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Rockingurl Mina Girl
Rockingurl Mina Girl
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No One Home
Published On Mar 22nd 2011
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The bell rang loudly. Everybody packed there bags and ready to go home. When the teacher dismissed the Childers they lined up in two rows and walked orderly to canteen.
Usually David mother would fetch him home from school but today she was not there. David waited 15 minutes before he walked home.
When he reached home he knocked on door as he did not bring his keys. Surprisingly no one answered the door. David thought his mother was in toilet so he waited patiently for his mother. After a few minutes there was still no response.
David knocked again but no one answered the door. Just as he was about to go to the nearby coffee shop where his father works, to get the keys, he heard the friendly voice of his neighbour john.
David told him that no one was at home and john’s mother suggested that David stay in their house till his mother came back. David and john played happily till evening when David’s mother came back.
The bell rang loudly. Everybody packed there bags and ready to go home. When the teacher dismissed the Childers they lined up in two rows and walked orderly to canteen.
Usually David mother would fetch him home from school but today she was not there. David waited 15 minutes before he walked home.
When he reached home he knocked on door as he did not bring his keys. Surprisingly no one answered the door. David thought his mother was in toilet so he waited patiently for his mother. After a few minutes there was still no response.
David knocked again but no one answered the door. Just as he was about to go to the nearby coffee shop where his father works, to get the keys, he heard the friendly voice of his neighbour john.
David told him that no one was at home and john’s mother suggested that David stay in their house till his mother came back. David and john played happily till evening when David’s mother came back.
 
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Comments 26
eesha Why did u repeat?? Eesha
Nov 5th 2013
 
 
Gul Noor Repeated n boaring! Gul Noor
Nov 4th 2013
 
 
Wafa You repeated the story but nice Wafa
Oct 24th 2013
 
 
Fatima It doesn't have a ending Fatima
Sep 5th 2012
 
 
Khadijah Is this you in the pic ????????? Khadijah
Aug 16th 2012
 
 
Emaan Uhh you repeated it, still,gr8! Emaan
Jul 26th 2012
 
 
Bareera Nicyyyyyyyyyyy Bareera
Mar 9th 2012
 
 
Ayeza NyCcCcCcC!!!! Ayeza
Feb 9th 2012
 
 
xerac You repeated the story......!!! Xerac
Jan 12th 2012
 
 
Ibrahim Nice and plz every comment Ibrahim
Jan 5th 2012
 
 
Maria Niceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Maria
Sep 17th 2011
 
 
rOcKiNgUrL mInA Hi guys i am back lol Rockingurl Mina
Aug 29th 2011
 
 
Mahnoor So lovely. Mahnoor
Aug 27th 2011
 
 
Wania Nice Wania
Aug 21st 2011
 
 
Bareera Sweeeeeet....... Bareera
Aug 18th 2011
 
 
Itachi NYC STORY!! I live in Abu Dhabi in U.A.E Itachi
Jul 3rd 2011
 
 
Momina You repeated the story! Momina
Jun 13th 2011
 
 
Zahra Thats to discusing Zahra
Apr 2nd 2011
 
 
Bint waseem Hey minahil u didnt reply me??!!?? Bint Waseem
Mar 29th 2011
 
 
rOcKiNgUrL mInA Hay my age is 11 and im in 6th standard but im going to 7th becuz i have finished my final exams and my school name is h.h shiekh rashid al makhtoum pakistani school dubai Rockingurl Mina
Mar 28th 2011
 
 
Mehwish Minahil wat's ur age and in which class do u study ? plz tell me and ur school name as well plzzzzzzzzzzzz Mehwish
Mar 26th 2011
 
 
Bint waseem Minahil did hafsa replied?wht she saiD? Bint Waseem
Mar 26th 2011
 
 
Aleena Good! Aleena
Mar 23rd 2011
 
 
Bint waseem Minahil u hv written it two times bt still nyc.......there should be a moral.....(dont mind).god starting!!p Bint Waseem
Mar 22nd 2011
 
 
rOcKiNgUrL mInA Everyone plz commment on this Rockingurl Mina
Mar 22nd 2011
 
 
rOcKiNgUrL mInA Every body plz comment Rockingurl Mina
Mar 22nd 2011
 
 

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