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Rafia Ahmed
Rafia Ahmed
Usman Public School
I Am Heartbroken
Published On Oct 2nd 2013
Total Comments : 48
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Rank 8 Out of 10
Your words were like straight arrow of its bow
To my heart and broke it
Now I am a dull colour of rainbow
With beautiful colours I really don't fit
How to pass a pretty smile
That's what I forgot
Now I cry all day and night
Because you told me your friend i am not
With you I felt the switch of seasons
But, now you left me! What's the reason?
What was the mistake of my innocent heart,
That you didn't cared and broke it apart
Were you just a time passing friend
Or you hated me from the start?
Did you earlier planned to hurt me?
Your arrow and bow were ready to break my heart
Oh! I am really so sad
Oh! Am I that bad?
That you left me that way
And didn't let me ever say
But, what really was the reason?
That the spring changed into autumn season!!!
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Comments 48
Areej Sorry to say one word but :AMAZING: poem my dear :):) Areej
Aug 3rd 2014
Maryam Sure But a bit different cuz u r in 7 n i'm in 9. Maryam
Jan 9th 2014
hibba Same problem here maryam lol Hibba
Jan 7th 2014
Maryam Welcome Maryam
Dec 22nd 2013
Bushra Hafeez (Ameen!!!!) thnkuuuu so much Bushra Hafeez
Dec 21st 2013
Maryam I didn't failed, but low Marks as compared to the The girl who stood first. Anyways thank you so much for your wishes. Allah SWT aap ko bhi kamyabi ataa farmaey. (AMEEN) Maryam
Dec 4th 2013
Bushra Hafeez Gooood yar but also try to work more hard in other subjects maryam ,,,, welll gud luck 4 ur exams ov 9th :) Bushra Hafeez
Dec 4th 2013
Maryam Now I knew it very well! But I will improve them more! :)))) Maryam
Dec 1st 2013
Bushra Hafeez Thnx all 4 my marks well maryam bio nd chem were a little difficult but we faced it nd did our best....... :))))))))))))))) Bushra Hafeez
Nov 28th 2013
Munkashay Okay Rafi! Munkashay
Nov 23rd 2013
Maryam How do you know I am talking about my friend? I just made a general statement. Maryam
Nov 19th 2013
Rafia Well Maryam when ppl dont value u nd ur frndship nd when they think themselves much wiser than this type of situation occurs .... well, munchey i would love to give it 2 u but actually my id is hacked nd em making a new one so i'll give u the new id soon dear :))) OK??!!?? :)))) Rafia
Nov 18th 2013
Munkashay Hey Rafia, would you mind giving me your adress? I would LOVE to write ya a letter, you know, I could send my photo too and we could know each other better! What do you think? Munkashay
Nov 17th 2013
Maryam Can you tell me why SOME friends leave us? Maryam
Nov 17th 2013
Rafia OH! thatz sweet Munchey :):):) Rafia
Nov 6th 2013
Munkashay Tee hee! Thanks, Rafi! U could call me Munchey if u wanna! Munkashay
Nov 5th 2013
Rafia Ofcourse dear :)) thatz honourable for me as u said em ur BFF :)) u r really a gr8 frnd :)) well, let me think a sweet nick name for u :):) Rafia
Oct 30th 2013
Maryam Congrats Bushra baji are those exams were hard please reply me soon. Maryam
Oct 29th 2013
Munkashay Good, Rafia! Would u mind if I called you "Rafi"? 'cause u r one of my BFFs, you know..... Munkashay
Oct 29th 2013
Rafia Hey! gr8 bushra :))))) IM[RESSIVE MARKS YAR!! :)) Rafia
Oct 27th 2013
eesha WOOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW bushra...congratz........Mashallah itne ace marks liye hain Eesha
Oct 25th 2013
Bushra Hafeez Outstanding p0em nd u know with ur all prayers i got A-1 grade and 365 marks out of 425 marks nd 86% in the board exam ov class 9th :) Bushra Hafeez
Oct 24th 2013
ajwa Happy eid guyzz !!!!!! Ajwa
Oct 16th 2013
Rafia Thnkuuuu dear afifah :))))) Rafia
Oct 15th 2013
afifah Really heart touching poem! Afifah
Oct 14th 2013
Rafia Yeah! Hiba u r right ... thnkuuu :) nd ifrah no need of sorry honey :) Rafia
Oct 14th 2013
Ifrah  (manooo) I m really sorry rafia but I HAVE JUST SCRIBBBLE MY THINKING N NOBODY CAN CHANGE OTHER PEOPLE THINKINGS WELLsorryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Ifrah (manooo)
