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Sarah Ahmad
Sarah Ahmad
Mystery Of The Knocking At Night
Published On Oct 4th 2013
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October 2013
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Their car parked just outside the garage of an old house, Sophia and her parents travelled all the way from Chitral to Attock. Sophie was so tired, as she came out of the car, she unpluged her iPod and placed it carefully in her purse. For some time she gazed at the old house and then asked her mother, "mother, how old did you said this house was ?". Her mother was too busy unloading the bag packets from the car as she paid no attention to Sophie's question. Sophia was used to that kind of behavior of her parents, so she took her purse which contained her favorite perfume, her iPod, her lip gloss and the key to the house. She took out the key, placed it in the key hole and turned it. The door swung open with several creaking sounds and Sophie went in. The floor boards were loose as they made loud creaking sounds as she stepped on them.
Sophie went further and further, she saw several rooms, as they were dark and smelled odd. It was a two level house with at least ten rooms including the kitchen and the bathrooms, dressing rooms and laundry room. Sophie thought that it could have been the most luxurious house of its time. Her parents were unpacking the suitcases and two other men were placing the furniture in the rooms. They didn't have as much furniture as many rooms there were in the house. At the very end of the second floor Sophie found a room which had a four poster bed and it was covered in light pink color. She dropped her bag on the bed and went towards the big window with dusty glass. She took a duster and wiped out the entire window clean. The scenery from the window was so enchanting that Sophie kept watching it. After sometime she went down stairs and brought a pile of big heavy curtains which she hung on the windows.
She then went towards the dressing room and bathroom and hung thin blurring curtains over the bathroom's window. After Sophie was done with the decorating of her room and got dress she went down stairs for lunch. After having the delicious lunch that her mother prepare she came up to her room, switched on the study lamp that was placed at the side rack of the bed and begun reading. When she finished reading she turned the light off and switch on her iPod, till late night she went up with it, suddenly the grandfather clock went making midnight alert sound loudly. Sophie was so afraid that she tucked her face inside the blanket, but when she realized that it was just the clock she relaxed. Sophie's eyes went heavy but when she was about to fall in sleep she heard several knocks on the big window like someone was out there, Sophie picked her torch and went towards the window but it was just the branch moving due to the wind nothing else.
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Comments 58
Berha It's so good, I checked your website really cool Berha
Jun 12th 2016
 
 
abdul moiz abid Eid mubarak to all muslims. Abdul Moiz Abid
Jul 28th 2014
 
 
sarah Thanks all of you. i am very greatful of you. Sarah
Jul 21st 2014
 
 
qurratul Congrats!Mashallah!It's a nice story.Keep it up!I love it...! My sister Noor-ul-Ain also like it.!:):):):):):)!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Qurratul
Jun 24th 2014
 
 
abdul moiz abid You have written a great story but its rough draft should be more efficient. Abdul Moiz Abid
Jun 22nd 2014
 
 
Tooba Congratz and you deserved to be the winner keep up the hard work Tooba
May 6th 2014
 
 
sarah Thank you guyz u surely r lovely fellow and about the gift i liked the vshine hamper so much it had a box of pencils a rubber a sharpener a color pencil box and a mathematical geometry box. Sarah
Jan 22nd 2014
 
 
HAFSA Such a nice story my mum liked it too:) Hafsa
Dec 24th 2013
 
 
Hadia VERY VERY NICE SPECIALLY FROM THE START Hadia
Dec 22nd 2013
 
 
mahnoor Great story winning the prize was worth it totally!!!!!! Mahnoor
Dec 19th 2013
 
 
Hiba Well Sarah , i made an account there successfuly and sent u a message and friend request , uss ko accept kar lo . and dear can we talk on email? i will give u my new one. k? Hiba
Dec 18th 2013
 
 
sarah You can invite others and you can sign it easily with it on the left side and top bellow there is to sign u. happy to hear you finally got to it? Sarah
Dec 18th 2013
 
 
Hiba Hahahahaha . finally it opened , its a great website how can I can sign up or make an account? Hiba
Dec 16th 2013
 
 
sarah And she have ipod touch like i have :)E Sarah
Dec 14th 2013
 
 
sarah Thanks ayesha and everyone and hiba thank you are making blush by saying that and yes about the website try it again i will tell you: environmentcaringclub.webs.com (dont type www) well if you can't then its ok there will somekinda problem with that website :E| Sarah
Dec 14th 2013
 
