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Rafia Ahmed
Rafia Ahmed
Usman Public School
My Friend
Published On Oct 2nd 2013
Total Comments : 42
Total Views :  1072
9 People Like this!


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The brightest colour of rainbow ...
The biggest wave of sea ...
the best arrow of its bow ...
Is my friend whose most dear to me ...
Her smile is the most charming ....
Her eyes are always sparkling ...
A tear from her eye means a flood in the sea ...
A single smile of her means a lot to me ...
All I want you to do, is to do as i say ...
On a cheerful morning, a very fine day ...
You should walk up a very high hill ...
And stand there very still ...
You will see a bird cooing on a tree ...
Walk under it, a single ripe fruit you will see ...
See where it shadow falls ...
There scribbled on a stone you shall ...
See a message with words very few ...
Oh! my friend .... I LOVE YOU !!! 
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Comments 42
yashfeen Great poem Rafia and please accept my friend request. Yashfeen
Apr 15th 2017
Areej Nice :):) Areej
Aug 3rd 2014
Nimra Hmm me as well... anyways tum ab skype pay ati be ho ya nhi?? :/ Nimra
Feb 24th 2014
eesha HEHEHEHE!!! same here Nimra....A reallllllllyyyyy long time i am not regular at v shine and it's been such a long time Eesha
Feb 22nd 2014
Nimra No no my pleasure eesha nd hiba.. :) <3 :* nd luv u both.. :) :* <3 aww shooo sweeeet thankx ayesha nd rafia.. :) luv u people.. :* <3 nd ameen rafia nd same 2 u.. :) sry for late reply yr guyx.. :( long time pass no tlk wth friendxx... :( :/ pata hai ws very very buxy in studies.. :( :/ pata hai 1 year i hav nt use vshine.. :( :/ Nimra
Feb 18th 2014
Bushra Hafeez Nyx poem wese for whom have u composed ths dear Bushra Hafeez
Jan 10th 2014
hibba Hey its nice poem i like it :) Hibba
Jan 7th 2014
Syeda Maryam My dear Rafia its amazing!! why? arent you my friend??? Pls talk to me :( Ok say me about u and ur sweet life!! Say soon sis :) Syeda Maryam
Dec 30th 2014
Areeba Well rafia dear, Hiba recently told me all these happenings on vshine & insisted me to talk to you :) She is like " PLEASE RAFIA SAY BAAT KARO WARNA MEIN TUM SAE NARAZ HO JAOON GI" & at another point she is like " RAFIA JESI ACHI FRIEND TUMHE DUNYA MEIN NAHI MILAE GI SO PLEASE STUDIES SAE HI 5 MINUTES NIKAL KAR USS SAE BAAT KARO" & literally she begged me & only went when she saw me typing. Anyways rafia dear it has been ages ever since we talked. Please make a new email id. Please yaaaaaaaar I really really want to talk to you privetly. You know mine dont you? So as soon as you make one email account please please mail me. I should be the first person :p How are you my dear? Is Rabia Api fine? Anyways please reply yaaar, & do make an email account. Not a new account on vshine but just an email. I ask you no more than one email address. I cant bear not talking to my soul sister. Please rafia it is a humble request from one sister to another :) Okay, Allah Hafiz dear till then. Please reply as soon as possible and make a new email id as well. Please I am waiting for your mail as my exams are over & I am free these days :) Areeba
Dec 17th 2013
Munkashay Hey, Rafia, what is your date of birth? Munkashay
Dec 14th 2013
Rafia Nimra, thnkuu soooooooooooo much yar :)) well, happy belated birthday :)) MAY ALLAH SWT GIVES U ALL THE HAPPINESS :)) Rafia
Dec 6th 2013
Irum Happy belated Birthday Nimra Hanif Irum
Nov 23rd 2013
Sehar WOW !!! nyc one ! Sehar
Nov 16th 2013
eesha Same to u my frnd :D Eesha
Oct 20th 2013
Hiba Tjnx for agreeing wuth me nimra and love u sooooo much eesha Hiba
Oct 19th 2013
eesha Hey Hiba no u deserve it!!!!!!! not me...u r soo sweet n kind...n thnx Nimra for agreeing :) Eesha
Oct 17th 2013
ajwa Eid mubarak , my frndzz !!!!!!!!! Ajwa
Oct 16th 2013
Nimra Keep it up ur hard work rafia..!! :)) well i agree with eesha, hiba nd areeba.. :))))) Nimra
Oct 16th 2013
Rafia Aoa ... Shumila ... JAZAKALLAH :))))) Rafia
Oct 14th 2013
Rafia Afifah nd Ifrah ... thnx alot my frnds :)))) Rafia
Oct 14th 2013
