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Rafia Ahmed
Rafia Ahmed
Usman Public School
The Old Woman (part 2)
Published On Sep 29th 2013
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When the Wakefield family arrived at their farmhouse, they ate their lunch and then had a rest for few minutes.  At the evening time Andrew was playing and suddenly got hit by the swing. His head was badly injured. Mr and Mrs. Wakefield quickly went for hospital. Now Jessica was alone with her brothers and sisters. She served them dinner and after it they all slept. It was 1:00 midnight and still mum, dad and Andrew weren’t here. Jessica got really worried but then she thought that might be the hospital is FAR and FAR away!!! . It was 1:30 now when heavy rain started. At the farmhouse, the window’s were enough big that anyone could jump in. The children were sleeping when, Jessica woke for some water and saw someone peeking in the house from the window. YES! That was an old woman. Jessica got really really frightened and she screamed. When she screamed the old woman realized that there was someone so she started jumping in the house from window to window. Jessica woke her siblings and somehow, took them to the last room where the windows were small. Jessica closed the door and shut all the windows. The children sat in a corner weeping and weeping while, the old woman was angrily knocking the door harder and harder. The phone was also in the living room where the woman was, so the children couldn’t even contact their parents. After a while the noise wasn’t there much more. The screams ended. But, the children weren’t much brave to open the door. Elizabeth was a bit brave. She said, “Jessica, we must see now. The noise is not there much more! I think she’s gone. “But, what if she’s there???” said Jessica with a worried impression on her face. Somehow the children opened the door and saw no one was there. They hurried to the phone. BUT!!!!!!!!!!!! Because of the rain the line was cut. Now the situation was worst. The children spent their night in the last room. At the morning, Mr and Mrs. Wakefield arrived at home and were really worried as they came to know about everything by Jessica. However Mr. Wakefield said, “you have seen a nightmare dear!” But Jessica refused. At last when they saw someone’s footprints because of the rain and mud, they agreed and then complained to a police station. The officer said, “Sir, that woman is really mad at children. She hates them. That is because her own son left her all alone!”...............
P.S = This was a true story and it happened with my aunt (wife of my maternal uncle)..........
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Aliza  Aamir Plz be my friend Aliza Aamir
Apr 12th 2016
 
 
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Apr 9th 2015
 
 
Nimra Eid Mubarak Rafia :) :D :* ;) ^_^ Nimra
Oct 6th 2014
 
 
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Aug 25th 2014
 
 
shehram Faboo! Shehram
Aug 25th 2014
 
 
Nimra Ohh thankyouu soo muchh rafiaa..!! :* :) miss u..! :/ :* so whts going on these days how r ur studies going?? :) did u enjoyed ur summer vacations? :) is ur school reopened?? if yes then on which date and if no then when wl it be...!!!?? :o :p andd ohh sorryyyy for the latee replyy..!!! i didnt opened vshine since 1 year butt now em backk Allahumdulilah..!! :D :) ws very very busy in studies..! as now schools r reopened so wl be busyy againn...!! :/ :( bt still i often use vshine daily now a days..!! so wl waitt for ur replyy...!! :D :)) or may be i thinkk that now u r lossttt sumwhere on earth and i dnt knw where u r..!!! :/ :o :p just saying this cuxz long time no tlk wth u..!! :/ :( + i have not seen ur any comments yet on our friends stuff's..!! well still wl wait for ur reply hope u wl reply me soon..!! :) :D Nimra
Aug 18th 2014
 
 
mubashra MISSSING OUR FUNNY DISSCUSSIONS WITH GULLASHT BAJI,RAFIA ND NIMRAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!! MISSING ALOT U MY BUDDIESSSSSSSS:( Mubashra
Jul 29th 2014
 
 
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Jul 29th 2014
 
 
mubashra RABIA ASSLAM U ALIKUM how r u dear mujhy bhool gy kia Mubashra
Jul 24th 2014
 
 
Marwa Rafia plz read my article Friend ship . LIKE AND CO MMENT Marwa
Jul 20th 2014
 
 
Munkashay Hi, Rafia, Ayesha, Ayesha, Hiba! Long time no see! How are your vacations going? Mine are kinda: STUDY, STUDY, STUDY. But maybe it will change when my friends from Japan come...! Munkashay
Jul 18th 2014
 
 
Hiba @Ayesha Imran, heyy. whats going on? how r vacations going? i even wish to see hasan n essa. im not in town these days, in islaamabad at nani's place. coming back khi nin 2-3 days IA . Hiba
Jun 24th 2014
 
 
yamna Aoa, rafia how r u?? its been a long time!!!! Yamna
Jun 15th 2014
 
 
Ayesha Heyyy!!! I am soo extremely sorry. It's been 2 months!! Are you on vacation?? I'm fine. Hasan and Essa are fine. They're 7 months old now!! I wish you could see them. They're getting really playful and whenever we scold them for something naughty, they look at us with their big gray eyes and we immediately forgive them for all their naughtiness!! Byeee! Ayesha
Jun 13th 2014
 
 
 Shiza Rafia please accept my friend ship request. Shiza
May 12th 2014
 
 
Tooba Ajwa if you are saying fatima to not do this it broke her heart so why were you,rafia and stupid saman saying things to my bro. it also broke his heart.dont only care about girls Tooba
Apr 11th 2014
 
 
Hiba @AyeshaLakho, Im really sorry for that , thought it was Ayesha Imran. anyways, I got to tell u some thing. MY previous email account is not working as in amnakhan21@hotmail.com so I made a new one: hibaahmed99@hotmail.com. Im waiting for ur email :). @Ayesha Imran,Where r u? Long time. Hows life ? U started stydying yet? U can even email me, Im waitting for ur emails :D. Hiba
Apr 9th 2014
 
 
Irum Youre welcomeee.!!! Everythings fine. And whyre u asking me about the twins/?> Shudnt you be asking Ayesha Imran??? Irum
Apr 4th 2014
 
 
Hiba Omg!! thank u soo much Ayesha. my b'day is on 30th march :). love u :*. anyways , hows everything? How r the twins? sorry for the late reply, i was having my assessments. Hiba
Apr 2nd 2014
 
 
Irum @ Hiba:Happy Belated 15th birthdAY TO THE CUTEST GIRL EVER!!Your B-day's on 29th March right, Hiba??? Irum
Mar 30th 2014
 
 
Ayesha No Ayesha
Mar 17th 2014
 
 
Hiba Aww maryam :). @Ayesha yay Pakistan won against India and Bangladesh but was unable to with Sirlanka :(. But i still love our team. Whats going on Ayesha ? Anything new? Hiba
Mar 9th 2014
 
 
Ayesha Awww, we lost. Good game, Sri Lanka. Good game, Pakistan. Pfft, I like my team better anyways. Keeps things alive and crazy. Ayesha
Mar 9th 2014
 
 
Irum Oh no no no!!! Pakistan is losing.... Please pray forrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr Pakistan everyone! But, by the time this comment will be published, The match will have been ended!!!! Irum
Mar 8th 2014
 