Oct 13th 2013
Hiba My dear rafia, I understand u, I even hate those type of people. seems that Fatima is jealous u my dear, the best thing is to leave her. I am sure that u can make new friends. u are so friendly and nice that everyone would love to be ur friend. My advice to u is that don't backbite that friend instead pray that she should follow the straight path like our PROPHET MUHAMMED (SAW) used to do. Hope u understand that what I mean :)) Hiba
Oct 12th 2013
Zainab I'm glad it wasnt my sis her name is fatima too:p :D Zainab
Oct 10th 2013
Rafia ItsS for my class frnds (3 of them) i hope someone understood!!! Rafia
Oct 10th 2013
Rafia I DIDN'T SAID K YE MAIN NE AAP K LIYE LIKHI HAI IFRAH!!!!! why do u always think of me like that ?????? Rafia
Oct 9th 2013
Gullasht For whom? it iSss!!,,,............... ha haA Gullasht
Oct 9th 2013
Ifrah  (manooo) Isn't that really me i think or someone else WELL SORRY FOR SAYING U LIKE THAT BUT MY THINKING R SOMETHING LIKE THAT BUTIT'S REALLY A HEART BROKEN POEM Ifrah (manooo)
Oct 7th 2013
Rafia U r right dear ....... nd her name is FATIMA!!!! ..... see such a nyc name nd her behaviour !!!!! well, she isnt on vshine ... Rafia
Oct 6th 2013
eesha Hey Rafia i think she is jealous of ur frndzz.......i think u shud leave her.........n i have the same request as Hiba.... Eesha
Oct 5th 2013
Rafia Well, my all frnds ..... JAZAKALLAH :))) nd i hav tried those things .... but, i think it's better to leave her .... no matter how it hurts but the things she said to me were very bad .... nd do u all know WHAT WAS THE REASON?????? she wants my password although she's having her own id!!!!!! nd secondly she don't wants ANYONE to my frnd except her!!! SHE'S BEHAVING REALLY MEAN!!!!!!!!! :((((((( what to do????????????????????????????????? Rafia
Oct 5th 2013
Areeba Hafsa dear why did you copy my comment :'( Please don't do it again because it aches my heart dear! Hope u understand! I hope that you don't mind! But I will still love you :) And Rafia I love you loads as well <3 Areeba
Oct 5th 2013
Hiba My dear rafia, can u please email me the name if u dont mind:). and try giving that friend a sorry card or a short and sweet poem for them. Hiba
Oct 5th 2013
sofia Cooooooooooooool rafia the best writer you are i can call you keep it up Sofia
Oct 5th 2013
Zainab Your poem is.... FANTASTIC, SPLENDID, and i love it... so this is real, your friend really did that to you? how sad, i'd like to help u in this problem. Maybe you should give her a card or a small present, and best of all, just pray to Allah that you become friends again and pray for your own and your friends guidance as well. Zainab
Oct 5th 2013
Rafia If i haven't replied on anyone's stuff ..... so plz plz plz plz dont mind coz studies ka load buhat zyaada hai ........ mushqil se thoora sa time nikal kr tum logon ko reply karne k liye vshine use karti hoon ........ nd i just open my screen .... or two three more ..... JUST thatz it!!! time mila to zaroor reply karoon gi (INSHALLAH) :) i hope u all understood :)))) Rafia
Oct 4th 2013
Rafia O000OOOOooooo!!!!!!! this is soooooooooooooooooooooooo unexpected!!!!! u frnds are FABULOUS!!!!! :))) thnx alot ......... nd areeba, hiba, hafs, eesha nd maryam ... love u all frm the depth of my heart :)) well, affan thnx alot ap ka comment bhi buhat acha hai :D well, my frnds giv me some idea thatz really dedicated to my frnd .... she's really upset w8 me nd really her words were toooo bad that made me very still at the moment!!! :( WHAT 2 DO???? Rafia
Oct 4th 2013
Hiba I cant believe it that u wrote it my dear. It is just fabulous . I even agree with Areeba and Hafsa. Hiba
Oct 4th 2013
Affan Achi hain! Awesome Affan
Oct 3rd 2013
Maryam I will never leave u Maryam
Oct 3rd 2013
Oct 3rd 2013
eesha It's so breath taking n heart touching poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!i didn't knw u had such gud writting skills..... Eesha
Oct 3rd 2013
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