shumila Beautiful indeed!! Keep up the good work! Shumila
Oct 13th 2013
Ifrah  (manooo) That was fine i was just kidding Ifrah (manooo)
Oct 13th 2013
afifah amazing poem Rafia... really brilliant:) Afifah
Oct 12th 2013
Hiba That's so sweet of u my dear eesha, u are even a better person than me. I don't ,u deserve this , you are the apple of my eyes Hiba
Oct 12th 2013
Rafia Ifrah ...... i said i have send poems on others too .... nd i have send ur's, rabita nd manal poem together !!!!! is that alright????? :))) Rafia
Oct 8th 2013
eesha Rafia!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i am not the person u shud write poems on......i am very shy plzzzzzz vshine dont post it ...plzzzzzzzz Eesha
Oct 7th 2013
Ifrah  (manooo) ITS AWESOME BUT I MIND WHEN I DIDNOT SEE MY NAME ON THE LIST OF PEOPLE WHOM U DEDICATED THIS POEM seriously!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Ifrah (manooo)
Oct 7th 2013
Rafia YAR Eesha u will keep sending that heart-touching words ...... well, main ne ap pr bhi poem bheji hai!!! :)))) VSHINE PLZ B BIT FAST!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz ........ Rafia
Oct 6th 2013
eesha WOwwwwoooowoOOOOOWWWW u will keep amazing me Rafia....n Hiba really is the person u should have dedicated this poem....she is sooo sweet n kind hearted........ Eesha
Oct 5th 2013
Rafia Oo0000!!!!! thnkuuuuu sofia ........... (nice name honey!) :) Rafia
Oct 5th 2013
Areeba Dear, please don't make me cry once again! As soon as I read ur comments my eyes start to flood! You are the greatest friend anyone could ask for! Inshallah ur poem will be approved! You are the apple of my eyes honey! Love u to bits my dear friend :) Areeba
Oct 5th 2013
Hiba My dear rafia love u sooo much my dear. i have no words to thank u for this beautiful poem that u wrote for me. anyways great poem Hiba
Oct 5th 2013
sofia Woe totally amazing like it keep it up shugarcake .`)wink Sofia
Oct 5th 2013
Rafia Thnx affan ...... :):) Rafia
Oct 4th 2013
Rafia Hiba, Hafsa, Maryam u all r soooooooooooooo sooooooo sweeeet :))) love u all frm the depth of my heart!!!! :))) tnkuuuuuuuu :) Rafia
Oct 4th 2013
Rafia Areeba ................. dear, u left me speechless ..... i have also written a poem on u .... INSHALLAH it will get approved soon :)) I love u even more my dear :)))) em sooooooooooooooo thankful to ALLAH SWT for blessing me w8 such a dear frnd :))) "BEST FRNDS R VERY HARD TO FIND .... COZ THE VERY BEST ONE IS ALREADY MINE :) " dear i toooooooooooooooooooooo wish frm the depth of my heart that i could meet u honey!!!! :)) love u sooooooooooooooo much my sweet sis :) Rafia
Oct 4th 2013
Affan Bohot Achi Poem Hai Affan
Oct 3rd 2013
Maryam Amazing Maryam
Oct 3rd 2013
Hiba Thank u so so much my dear, no words to tell u how great u are honey . My dear your wordings are as precious. This poem is like stuck to my heart . I even wrote it on a red chart and decorated it beautifully and stuck it on the wall of my room. My dear once again an infinite thankyou's for writing such a great poem for me and being the bestest friend that anyone could have . Love u to the moon and back dear. MAY ALLAH BLESS YOU ALWAYS Hiba
Oct 3rd 2013
HAFSA AREEBA IS RIGHT RAFIA DEAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOADS OF LOVE:) Hafsa
Oct 3rd 2013
Areeba Dear, u leave me speechless......... I Just am at a loss of words. U are such a great friend to all that I don't know anyone who is against u! Your personality and valuable wordings have a great impact on me dear :) U are so kind honey and my love towards you cant be measured. Ever Ever because I love u soo much dear! And You are even soo kind to my cousin Hiba :) You dedicated the whole poem to her :) Just cant think of any way to thank you honey! I wish we could at some place! So that I can hug you to my hearts content! LOVE U LOADS HONEY! <3 Areeba
Oct 3rd 2013
Rafia This is dedicated to my best frnds Hiba-Ahmed nd Afifah Maryam ..... i hav also send for others ..... INSHALLAH they will get published soon :)) Rafia
Oct 3rd 2013

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