 
Maryam Poor me! I wish i could watch. But im okay with highlights. Maryam
Mar 6th 2014
 
 
Ayesha Of course I watched Pak vs Bangla, it was awesome! Poor Afridi got hurt, I almost cried when he got out! &afridi's 7 sixes are commendible, Keep it up, Boom Boom.....!:)I have been praying day and night for Pak to win against SriLanka.. Ayesha
Mar 6th 2014
 
 
Hiba Aww, that's good that u are buying a new kitten. Ayesha Imran , I see the true Pakistani spirit and I am in favor of it :). Did u see last nights match between Pakistan and Bangladesh? Afridi, our hero just changed the game , I mean like woww. I just loved the way he hits sixes. MA. I hope he remains this way , boom boom. No one is like him. @ Ayesha Lakho and Ayesha Imran , please pray that Pakistan wins the final of Asia cup which will be held on 8 march IA. Against Srilanka. Anyways , @Ayesha Imran how's Deejah doing ? Have u people settled here now ? Do watch the final as well on Saturday IA. And pray for Pakistans win as well. Cricket is the only thing that unites this nation. Hiba
Mar 5th 2014
 
 
Ayesha Thanks for your suggestion and advice, and you know what? Mushi died... We were all very sad.. :(After all , she's very old.. Me and Deejah are either helping our mom with the twins, or going around to Ayesha Lakho's house, as she lives quite near. She lives just 2 minute away.And, yeah, we'll go on Sunday with Ayesha Lakho to choose a new kitten. And another thing! Pakistan won!!Cricket match between Pakistan and India today. Men glued to the screens. Not only in my home - all over neighbourhood. Screams of happiness and loud disappointments heard from every neighbour. Last minutes were the most tense... and... Pakistan just won - wild screams from all over the place and shooting starting outside... no, not war - just celebration of victory Pakistani style! Ayesha
Mar 4th 2014
 
 
Ayesha Thanks for your suggestion and advice, and you know what? Mushi died... We were all very sad.. :(After all , she's very old.. Me and Deejah are either helping our mom with the twins, or going around to Ayesha Lakho's house, as she lives quite near. She lives just 2 minute away.And, yeah, we'll go on Sunday with Ayesha Lakho to choose a new kitten. And another thing! Pakistan won!!Cricket match between Pakistan and India today. Men glued to the screens. Not only in my home - all over neighbourhood. Screams of happiness and loud disappointments heard from every neighbour. Last minutes were the most tense... and... Pakistan just won - wild screams from all over the place and shooting starting outside... no, not war - just celebration of victory Pakistani style! Ayesha
Mar 4th 2014
 
 
Irum Hey you guys!!!Pakistan won!! Can you believe it? We just kicked India out of the Asian Cup! Keep rocking with your sixes, Boom Boom Afridi!! Did any of you guys see the match? Irum
Mar 4th 2014
 
 
Hiba Yes i do have many pets , we have an aquarium with many fish of all sizes , rabbits , ducks and hens . According to me , u should buy a new cat , maybe cause ur previous cat will not be able to adjust to the climate here and may die , the best thing to do is to buy a new one. Happy belated birthday to the twinies :P. I hope that u like my suggesstion :). whats Deejah up to ? :') . Hows life in Pakistan going? One advice , due to security threats and issues , donot tell anyone that u shifted here from USA. Hiba
Mar 2nd 2014
 
 
Ayesha Oh sorry sorry! I was mistaken. We'll give the O'Levels exams after two years. We're just in 9th now! But O'Levels doesn't have any restriction. I like that.. You can do the exam when you're 13 or 12 or whatever. Oh and I forgot to tell. We turned 14 on January!! And the twins are almost 4 months old;)And another thing, We shifted near Teen Talwar. It's a nice bungalow with a garage and it even has a swimming pool! I cant wait for summer to come so I can swim in it. And we also have to do the cleaning of it and whatever!!Another problem has arised. We had a cat , whose name is Mushi, And we gave it to our neighbours to keep when we came to Pakistan for holidays. And nopw we're staying in Pakistan! Who's gonna bring her here. Because you know, she's almost a family member now. She has been with us since 15 years. Whenever someone asks us her name, we say it's Mushi Imran. Without her, it's like our house is empty. We were thinking of getting her shipped to us, But she's really aggressive and won't let anybody touch or hold her, and anyways, she's getting really old... What can we do??BTW, do u have any pets, Hiba?? Ayesha
Mar 2nd 2014
 
 
 Shiza Awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and keep it up! Shiza
Feb 22nd 2014
 
 
Hiba That's great Ayesha, but u have to give geography as well , Pakistan studies is one subject , u have to give both , history and geography papers this year. U just can't choose either of them. Just think about it. How's Deejah? When r u shifting? Feburary is almost gone. Hiba
Feb 15th 2014
 
 
afifah I thought you were my friend Afifah
Feb 15th 2014
 
 
Ayesha Mama will. And I'm opting for History, Islamiat, and Urdu this year. Mama says that these much are enough for me and Deejah. We didn't have time to visit as we're really busy with all the packing, and what with the twins crying all the time!!! It's very hectic!! Ayesha
Feb 12th 2014
 
 
Hiba U know that the dolphin show people r going back at the end of this month. Who will teach u? Which subjects r u opting for ? I went to the dolphin show on Wednesday. Where else is in khi did you visit ? Hiba
Feb 7th 2014
 
 
afifah Hey friends! Afifah
Feb 7th 2014
 
 
Ayesha Thanks for understanding;) And we're here permanently . And, another BIG change is in our lives, we're gonna do homeschooling and we'll do private O'Levels. Fatimah Baji is almost out of school.Well, Jo hoga dekha jaega;)Oh, and hey, did you go see the Dolphin Show, Hibba Bibba?? We went;) Ayesha
Jan 30th 2014
 
 
Hiba No problem , she's right , security is a major issue here . r u shifting here permanenetky or temporaily ? where will u study then ? i;m sure u will start school from august right ? which grade will u guys be in ? Hiba
Jan 29th 2014
 
 
Ayesha We are shifting soon. At the end of February, we'll be successfully settled down!! ;) But, we can't meet you;( You know why? Because my mother said that I could invite ONLY 1 friend from VShine to my house . And that was Ayesha Lakho. I asked her if I could invite you. But she said, "Phir tum ziada free ho jao gee, mushkilon sey to mein ney tumhey ijazat dee hey, phir bhee tum naraaz ho?" She's worried about safety , I think...We dont have an FB account. ;( And I think we're shifting to Clifton... Ayesha
Jan 27th 2014
 
 
Hiba Omg that's great Ayesha and Deejah :). When r u guys shifting ? Yay we can atleast get to meet then :). Get a house in defense. But u know Pakistan is no longer safe :/. Especially Karachi. When u come , study in my school :p. And r u on Facebook ? How was ur trip to Karachi ? :D Hiba
Jan 24th 2014
 
