasure dear Eesha Maryam
Oct 5th 2013
 
 
Maryam Me ko pata hai boht mistakes hain. meri story submit nahi ho rahi thi to me ne socha k shaid ab bhi na ho is waja se me proofread nahi kia tha Maryam
Oct 5th 2013
 
 
Sana I agree with Sarah, the plot is nice bt proofread the stuff b4 sending it.... Sana
Oct 5th 2013
 
 
eesha Ur most welcum maryam :) Eesha
Oct 5th 2013
 
 
Ajwa Realllllyyyyy guuuuuud!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Ajwa
Oct 5th 2013
 
 
soha Woowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww intresting Soha
Oct 5th 2013
 
 
sarah Nice but there were many grammatical mistakes, misuse of vocabulary, and above all wrong sentence structure, plz next time read the thing you publish online, understood? Sarah
Oct 4th 2013
 
 
Maryam Thanx Eesha and Khadijah i will soon it send it Maryam
Oct 4th 2013
 
 
Khadijah Oh it's such a small part. Anyway I appreciate it. It's Veryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy SCARY. PLEASE SEND IT SOONNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN. I love it.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Khadijah
Oct 4th 2013
 
 
eesha Next part...amazing story!!! Eesha
Oct 4th 2013
 
 
Maryam Thanx dear. Maryam
Oct 4th 2013
 
 
Rafia Wowwwwwwwwwwwwwww.............. Rafia
Oct 4th 2013
 
 

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