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Zainab Saleem Toor
Zainab Saleem Toor
Tns Beaconhouse
Black Beauty
Published On Sep 24th 2013
Total Comments : 34
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I have a little horse
her name is Black Beauty
taking care of her
is my duty
She is black all over
Except her foot that's white
She has a white star on her forehead
And she sleeps in my shed at night 
She jumps really high
And runs really fast
When her training is done
She'd say, "At last!"
I have daily menu based food for her
First oats, then grains, then grass
When she will have a foal
I'll name it Little Lass
She is very beautiful
Believe it or not
She is very friendly
And I love her a lot.
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Comments 34
Hamna Hey Zainab ! I recently read a book BLACK BEAUTY a story of a horse ! Did you write the poem about it ? Well if u din't its strange ! Hamna
Jul 27th 2015
hibba Ohhh nice... Hibba
Jan 7th 2014
Areeba Well rafia dear, Hiba recently told me all these happenings on vshine & insisted me to talk to you :) She is like " PLEASE RAFIA SAY BAAT KARO WARNA MEIN TUM SAE NARAZ HO JAOON GI" & at another point she is like " RAFIA JESI ACHI FRIEND TUMHE DUNYA MEIN NAHI MILAE GI SO PLEASE STUDIES SAE HI 5 MINUTES NIKAL KAR USS SAE BAAT KARO" & literally she begged me & only went when she saw me typing. Anyways rafia dear it has been ages ever since we talked. Please make a new email id. Please yaaaaaaaar I really really want to talk to you privetly. You know mine dont you? So as soon as you make one email account please please mail me. I should be the first person :p How are you my dear? Is Rabia Api fine? Anyways please reply yaaar, & do make an email account. Not a new account on vshine but just an email. I ask you no more than one email address. I cant bear not talking to my soul sister. Please rafia it is a humble request from one sister to another :) Okay, Allah Hafiz dear till then. Please reply as soon as possible and make a new email id as well. Please I am waiting for your mail as my exams are over & I am free these days :) Areeba
Dec 17th 2013
Rafia :):) Rafia
Nov 17th 2013
Zainab :) ok Zainab
Oct 16th 2013
Rafia Not at all my dear :))) my love cant b expressed in words :)) Rafia
Oct 15th 2013
Zainab Really rafia? U kidding me? Zainab
Oct 10th 2013
Zainab Thnx azka Zainab
Oct 10th 2013
Rafia He! He! ok! we both love eachother equally ... k!!??!!?? :) well, dear u r really sweet nd cute too (as in ur pic) :))))) Rafia
Oct 10th 2013
Azka Its marvellous....something to b liked.......... Azka
Oct 9th 2013
Zainab Noooo! I love you most! Zainab
Oct 9th 2013
Rafia My daer I LOVE U MOST! :) Rafia
Oct 8th 2013
Zainab No rafia i love you more Zainab
Oct 8th 2013
Nimra Hey zainab plz reply my comment which i have post on ur stuff.. (my brother) :) Nimra
Oct 7th 2013
Rafia But, dear I LOVE U MORE :))))))) Rafia
Oct 6th 2013
Zainab Me too Zainab
Oct 6th 2013
Rafia O000 shoooooo shweeeet of u dear :)))) LOVE U SOOOO MUCH HONEY!! :)) Rafia
Oct 5th 2013
Zainab My best friend at school is... i have 3 bst frnds, lyba salman, zainab zahra and tania zahur... including you Zainab
Oct 5th 2013
Zainab Sure areeba i'd love to Zainab
Oct 5th 2013
Areeba Zainab dear, You are Mashallah blessed to have such a talent of writing so good! Love u dear! Would you like to be friends with me? Areeba
Oct 3rd 2013
Rafia I LOVE YOU MORE THAN THAT HONEY!!!! :):):):) so who's ur best frnd at school ?????? :) Rafia
Oct 2nd 2013
Hiba Lovely poem. its great even as a first attempt :) Hiba
Oct 2nd 2013
Zainab Oh yaar what a comment, love you alot Zainab
Oct 2nd 2013
Zainab No i'm in 'TNS beaconhouse' not in 'Beaconhouse School System' Zainab
Oct 2nd 2013
Rafia Well, dear Zainab ...... Bismah Shakir studies with u????????? :) Rafia
Oct 1st 2013
Rafia OFCOURSE yar!!!!! age is not valueable ....... people are dear ...... i like ur nature nd even loved u alott honey! :):):):):):) ...... so u r gonna chat with me now ... right??? :) Rafia
Sep 30th 2013
Zainab You are really kind Rafia, although i am younger than you cause i'm 9, and ur 13 (i read that in someone else's comment) still inshallah we will be best friends Zainab
Sep 29th 2013
Zainab Sure Zainab
Sep 29th 2013
Rafia INSHALLAH Zainab dear ......... we'll b best frnds :))))) well, actually in my school i do hav my bestest frnd ... her name's "Zainab Siddiqui" :) so honey! if u don't mind can u introduce urself ..... like ur hpbbies, likes/dislikes, aim etc :) Rafia
Sep 28th 2013
Zainab I think we'll be good friends now Zainab
Sep 28th 2013
Rafia No need of thnx :) I LOVED IT :) Rafia
Sep 27th 2013
Zainab Thank you this is my first poem on vshine so glad you 2 like it Zainab
Sep 26th 2013
Bismah Great.................. Bismah
Sep 25th 2013
Rafia Gooooood! awesome! fantastic! Rafia
Sep 25th 2013

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