 
Ayesha Good news, Hiba. Actually, it's a GREAT news. When we were in America , my dad always was reluctant in working in America. He always wanted a job in a Muslim country. So, Me and Deejah have always prayed to live in a Muslim country, We have prayed daily for ALL our lives. And, now, On Friday, I prayed to Allah so that Dad could have a job in Karachi as I don't like going to America because it is secular. And whenever I have to go back to America, I get very homesick for Karachi. So, as usual, I prayed. And, on the next day, my mom asked us three sisters to come in our parents' room. Confused, we went. Our dad was sitting on the bed, when we came in he got up and said, "So, girls, I have a veryyy important thing to tell you. It may change the rest of our lives." We were confused, I said, "Why, Baba, what happened,?'' I thought something bad had happened. But then my dad said witha smile on his face , "Girls, I have a job in Khi." And then the whole room burst into cheers. Fatimah Baji was on one knee,both hands on her head, and saying, "Alhamdulillah, Alhamdulillah, Alhamdulillah, '' repeatedly. Me and Deejah each had a twin brother in our hands and were holding them up and running around the room, while my mother was smiling and my dad was trying to get Fatimah baji back from her trance, It was one of the BEST days of my life. I'm going to saty FOR EVER AND EVER AND EVER AND EVER IN KARACHI... iT'S TOO GOOD TO BE TRUE!! Ayesha
Jan 22nd 2014
 
 
Hiba Hahahah Ayesha , i can be a tourist guide for u as well :P. Anyways now only 2-3 days r left , visit as many places as possible . in which area r u guys staying ? how r the little twins ? :) Hiba
Jan 16th 2014
 
 
Ayesha Yes , we went to Nueplex. Of course we'll go to Gelato Affairs, Barbeque Tonight, and e.t.c. You're recommending to us so many places that I feel as if I have my personal guide n Pakistan. When we first came here, we felt soooo lost, coz we didn't know where to visit, where to dine , waghera waghera!! Ayesha
Jan 14th 2014
 
 
hafsa RAFIA its so long u didnt talk to m what hapened dear Hafsa
Jan 14th 2014
 
 
Hiba @Deejah, that's so sweet of u :). I don't like to hurt others feelings :D. Anyways which cinema did u go to ? Don't go to the ocean mall cinema , it's expensive and the screen is small as well. Go to nueplex, that's pskistans largest 3D cinema. I love frozen. It's a great movie. The best place to have an ice-cream is gelato affairs in ocean mall and forum. Taste their chocolate fudge brownie ice-cream. It's just heavenly. If u want to have barbecue then go to barbecue tonight. That's the best BBQ resturAnt in Karachi. If possible then go to Atrium mall as well but thats in saddar :(. Anyways enjoy ur trip and make the most out of it :) Hiba
Jan 13th 2014
 
 
Khadijah @ HIba, yes, me and Ayesha and Ayesha had an awesome time at Dolmen Mall, you are such a good friend, you're the only one on VShine who recommends us to go to places and you appreciate us:) You have never once disrespected us. Oh, and we went to watch "Frozen" at the Cinema. Yes, we also did shopping, wherever we go, people are always so amazed that we are twins and our brothers are also twins. Khadijah
Jan 13th 2014
 
 
Hiba Aww Ayesha, how was Dolmen ? I just simply love it . and 10 more days to go :). Do visit Ocean mall and The Place . if u have time then watch a movie at Nueplex as well. it is on the top floor of Nueplex. Did u do any shopping ? Hiba
Jan 12th 2014
 
 
hibba Hey thats great i very gud effort i like it and keep it up :)) Hibba
Jan 7th 2014
 
 
Ayesha Uhhhh, we are here till 20th January 2014. And yes, OF COURSE Deejah went with us. And my cousins, mamun, khala, aunts and uncles are all sooo mad about Hasan and Essa. Coz now they're the youngest of the cousins. Everyone just wants to play with them!! Ayesha
Jan 2nd 2014
 
 
Hiba That's great :D. So till when r u guys in khi ? And didn't deejah go with u ? How the twin boys ? :) and a happy new year to u and all the other vshine members . Hiba
Jan 1st 2014
 
 
Ayesha Well, abhi tak I i went to dolmen mall with ayesha lakho. and also port grand. Oh, and Happy New Year too! Ayesha
Dec 31st 2014
 
 
Hiba So Ayesha , whats going on these days in khi? which places did u visit ? Hiba
Dec 29th 2013
 
 
Ayesha Hey, check out my new story! I really need some comments! Ayesha
Dec 29th 2013
 
 
hafsa Hi rafia. how r u ? Hafsa
Dec 25th 2013
 
 
Irum Okay I wanna tell u guyz sumthing. Me and ayesha imran are also friends on some other social website. At first, we didn't know that we were on VShine as well. but when we found out, we became even good friends, and we gave each other our Vshine passwords. So thats why you guyz have been recieving comments which are really Ayesha Imrans from my account./....... I hope u dont think that ayesha imran as a bad girl from now on. It is not her fault at all. She is still the sweet girl u knew:) please forgive her. She didn't do this on purpose alsooo!! Irum
Dec 23rd 2013
 
 
Irum Sorry my account is hacked Irum
Dec 23rd 2013
 
 
Irum Srry my acc is hacked Irum
Dec 22nd 2013
 
 
Irum We arrived 2day on karachi this morning at 12. We're staying at Marriott Hotel. I got jet lag. It's so annoying, right?? Irum
Dec 22nd 2013
 
 
Hiba Thats great Ayesha :). Enjoy here and e safe , my orayers are with u :D. Ayways do visit Dolmen City Mall., Nueplex , Portgrand & Ocean Mall. Having fun here? For how long are u all here? Hiba
Dec 22nd 2013
 
 
Ayesha Good news, every bodyyyy!!! I am coming to Karachi!!! My flight is on 21st December , I just cannnott waitt!! All of my cousins are there.. Me and deejah are also very excited. At first we weren't going, but then our cousins wanted to see Hasan and Essa.. and after a loooong argument, we are finally coming!! Ayesha
Dec 19th 2013
 
 
Hiba @Ayesha , I agree , its like ur mother land isn't it? Pakistan is a beautiful place but if the law and order situation is good , u can enjoy the beauty throlly :D . and which city do u visit? Hiba
Dec 16th 2013
 
 
hafsa Hi rafia . how r u . itnay dinoo sey bat nahi hovi. Hafsa
Dec 15th 2013
 
 
Ayesha America is good, but Pakistan is my native land.Maybe we'll cum in winter vacations!! Dua karo key hum aajaeen!! :) Ayesha
Dec 14th 2013
 
 
Hiba Aaah , I even wanna come here :D. how often do u come to Pakistan? Hiba
Dec 13th 2013
 
 
Ayesha Right back at ya, Rafii!! And Hiba, I live in USA, north america, California..!! Ayesha
Dec 11th 2013
 