 
Amna Nice :D Amna
Dec 14th 2013
 
 
sohaib Did she had an ipod touch or ipod nano Sohaib
Dec 12th 2013
 
 
stella Not bad Stella
Dec 8th 2013
 
 
aeman Congrats .your story was really nice. i loved it . Aeman
Dec 8th 2013
 
 
Hiba I tried opening ur website but it wasn't opening , idk why. What should I do? I didn't type www as well. Hiba
Dec 7th 2013
 
 
Hiba Im so sorry for the very late reply but u are a great person. will IA visit ur website as well. so whats going on? Hiba
Dec 5th 2013
 
 
Khadija Congrats!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Khadija
Nov 17th 2013
 
 
Disenchanted. Congratz..... Disenchanted.
Nov 13th 2013
 
 
sarah Thank u :) Sarah
Nov 13th 2013
 
 
Bushra Hafeez Congratz Bushra Hafeez
Nov 8th 2013
 
 
sarah Thank u :) Sarah
Nov 8th 2013
 
 
sarah Thank u :) Sarah
Nov 8th 2013
 
 
ayesha Great.keep it up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Ayesha
Nov 7th 2013
 
 
Ayesha Congratzs u deserve this award ^|^ \__/ Ayesha
Nov 7th 2013
 
 
sarah Thank u Ayesha :) and Hiba you can see my profile i am sure you will know me from there better :) i have a website of my own environmentcaringclub.webs.com (dont type www ). you can join that and save environment. Sarah
Nov 7th 2013
 
 
Irum You really do deserve to be the winner, girl!! ;) Keep rocking!! Irum
Nov 7th 2013
 
 
Hiba U are the most welcome Sarah .i would love to know u and be ur best friend. please i troduce urself to me :))))) Hiba
Nov 6th 2013
 
 
sarah Thank u :) Sarah
Nov 4th 2013
 
 
Arwa Funny story and congratzzzz :) Arwa
Nov 3rd 2013
 
 
Gul Noor Funny n congratzzzz;) Gul Noor
Nov 3rd 2013
 
 
sarah Thank u guys ap logon ki waja sey mein win kar pai. Sarah
Nov 3rd 2013
 
 
Hiba Really love it dear and congratz Hiba
Nov 2nd 2013
 
 
ajwa Congratzz yawr!!!!!! Ajwa
Nov 2nd 2013
 
 
Anam Great stry sara plzz accept my friend request Anam
Oct 30th 2013
 
 
sarah Thank u all and i will be writing another story soon but not in oct or nov because my exams are comin up so thank u again Sarah
Oct 29th 2013
 
 
nazish I love it shweetie that was too good. Nazish
Oct 22nd 2013
 
 
ajwa I really like it....plzz write another story..plzzz!!!!!!! Ajwa
Oct 16th 2013
 
 
unaiza Waiting patiently, for the next part Unaiza
Oct 11th 2013
 
 
sarah Ok Sophia thanks for the advice :D Sarah
Oct 10th 2013
 
 
eesha Ur most welcum ...ok i will lyk n i have read the poem already :D Eesha
Oct 7th 2013
 
 
sofia Achi hai horror achi likh lati ho magar next time thori or mystery wali likhna or bari bhi ho choti nahi:) Sofia
Oct 7th 2013
 
 
sarah Eesha have u read my poem in the poem section its on the first plz read it and give it a like !!!!!!!!!!!! Sarah
Oct 5th 2013
 
 
sarah I have another poem comin up inshallah Sarah
Oct 5th 2013
 
 
sarah Ok eesha thanks for the advice sweety i appriciate ;) Sarah
Oct 5th 2013
 
 
sarah Ok eesha thanks for the advice sweety i appriciate ;) Sarah
Oct 5th 2013
 
 
eesha Ohhh plzzzzzz write....i dont understand....was that all???u should make another pt of this story.. Eesha
Oct 5th 2013
 
 
sarah Thank you but sorry it was just a single one but if you insist i will write a mystery series next time ;) Sarah
Oct 5th 2013
 
 
eesha Amazing throughout the story.....does it have another pt??? Eesha
Oct 5th 2013
 
 
Affan Aap ne ye story khud lihkee hai Affan
Oct 3rd 2013
 
 
sarah Yeah thats right well thank u fot the comments Sarah
Sep 30th 2013
 
 
sofia Wow good story u must be the winner Sofia
Sep 30th 2013
 
 
sarah It was so complicated to write Sarah
Sep 30th 2013
 
 
maha Wow it is good from the begining and funny at the ending you rock it is so nice i loved it good vocabulary used , this story must have full grades but what can we do right :( :) Maha
Sep 30th 2013
 
 

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