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Ifrah  Yousuf
Ifrah Yousuf
Beacon Light Academy
Real!
Published On Oct 2nd 2013
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Standing in the crowd
Trying to make out
Everyone around me is behind the mask
Who is loyal among them?
How can I find a true friend?
When no one tells the truth
They hid themselves when you go
To ask help from them
How can I live with fake when
When all I want is REAL!
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Comments 14
Rafia Thnx rabia for agreeing :) Rafia
Oct 27th 2013
 
 
ajwa Ur welcome !!!! :)) Ajwa
Oct 25th 2013
 
 
ramshah My pleasure ifrah Ramshah
Oct 25th 2013
 
 
ramshah My pleasure ifrah Ramshah
Oct 25th 2013
 
 
Ifrah Thank you Ramshah! Ifrah
Oct 23rd 2013
 
 
ramshah Well written and i think if u want a real friend have faith on u Ramshah
Oct 23rd 2013
 
 
Ifrah Thank you so much Ajwa! It means a lot to me to hear this! Ifrah
Oct 20th 2013
 
 
Ajwa No ifrah .. i mean it..its awwsuum....u know when i waz reading it ... i was having this déjà vu feeling....!!!! ur poem is like a feeling..... Ajwa
Oct 17th 2013
 
 
Ifrah Guys its a free verse it does not require a rhyme scheme but include creative language like alliteration, personification etc. Thank you so much for appreciation. Ifrah
Oct 17th 2013
 
 
ajwa Truuuuu ...i really appreciate it......nyc and eid mubarak !!!!!!! :) 8D Ajwa
Oct 16th 2013
 
 
HENRY Cute and absolutely true but keep working on the rhyming words Henry
Oct 11th 2013
 
 
rabia Right rafia very nice Rabia
Oct 7th 2013
 
 
sofia Well written but not too much nice rhyming words but keep it up :) Sofia
Oct 5th 2013
 
 
Rafia Thats really really well-written :) Rafia
Oct 3rd 2013
 
 

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