 
Hiba Awww thats so sweet ayesha but when they'll be about an year or 2, they'll drive u crazy :p. btw which state of USA do u live in? Hiba
Dec 10th 2013
 
 
Rafia Awwwww............ ayesha jani! u r such a darling honey :)) love u soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much :))) sooo....... whatz up dear ???? :)))))) Rafia
Dec 9th 2013
 
 
Ayesha Nothing much. Just running about the house taking care of the twins. Seriously, they are driving us crazy!!:) Ayesha
Dec 8th 2013
 
 
Hiba That's soo sweet of u dear Ayesha. Love u soo much. So whats going on these days ? Hiba
Dec 7th 2013
 
 
Ayesha @Rafia, Munkashay and Hiba: You are very very nice people on VShine!! And I'm in the striped shirt!:) Ayesha
Dec 6th 2013
 
 
Rafia Ayesha dear it's nyc of u that u thinked of ur frnd ayesha lakho nd there's no need of sorry honey :)) well, u both look really sweet nd pretty :))) Rafia
Dec 6th 2013
 
 
Munkashay Ayesha, don't you ever think that me, Munkashay Latif, minds anything said by my friends! Munkashay
Dec 6th 2013
 
 
Hiba Its ok Ayesha , we all lie at times but its always good to confess later :). which one is u ? the one in the striped shirt or the plain blue one? I forgive u :). u re so pretty and cute MA. Hiba
Dec 5th 2013
 
 
Ayesha To all u Vshine frnds out there I want to confess something!! You guyz know that Picture of 2 chinese girls I uploaded and Then I said it was me and Deejah? Well, those girls weren't us. They were just unknown girls from the Net. I lied because when Ayesha Lakho asked to upload a picture of mine and Dejeah's pictures, My mom didn't allow me to do that, so I uploaded A fake picture of 2 Chinese girls from the Net. My new profile picture is of the REAL me and Deejah. To my Vshine friends, I hope you willl 4give me for lying:) Ayesha
Dec 3rd 2013
 
 
Rafia Ok daer zainab :) i'll check :)) nd sooooo sorry for late reply catually i was admitted in the hospital for past few weeks ... Rafia
Dec 2nd 2013
 
 
Zainab Rafia u have abid majeed,AHMAD haroon and only these two in you frnd list. are you feeling angry about it just because i said this little thing? sorry i was mistaken u only have 2 boys and did u delete affan faisal, or u didnt have him the whole time? Zainab
Nov 29th 2013
 
 
Hiba @Ayesha u must me bullying Khadijah a little bit for being the elder twin . Don't u ?? So how's life going ?? When are ur exams ?? Hiba
Nov 28th 2013
 
 
Ayesha Hasan is elder by 90 seconds. And I am elder by three minutes Ayesha
Nov 28th 2013
 
 
hafsa And ya plz see my poem no body sees it exept rafia. Hafsa
Nov 22nd 2013
 
 
Azka Sub mere liay dua mangain k mein 1st aa jaon with full marks.......and ill do it 4 u........every body pray 4 meeeeeeee to cum 1st 1st n 1st........plllllllzzzzzz....specially pray that i get full in literature......... Azka
Nov 20th 2013
 
 
Hiba That's so sweet Ayesha , Now I even wish that I had twin baby brothers or sisters . Whose the elder one and by how many minutes ? And are the girls in ur profile pic , u and Khadijah?? Who is the elder one , u Or Khadijah ? Hiba
Nov 20th 2013
 
 
Ayesha @HIBA:well, theres not much to them , is there? i mean theyre as small as kittens.. they have to be atleast 1 yr old to pick favourites!!:)) Ayesha
Nov 19th 2013
 
 
Ayesha Thank you, areebe hiba Ayesha
Nov 19th 2013
 
 
Khadija :D goodie!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Khadija
Nov 18th 2013
 
 
hafsa my studies r also good but our exams have started yet and what about you . and mubrooook!ayesha and kadijah for your twin brothers .how r they . fine . Hafsa
Nov 18th 2013
 
 
Hiba Aww that's sooooo cute dear Ayesha , which one do u like more , Hasan or Essa? Hiba
Nov 17th 2013
 
 
Rafia A0A Hafsa .... em fine dear nd studies r going good... what about u honey ?? :)) Rafia
Nov 17th 2013
 
 
Areeba Sorry for the late reply dears, but a very hearty ''CONGRATULATIONS'' to both of you, Khadijah and Ayesha! Once again I am sorry :) Areeba
Nov 17th 2013
 
 
Ayesha The are as cute as ever. And yeah, Hasan and Essa are the ones in Khadijahs profile picture.. Things at home are very busy nowadays!!!What with the Little Twins and this and that....:)) Ayesha
Nov 17th 2013
 
 
Hiba Love u to Ayesha and I didn't know that u were sooooooooooooo sweet . how are ur brothers?? are the babies in Khadijahs profile pic ur brothers?? Hiba
Nov 16th 2013
 
 
hafsa Hi everybody. how r u rafia . and hows ur study. Hafsa
Nov 16th 2013
 
 
Rafia My dear no need of sorry .. itz the same w8 me honey :)) so whatx up ?? :)) Rafia
Nov 15th 2013
 
 
eesha Heyyyyyy rafiaa ...sooooo gladdddddddd u r back.n no need to thnx yra...remember no sorry n thnkx in frnship??u r really the gr8est person i ever met...LUV U TO BITS <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 BTW sorry for late reply..i am not regular on vshine Eesha
Nov 14th 2013
 
 
Khadijah Thank youuu!!!! Khadijah
Nov 12th 2013
 
 
Ayesha Their names are Hasan and Essa.. And thank you soo much for the AWESOME comments Rafia and Hiba!!!Love u soo much!!!U made my day.. Ayesha
Nov 12th 2013
 
 
Hiba U are the sweetest girl I have ever met Rafia. And Khadijah and Ayesha congradulations and what did u name them? Hiba
Nov 9th 2013
 
 
Arwa Thank u sooooooooo much Rafia :) :) Arwa
Nov 9th 2013
 
 
Rafia MASHALLAH!!!!!!!! em really very happy for u both ayesha nd khadijah :) CONGRATZ ... Say my congratzz to ur parents too ...well, what names they got ?? :))) Rafia
Nov 9th 2013
 
 
Ayesha Yes, I've named one of the twins Hasan and deejah has named the other one Essa... I am soooo happy, but my dad's the happiest.. I mean, he finally has sons!! And he has two, instead of one!! deejah, you arent etting jealous of Essa , are u?? I know u are!!! Ayesha
Nov 9th 2013
 
