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Zainab Saleem Toor
Zainab Saleem Toor
Tns Beaconhouse
My Brother
Published On Sep 29th 2013
Total Comments : 35
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My brother can be as naughty that you think
One day he hit a pencil on my eyebrow then it started bleeding
He is sweet but will say silly things in one blink
Then comes his daily hobby and that's me who he loves beating
But not cuter than my sister
He will never mute
He is a silly youngster
It still doesn't mean that I don't like him
He is lovely and will remain
In a place inside my heart
And Rafay is his name.  
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Comments 35
Nimra Hmm u ryt.. :) Nimra
Mar 22nd 2014
 
 
Zainab Oho, thats why i haven't seen u for long time. well, i am good these days. how about you? Zainab
Feb 24th 2014
 
 
Nimra Ya i ws axking abt eid.. :) khair anyways how r u zainab?? wtz going on these days?? long time no tlk wth friendx..:/ ws very busy in studies.. :( pata hai 1 year past i hav nt use vshine.. :( :/ Nimra
Feb 18th 2014
 
 
Zainab Hahahahaha thnk u hadia Zainab
Feb 14th 2014
 
 
Hadia GoooooooooooOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOd and niiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiice Hadia
Jan 25th 2014
 
 
hibba Hey its nice i like it keep it up :) Hibba
Jan 7th 2014
 
 
Shumaim Your Welcome. :)!! Shumaim
Dec 8th 2013
 
 
Zainab Thank u Zainab
Oct 25th 2013
 
 
Shumaim Nice Poem... Keep it up ;) Shumaim
Oct 24th 2013
 
 
Zainab U mean on eid? well if u do then i"ll wear a black and white sleeveless shirt and an orange shirt over it Zainab
Oct 17th 2013
 
 
Nimra Okkk i have seen it..!!! :) Nimra
Oct 16th 2013
 
 
Nimra Ookkk dear.. :))) well wht will u wear 2morrow?? Nimra
Oct 15th 2013
 
 
Rafia Zainab .... thnkuuuu sooooo much dear :)))) Rafia
Oct 15th 2013
 
 
Zainab Nimra! I told u to look at my screen if u want to see mt intoduction:) Zainab
Oct 15th 2013
 
 
Nimra Oohh.. soo u r the elder one in ur sibilings?? em i rite..?? :)) well wht r ur hobbies?? and wht do u like to do in ur free time?? :) Nimra
Oct 13th 2013
 
 
Zainab I study in tns beaconhouse, defence branch Zainab
Oct 13th 2013
 
 
Nimra :))) well in which skul do u study?? Nimra
Oct 12th 2013
 
 
Zainab Ok ok. I get it Zainab
Oct 11th 2013
 
 
Nimra Uuffffffffffffff i understand it zainab but before that u havent replied me thats why i put soo many question marks..!!! Nimra
Oct 10th 2013
 
 
Zainab Yes! Who else do u think it would be. Zainab
Oct 10th 2013
 
 
Zainab Sure just visit my screen Zainab
Oct 10th 2013
 
 
Rafia Hey Zainab dear ..... si that for me ?????????????? like ur frnds bismah nd rafia (me ???) Rafia
Oct 10th 2013
 
 
Nimra Ookk gudd.. :)) soo can u introduce ur self?? Nimra
Oct 9th 2013
 
 
Zainab Uf Allah! I mean that Rafia and Bismah are also my best friends but i would like you as my best friend too! Samajh aai? And I accidently posted that comment 2 times :p Zainab
Oct 9th 2013
 
 
Nimra ?????????? Nimra
Oct 8th 2013
 
 
Zainab Yes nimra i'd love too, along with rafia and bismah they are my best friends too Zainab
Oct 8th 2013
 
 
Zainab Yes nimra i'd love too, along with rafia and bismah they are my best friends too Zainab
Oct 8th 2013
 
 
Nimra Gudd one dear keep it up.. :)) well i wants 2 be ur friend can u send me a request hope we will be best friends.. :) becuz every one of ur age likes me here very much.. :) Nimra
Oct 7th 2013
 
 
Nimra Hey gudd one keep it up zainab.. :)) well will u becum my bst friend on vshine?? Nimra
Oct 6th 2013
 
 
Areeba Great job honey :) Areeba
Oct 3rd 2013
 
 
Hiba Niceeeeeee zainab. u write so well mashallah Hiba
Oct 2nd 2013
 
 
Rafia Ur welcome honey ! :) Rafia
Oct 1st 2013
 
 
Takreem Vry good nice poem:-) Takreem
Oct 1st 2013
 
 
Zainab Thank you Rafia dear Zainab
Sep 30th 2013
 
 
Rafia Oooooooo00000000!!! gr8 :) Rafia
Sep 30th 2013
 
 

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