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Maarij Maqsood Khan
Maarij Maqsood Khan
Diary Of Secrets (part 01)
Published On Sep 24th 2013
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Aleena and Rafay are bored in their new house. Suddenly their mother said to Aleena and Rafay to put their clothes in their cupboard. When Aleena open her cupboard she shocked to see a diary because yesterday, there is no diary in her cupboard.  He said to Rafay that diary is yours. Rafay said that I have seen this diary before seeing this. Aleena take it as a joke and decided to throw this diary in a dust bin but Rafay is serious so he snatched the diary from Aleena. Aleena started shouted with anger. Then their mother said “Aleena what happen” and Rafay said nothing mom I snatched a chocolate from Aleena. This thing shocked very much Aleena because when Rafay snatch anything he went to garden and Aleena thought why for this diary he told a lie with mom.
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Comments 15
Shayan There are some grammar mistakes but the story is good. Shayan
Aug 30th 2015
 
 
eesha Welcum n i have liked it :))))))))))))))))) Eesha
Oct 7th 2013
 
 
Maarij Maqsood Thanks Esha and plz like it Maarij Maqsood
Oct 6th 2013
 
 
eesha Great................next pt tick- tock Eesha
Oct 5th 2013
 
 
Maarij Maqsood Thanks Unaiza and i think so Vshine is a website to improve your skills and grammar Maarij Maqsood
Sep 28th 2013
 
 
Maarij Maqsood Dr gullasht i am missing you,you didn't comment on my stuff Maarij Maqsood
Sep 28th 2013
 
 
unaiza Wonderful theme and story but some grammatical mistakes. hope you will soon recover them Unaiza
Sep 27th 2013
 
 
unaiza Wonderful theme and story but some grammatical mistakes. hope you will soon recover them Unaiza
Sep 27th 2013
 
 
unaiza Wonderful theme and story but some grammatical mistakes. hope you will soon recover them Unaiza
Sep 27th 2013
 
 
Maarij Maqsood Thanx wajeeha Maarij Maqsood
Sep 27th 2013
 
 
Maarij Maqsood Thanx anam Maarij Maqsood
Sep 26th 2013
 
 
Anam Wow ur soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo good! Anam
Sep 26th 2013
 
 
Maarij Maqsood Thanks rafia Maarij Maqsood
Sep 25th 2013
 
 
Maarij Maqsood Come on Guys take part in comments or likes Maarij Maqsood
Sep 25th 2013
 
 
Rafia Gr8!!!!!!!!!!! waiting for the next part...... Rafia
Sep 25th 2013
 
 

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