 
Khadijah Yeah, now we are five siblings. We jumped from three to five. You should have seen Fatimah Baji's face when the news came that TWIN baby boys were born!!!She looked like she had seen a ghost.:) Me and Ayesha were jumping and screaming like crazy girls in front of all the doctors, but she was like, oh my god, TWINS!! Beacause, you know, she's so fed up with our ricks that she figured that another baby in the house wud help us to get more mature. But now theyre twins too and that means more tricks on Fatimah Baji!! The expression on her face was EPIC!!!!All the other people in the waiting room were staring at our threesome as if we had gone mad..... :)) Khadijah
Nov 9th 2013
 
 
ajwa U r now like twin sisterz AND twin botherz??!! Ajwa
Nov 8th 2013
 
 
Khadijah Hy guyzz. Today my twin baby brothers were born..Seriously, they are shoooooo cute, I wish I could just pinch their cheeks!!! Khadijah
Nov 8th 2013
 
 
Ayesha Masha'ALLAH, this morning Allah(SWT) blessed me with twin baby brothers.... Alhamdulillah! Ayesha
Nov 8th 2013
 
 
Rafia Thatz a girl in my school dear ... not u :)) u r indeed a very true frnd honey :))) Rafia
Nov 7th 2013
 
 
Arwa Which fatima ??? rafia Arwa
Nov 7th 2013
 
 
Rafia Oooooooh!!!! thatz sooooooooo sweet of u dear :))) Rafia
Nov 6th 2013
 
 
Hiba Same here my dear , i pray that we could meet somehow and thats so sweet of u dear , u have left me speechless Hiba
Nov 6th 2013
 
 
rabia OMG!!! WHAT THE HELL FATMAH??!!??!! ...... Rafia u didnt told me??? why dear???? Rabia
Nov 5th 2013
 
 
Rafia My sweet heart ...... i love u more than anything ..... being ur frnd is like i am on the top of the world .......i wish that somehow i could really meet u honey :)) Rafia
Nov 5th 2013
 
 
Hiba Awwwwwwwwww that's soooooooooooooooo sweet of u dear :))) love u soo much dear . I love u the most a person could love anyone . Why don't u email me dear ?? Hiba
Nov 4th 2013
 
 
Rafia Not at all honey!! i love more than anythingggggg!!!!! more than myself ... my teddy ... my diary nd even my pocket money!! I LOVE U THE MOST!! :)))) Rafia
Nov 3rd 2013
 
 
Hiba Awwww Rafia, I think u r saying the opposite. u are the one who leaves me speechless not right now but always. my dear I am waiting for ur email. love u to the moon and back <333333 Hiba
Nov 2nd 2013
 
 
Rafia No problem dear khadijah .. the reason for adding u in my profile is that u r simply gr8 honey :))) nd hiba ... u always leaves me speechless yar! but i can surely say that my love for u is even more dearest sister :)))))))) Rafia
Nov 2nd 2013
 
 
Hiba Hahahaha no , I love u most :) . acha Saturday 4 is confirm right? cant wait till then. heres some thing for u. "best friends are hard to find but luckily u are one of mine." love u to bits Rafiaaaaaaaaaaa. u are like a rare gem dear, difficult to find. oh and yes u are the most precious person to me as well :) Hiba
Nov 1st 2013
 
 
l Thanks Rafia for adding my name in your profile.....Seriously You ARE so sweet. L
Nov 1st 2013
 
 
Rafia Aoa ... thnkuu afifah dear but u urself r toooo good that even ppl like me seems great to u honey :):):) U R SIMPLY BEST :))) Rafia
Nov 1st 2013
 
 
Rafia Aoa ... thnkuu afifah dear but u urself r toooo good that even ppl like me seems great to u honey :):):) U R SIMPLY BEST :))) Rafia
Nov 1st 2013
 
 
afifah Hey come on.. losing sometimes is also a fun:) Afifah
Nov 1st 2013
 
 
Rafia HEY! I am soooooooooooooooooooooo sad that Pakistan lost the match by only 1 run :( shameful indeed ... Rafia
Oct 31st 2013
 
 
Rafia Ok my sweet hearts :):):) well ... dear em not confirmed w8 the time ... i THINK 4:00 ... ok dear :):) nd i can say nd i believe that i love u both more than u :) u both r really really special for me :) even my frnds thinks that we ARE sisters ... nd still today thatz the same thing w8 them coz i hav told that u both r most most most most precious to me ":))) I REALLY REALLY LOVE U BOTH SOOOOO MUCH :) Rafia
Oct 31st 2013
 
 
afifah Hey thanks:), and same for you, from heart:). You really are a great and unique friend:):D Afifah
Oct 31st 2013
 
 
Areeba Oh rafia dear I would be ever sooooo glad if u could mail me any day u wish! Saturday will just be perfectly fine! Please my dear I am very impatient for ur sweet replies. Inshallah I will receive ur mail as soon as possible. Can u only mail us on Saturday or u will continue mailing from then! Please reply honey because u are very precious and dear to me and I love u like anything honey :))))))))))))))))))))))))) Areeba
Oct 30th 2013
 
 
Hiba Hahahahaha ok Rafia, u know I love u even more and I am fine with Saturday. tell me the time , I will try to open my email on that so we can have a conversation on email. Cant wait till then :) Hiba
Oct 30th 2013
 
 
Rafia Areeba nd Hiba .... thatz really really sweet of u dear ones :)) however i'll really really try to mail u both :) is SATURDAY suitable for it??? :)) nd i also missed u both sssssooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much :)) love u alot! :) Rafia
Oct 30th 2013
 
 
Maryam Oh dear! Next part kab send karo gi ab intazar nahi hota jaldi karo warna................... thora or intazar kar lein gay.! Maryam
Oct 29th 2013
 
 
Areeba Oh Rafia my dear, I am sooo glad that you are finally back on vshine! I was informed by Hiba of all the hacking part and I feel very sorry for u! Even now hiba told me about your last comment so I decided to comment back! but dear why don't u reply on mail! cant u please please mail because I check my mail more often than vshine! I have mailed u and Rabia Api many times! Oh please I want to ask u some things! Or cant u mail by Rabia Api's email! Anyways have u made up with Fatima (the hacker)! Oh Rafia u cant just imagine how much I missed u! Up till now my inbox is incomplete because I get no mails from you! Can u please try to mail by ur email! ''PLEASE'' Areeba
Oct 29th 2013
 
 
Hiba It's ok Rafia but I had some pictures to email u. Why arent using ur email dear?? Please tell ne and I told Areeba bout u and she said that she will try to use vshine and she missses u alot . Anyways about u I want to say that ur are an Angel sent by God. I thank Allah so much to have you as my friend and am one of the lucky ones who has a friend like u and a few are only blessed to have u:)) may Allah bless u always . And remain my friend forever . Waiting for ur reply Hiba
Oct 29th 2013
 
 
Rafia Afifah ... i missed u more honey! i literally cry without all of u :(:( thnx my sister :):) love u sooooooo much honey :) MAY ALLAH SWT GIVE U THE HIGHEST RANK IN JANNAH ... MAY UR ALL WISHES COME TRUE :))) ameeeeeeeeeen :) Rafia
Oct 29th 2013
 
 
Rafia No problem munkashay :):) u r seriously a darling sister :)) Rafia
Oct 29th 2013
 
 
Rafia Hiba ..... my sister i am sooooooo sorry dear but i dont really use my mail :( i cannot reply u nd areeba ... plz plz inform areeba that i am missing her very much .. tell her to join vshine!! nd dear whatever u want to ask me .. u can ! but if its really personal than give me a hint about it so i'll really try to b in-contact with u personally ... Hiba my dear .. u all frnds r such darling :))) i really really love u all nd well dear ... if u want to say anything about ME nd if u think that i'll mind so plz plz just dont think that nd tell me whatever u want to say .. even on vshine .. i am not a type of girl that MINDS any thing by her beloved sisters :)))))) Rafia
Oct 28th 2013
 
 
Rafia Oh! my dear Hafsa ...... JAZAKALLAH honey .... my all prayers nd wishes r w8 u dear :):) may ALLAH SWT fulfill ur all wishes ... well, about FATIMAH ,,,, she is my classmate ... we were bestest frnds frm grade 3 .... but nowadays, she thought that i love u ppl more than her ... nd then a fought begin ... BUT I KNOW THAT I TREAT EVERYONE EQUALLY!! SERIOUSLYYY!!! ...... nd then she hated me sooo much that she even prayed for my death ..... but nothing can b done without ALLAH's will :)))) however JAZAKALLAH dear frnd :)))) Rafia
Oct 28th 2013
 
 
Munkashay It's okay, Rafia sis. Anytime! and THANKS for the Dua! Munkashay
Oct 28th 2013
 
 
afifah Hey... my friend, thank God you are back yra:) i missed you so much Afifah
Oct 28th 2013
 
 
Hiba Oh God , is it really u Rafia ?? My heart is filled with joy after I read this . I knew that this day was not far. Yaar please reply to my email . If not from ur email account then rabia's . I appreciate the way that u are dealing with Fatima the hacker . May Allah bless u always . I know that I was rude to Fatima but I know I had to :( love u to bits Rafia . Yaar please reply to mine and Areebas email . I want to talk to u privately ., My prayers are always with u dear . ( This was for the real Rafia)) Hiba
Oct 27th 2013
 
 
hafsa Oooh god !!!!!! thanks a lot for that rafia has came backk!!!!!. and rafia your a such a great muslim . ( may allah guid u in all the difficulties in your whole life and we all really love u from our deeep heart. ) and by the way who was She ? Hafsa
Oct 27th 2013
 
 
Rafia Afifah Maryam, Hiba Ahmed, Eesha Fatima, Munkashay Latif, Zainab Saleem Toor, Khadijah Ahsan, Ajwa Arsalan, Hafsa Rahmat and Khadijah Abdul Quddus ...... the support of all of you was a great and most precious thing to me !!! u people are so nice that I literally cry when i read all the comments by the hacker which WERE bad to all of u!!! so soRRRRrrrry my dear ones ...... MAY ALLAH SWT GIVE U ALL THE HIGHEST RANK IN JANNAH .... MAY ALLAH SWT FULFILL YOUR ALL WISHES ..... MAY YOU ALL BE HAPPY ALWAYS!!! ameeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeennnnn :))))) Rafia
Oct 27th 2013
 
 
Rafia JAZAKALLAH Munkashay dear :))) u r soooooooo kind honey :)) nd YUP! OFCOURSE u r right ...... i know that i hav committed many MISTAKES but I know that i haven't done any sin (ALHAMDULILLAH) ... thnx for all prayers :)) MAY ALLAH SWT GIVE YOU THE HIGHEST RANK IN JANNAH (ameeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeen) :)))) Rafia
Oct 27th 2013
 
 
Munkashay See, Fatima,SEE? Your comment and her comment? And she forgave for all those bad words? Wow! You are a true Muslim, Rafia. May your all sins be forgiven... (I don't think u did any, but, at least one is done by everyone, right?) AMEEN Munkashay
Oct 27th 2013
 
 
Rafia .......... I AM SPEECHLESS MY DEAR FRIENDS!! now I AM Rafia Ahmed :) the real one ... i hav changed my password ... it's nyc to see all ur love .... u ppl r ..... sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo gr8!! i dont know what 2 say ... I AM SO LUCKY ... nd Fatimah (hacker) , my dear ... if u found me so bad so why didnt u told me honey! i never ever thought anything bad of ur's or anyone's ... I LOVE MY ALL FRIENDS ... YEAH! BUT IT'S TRUE THAT AFIFAH, HIBA, EESHA, AREEBA, ND ALL MENTIONED IN MY FRND LIST R PIECES OF MY HEART! i love u too dear ... nd i love u as i love them (equally) .. other stuff i'll talk 2 u at school :) don't b scared ... i will be kind ... nd i'll not b angry on ANY single word ... ok? :) MAY ALLAH SWT LEAD U TO THE RIGHT PATH ... nd my dear vshine frnds ... u all r the blessings which ALLAH SWT has showered on me :) my love cannot b expressed in words but i am so sorry hiba, eesha, afifah , nimra, ayesha nd areeba .. i cannot reply u at yahoo mail :( i am not using it ... as far as ur mail afifah .. OFCOURSE a phone no. cannot come b/w our frndship :)) nd ur brother is elder .. he's right !! he know better tha me :)) JAZAKALLAH once again my frnds ... my all prayers nd wishes will b always with u all :)) (THIS TIME I WAS THE REAL RAFIA ... :D ) Rafia
Oct 27th 2013
 
 
ajwa OMG!!!!! this is very bad!!!!fatima u r such a pathetic person.....!!!!!! u broke rafia's heart....she loves us....shez such a nyc grl...she even luvz u but ur being so mean...plzzzz leave rafia alone..........!!!!!!!! Ajwa
Oct 26th 2013
 
 
hafsa Eesha. and all our friend we have to do something and this hacker is going really mad . Hafsa
Oct 26th 2013
 
 
Hiba I AGREE WITH U EESHA ND BOTH THE KHADIJA'S. FATIMAH JUST STOP THIS NONSENSE. ENOUGH IS ENOUGH . JUST LEARN BEHAVE AND LEAVE THIS WEBSITE. I actually feel bad for Rafia. She is actually an angel sent by God. Seek forgiveness from Rafia , She will forgive you and just stop this . Hiba
Oct 26th 2013
 
 
eesha Rafia..........u shud make another account n nw PLZZZZZZZZ be sensible n dont give fatimah ur password!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Fatimah stop this absurdities n grow up!!!! u cant go lyk this forever hacking account....n i cant believe that u said u wish she dies................!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! n BTW.....IF U HATE RAFIA N WISH THAT SHE DIES THAN Y R U DYING TO BE HER ONLY FRND??????????U R MENTALLY RETARDED... first decide whether u hate her or want to becum her frnd than comment Eesha
Oct 26th 2013
 
 
hafsa And where is she tellme . ok u hacker .tum jahannam sey nai darti plz abb bi time hai tuba kar lo . aur os becari kay account ko hack karna cordo plz . Hafsa
Oct 26th 2013
 
 
hafsa Munkashay i really really totally agree with u. and fatima fear from the day of judgement plzz . and stop saying i hate rafia and may she die bla bla bla . and stop hacking her account ok leave her . your not heart broken your only evil. we all hate. and we love love love rafia ok. Hafsa
Oct 26th 2013
 
 
Munkashay Rafia is so friendly and you? First, You hack in her account and...... I- I can't believe it! You are wishing that.... that... She D-dies? How can you?! How can Vshine simply publish this? Please..... If you are a Muslim so fear god AND stop behaving like that! Change your password, Rafia! (The real one) :=( Munkashay
Oct 26th 2013
 
 
hafsa We all hate u. fatimah we all just hate u. Hafsa
Oct 26th 2013
 
 
hafsa Excuse me she is our friend and will be our ok . u just shut up on your own mouth. mein nai tum jaisey bohot dekay hai . tum uss sai jilous hoti ho . jilisar. oo hai kahan han . ussai tum pasan ho or tum batimeiz . tumein saram ani cahia Hafsa
Oct 26th 2013
 
 
Zainab Rafia please you have to change your password! the fatima, i hate her! you have to see the things she has written about you, and fatima, how dare u say a thing like that, rafia should leave u, now i see ur personality :( Zainab
Oct 25th 2013
 
 
afifah Ohhhhh God.. what on earth is happening here? I am confused and all I know is that at least Rafia can never do this. Please explain it whoever you are and stop it please. We all are friends and we can all be, forever, there is no need to fight. Afifah
Oct 25th 2013
 
 
Rafia SHUT UP ALL OF U!!!! nd eesha did u really thought that it was rafia? I WROTE THE COMMENTS nd I HATE RAFIA FRM THE DEPTH OF MY HEART! may she die!!! Rafia
Oct 25th 2013
 
 
Khadijah I totally agree with Khadija And I really think you should leave her account alone because hacking is BAD and you are causing trouble in the whole website. You really should forgive her. DOES ANYONE AGREE? Khadijah
Oct 25th 2013
 
 
eesha Rafia..i dont believe it if u r playing a prank then i think it is enough......n if u really r Fatimah then i wud say that whether u hate rafia or not I HATE U! how dare u say a thing lyk that.u r soooo selfish!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Rafia is a sweet darling n u...................stop hacking her account......bt if its really u rafia then plzzzz stop this prank Eesha
Oct 25th 2013
 
 
afifah You know what, fatimah, you are totally mental, and don't you know that whatever you are doing to become her best friend is totally insane. And Rafia didn't write that poem for you. She is a loving girl and that's why everyone loves her. Afifah
Oct 25th 2013
 
 
l Oh My god!!!!! what is happening...I mean hacking accounts...!!!Well as far as Rafia is concerned she is quite friendly and i like her alot....and u should toooo....I THINK SO U SHOULD FORGIVE AND AGAIN BE FRIEND WITH HER!!!!!!!! L
Oct 24th 2013
 
 
Rafia Well how many of u really loves rafia?? what do u think about her ??? u can tell me .. she's not here! Rafia
Oct 24th 2013
 
 
Rafia Nothing much hafsa .. i am just disturbing rafia coz i hate her!! I AM THE HACKER "FATIMA" on whom rafia wrote the poem ( I am heartbroken ) .. i am so angry . i didnt asked her anything except to leave her vshine frnds (all of YOU)... as i just wanted to b her frnd!!!!but she said that she loves everyone equally (even me) nd wants everyone!! but i want to b done what I WISH!!!WHAT IF SHE VISITS THIS WEBSITE !! OOOOHH!! It would be so exciting .. i wish she gets a heart-attack!!! it would b a lovely day when she will die!! Rafia
Oct 24th 2013
 
 
Rafia IN SIMPLE WORDS .. I AM THE HACKER!! HOWEVER ABOUT RAFIA, SHE COMES TO SCHOOL DAILY AND IS SERIOUSLY INCOMPLETE WITHOUT U :( I FEEL SAD BUT....... HOWEVER SHE MISSES U ALOT ND MOSTLY I SEE HER CRYING .. WHEN I ASKS HER (as she dont know that i am the hacker) SHE SAYS THAT SHE CANNOT FIGHT HER TEARS BACK AS SHE WANTS NOTHING EXCEPT U !! ... SORRrrrY Rafia
Oct 23rd 2013
 
 
afifah Who are you then and WHERE IS MY FRIEND...? Afifah
Oct 23rd 2013
 
 
hafsa I was very busy because of there is a lot of home work. and from some days i am soo ill and there is a lot of study to do. oor tum sonou Hafsa
Oct 22nd 2013
 
 
Rafia Hey! em ALHAMDULILLAH fine .. nd u dear?? :)) where were u frm so long ?? :) Rafia
Oct 21st 2013
 
 
hafsa Hi . how are you. Hafsa
Oct 20th 2013
 
 
Rafia NO! Afifah i am not Rafia ... Rafia
Oct 20th 2013
 
 
Rafia Yep! u r right mathilda :):):):) names r frm sweet valley series :) Rafia
Oct 20th 2013
 
 
mathilda I think u read those SWEET VALLEY series (becauze ov the names) ;) btw gud one :D Mathilda
Oct 19th 2013
 
 
afifah Hey are you Rafia?...??? Afifah
Oct 18th 2013
 
 
Rafia Nd zainab dear for who u r saying that i should add as a frnd however he's a boy ??? :) Rafia
Oct 18th 2013
 
 
Rafia No .. no ... Zainab ....... there are no boys in my frnd list .. I DONT ADD BOYS AS FRNDS !!!!! if u see than tell me plz dear :)) Rafia
Oct 18th 2013
 
 
Zainab Me too ajwa, ur so sweet... everyone ive met till now is sweet, i often come on vshine evryday. and rafia, i checked ur prfile and you have added boys, well that is not kind but u have 3-4 boys as fr&s. u should add him its ok if hes a boy Zainab
Oct 17th 2013
 
 
ajwa Zainab i read ur about me and i got to know that fatima is ur sis( shes pretty cute) and i wud luuuuv to be ur frnd! <3 u !!!!5 Ajwa
Oct 16th 2013
 
 
ajwa Its okay zaineb and im feeling glad now cuzz hiba ahmed already helped me out....shes such a caring girl....<3s to hibaaaa !!!!!! anywayzz...is fatima ur sister or smone else and i guess u dont come on v shine much..y? how's life? Ajwa
Oct 16th 2013
 
 
afifah Rafia dear where are you? please check your emails yar. i am waiting for your reply.. Afifah
Oct 16th 2013
 
 
Nimra But em playing with my cute and lovely nephew..!!! :) <3 Nimra
Oct 16th 2013
 
 
Nimra Oohh.. :) but em enjoying with my little nd cute nephew..!! :)) <3 Nimra
Oct 15th 2013
 
 
Rafia Nothing much honey! just getting bored as nowadays my holidays r here ... tum sunao :) Rafia
Oct 15th 2013
 
 
Zainab Its ok ajwa, maybe we can talk after we get to know each other well :) i dont mind it at all. I asked u if i can help because i cant see any1 so sad, even if i just met her. But it is alright. No need of sorry, coz that happens. ;) love u ajwa dear Zainab
Oct 15th 2013
 
 
Nimra U welcum rafia dear.. :)) :P aur sunao whtz going on these days?? Nimra
Oct 14th 2013
 
 
Rafia Thnkuuuuu Nimra dear :))) Rafia
Oct 14th 2013
 
 
Nimra Heyy rafia awesome story..!!! :))) keep it up..!!! Nimra
Oct 13th 2013
 
 
Maryam Thanx dear Ajwa, I am too busy and even late to say thank you for being such a good friend Maryam
Oct 9th 2013
 
 
Rafia Well, dear ajwa u can talk w8 me honey :)))))) Rafia
Oct 9th 2013
 
 
Rafia Thnkuuuu frnds nd zainab nd ajwa is everything ok my frnds??? i think there's something serious honey! ..... Rafia
Oct 9th 2013
 
 
ajwa Thankyou so so so so sooooooo much rafia!!!!!!!!!!i finally have someone to talk to !!!!!!!!..........zainab ....thanku soo much for sharing ma sadness but.....i dont want this matter to be open in public(even if it doeznt have anything bad)and we just met but ive known rafia for 6 to 7 months....soooo soooory :( Ajwa
Oct 8th 2013
 
 
Arwa Aoa, friendsplz visit my website syedafatima2012.wix.com/about-pakistan Arwa
Oct 8th 2013
 
 
Zainab Ajwa i really feel sad for you, i could talk to u too but i dont have an email yet, so maybe we can discuss on vshine... if it is ok with you oh, and rafia yor story is very scary and interesting, Allah na kare aap ke saath aisa ho. and its bad that it happened with your mami Zainab
Oct 8th 2013
 
 
Rafia Thnx alot ajwa dear :))) Rafia
Oct 8th 2013
 
 
ajwa Gr88 story! Ajwa
Oct 7th 2013
 
 
Rafia Thnkuuuuuuuuu dear :)))) Rafia
Oct 7th 2013
 
 
Aisha Great story!!! i loved how you narrated true incident .... Aisha
Oct 6th 2013
 
 
Rafia I am soooooooo soooooooo soooooooo sooooooooo sooooooooo sooooooo sorry Hamza ...... but now i don't really add boys ...... u can see there r only girls now !!!!!!!! SORRY!!!! i hope u understood ... Rafia
Oct 5th 2013
 
 
Rafia Ooooo0000!!!!! sooooo sad Ajwa dear ...... but, remember honey! don't make anyone sooooo close urself that if the person moves away/or hurts u so u fell really bad ...... (i realized it after years of crying) nd dear I WILL MAIL U INSHALLAH as soon i ge time honey :)))))) Rafia
Oct 5th 2013
 
 
Rafia DEAR Maryam .... no no need of sorry AT ALL !!!!! honey, Rabia api don't have ANY interest at vshine website!! however she's ok!!! :) thnx for asking :) Rafia
Oct 5th 2013
 
 
Ajwa Raffia...OK...I know im gonna get that all frndly n every thing.....but the the thing iz that I don't have a frnd !!!!....in school or in ma colony..(weird)...I had a best frnd...we went to the same school and lived in the same colony.....but sadly...she moved away...far away.................................sooo....I have problem with ma other normal frndz (they don't even hang out wid me).....n I really want smone to talk bout that matter........not anyone but u.......I cant talk wid ma best frnd cuz her no was changed.......................heres ma e mail address.....ajwa12@hotmail.com ....frst u send saying helloo hi (or whatevaa) so I know ur mail.....then can we talk????????????????waitin eagerly....=/ OTHER PPL!!!!!!!!!! U R NOT ALLOWED TO SEND ME ANYTHING !!!!!!!!!! OK??!!??!? IS IT CLEAR TO EVERYONE??!!??!!??!!/\=l Ajwa
Oct 5th 2013
 
 
Ajwa See raffia...Maryam haz a very gud quality..saying SORRY...!!!!! isn't it?!?!!? Ajwa
Oct 5th 2013
 
 
Hamzah Plz addd me Hamzah
Oct 5th 2013
 
 
Maryam Tumhari sis kahan hai? kafi der ho gai us ka koi comment nahi parha. is she ok now. Maryam
Oct 4th 2013
 
 
Maryam Sorry kehna to banta hai dear late ho gayi na me parhne mein Maryam
Oct 4th 2013
 
 
Rafia Maryam, eesha, unaiza, khadijah and areeba ...... thnx alot my frnds :))))))))) em soooooooo happy for ur support :)) nd Maryam yar sorry mat kaha karo plzzzzzzz dear :))) Rafia
Oct 4th 2013
 
 
Maryam Sorry dear i was to busy so i didn't read it but your story is thrilling and chilling. Maryam
Oct 3rd 2013
 
 
Khadijah I really love it!!!!!!its awwwsum!!!! Khadijah
Oct 3rd 2013
 
 
eesha Owsum story.........so sad it happened w8 ur mami....... Eesha
Oct 3rd 2013
 
 
Areeba Really scary :p But still great effort Areeba
Oct 3rd 2013
 
 
unaiza Its a pity that it happened with your aunt Unaiza
Oct 3rd 2013
 
 
Rafia Thnx Hiba ..... well it really scares me if it happens w8 me... TOBA! TOBA! Rafia
Oct 2nd 2013
 
 
Rafia Yup!!! u r right ...... well thnx alot Hafsa dear :) Rafia
Oct 2nd 2013
 
 
Hiba Great story but its scary if it happens with someone. wonder that what would ur mami's reaction be :p. keep up the good work. Hiba
Oct 2nd 2013
 
 
HAFSA Its a nice story.but i am sad that it happened with your mami!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Hafsa
Oct 2nd 2013
 
 
maha Owesome Maha
Oct 2nd 2013
 
 
Irum Awesoooooooooooooome Irum
Oct 2nd 2013
 
 
Affan Oops,sorry i axcadentely did the comment 2 times.......i know one word is wrong in my comment....i am in a hurry Affan
Oct 1st 2013
 
 
Rafia Thnk alot alll of u :) nd well, YUP!! it's a true one. .... it happened with my (mami) !!!!!!! Rafia
Oct 1st 2013
 
 
Affan Very nice Affan
Sep 30th 2013
 
 
Affan Very nice Affan
Sep 30th 2013
 
 
Arwa OHH!!!! really is it a true story??? :( :( Arwa
Sep 30th 2013
 
 
Ajwa Oooooh......I really like it!!!!!!its awwwsum!!!! Ajwa
Sep 30th 2013
 
 

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