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Hamzah Haseeb
Hamzah Haseeb
Pakistan International School, Jeddah
A Journey Through Space
Published On Sep 18th 2013
Total Comments : 95
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September 2013
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Oh, what fun it'd be
to journey through space!
to land on the moon
and walk on its face!
to Venus or Mars
to reach Jupiter
or may be new stars
to journey through space
to planets unknown;
to settle on them
and make them our own
A journey through space
I’d welcome with joy!
Whatever I see
I’d fully enjoy.
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Comments 95
Affan Awesome Affan
Jan 16th 2014
 
 
Hamzah Oooyyeaa!! I got my prize:D:D:D Hamzah
Dec 20th 2013
 
 
Rafia Yeah! :):):) Rafia
Dec 17th 2013
 
 
Hamzah U r right rafia Hamzah
Dec 12th 2013
 
 
Rafia Hey Ashadiya :) welcome to vshine dear frnd :):) i hope u'll find it awesome :) Rafia
Dec 10th 2013
 
 
Rafia Opzzz......... sorry for u.... it really seems tiring :(:(:( well, patience leads to good :) Rafia
Dec 10th 2013
 
 
Hamzah Yes of course iam tired of waiting. I waited for two months.:( Hamzah
Dec 10th 2013
 
 
Ashadiya This poem is awesome ... cool ... fantastic nd mindblowing ... HUH! it reminds me of the game i played last night ... "SPACE-ROCKET NEEDS YOU!" ... Ashadiya
Dec 10th 2013
 
 
Rafia Oh!!! oh!!! well, abhi to kuch zyaada hogaya!! lik itz too much late sort of laziness :((( r u tired of waiting for it????? :( Rafia
Dec 9th 2013
 
 
Hamzah No rafia not yet!:(( I mailed the vshine team they told me that "v r sorry for late delivery. Inshallah u will get ur prize soon". :(( Hamzah
Dec 6th 2013
 
 
Rafia Well, hamza did u got the prize??? i hope u hav got it :)))))) Rafia
Dec 6th 2013
 
 
Hamzah Oh! Hi hadya iam fine how r u Hamzah
Dec 5th 2013
 
 
hadya Hi hamza how r u hadya Hadya
Dec 4th 2013
 
 
Rafia Oppzzz.... Congratzzz hamza nd Sara, what was that??? u know what sara, whenever i see girls in such an attitude so it hurts me alot honey ... girls needs to b gentle my frnd :)) i hope u didn't minded ... sorrrRRRy if that's so ... nd my all vshine frnds plz pray 4 my health ... Rafia
Dec 4th 2013
 
 
Hamzah Shut up Sara. Wat do u mean by daaaa Hamzah
Dec 2nd 2013
 
 
sarah Phoo dont be a daaaa :P Sarah
Dec 1st 2013
 
 
Hamzah Thank God my exams r over. I got the highest in english 95 marks Hamzah
Nov 30th 2013
 
 
Hamzah Ok rafia!:| Hamzah
Nov 21st 2013
 
 
Rafia Instead of thnx ... MUSLIMS should say JAZAKALLAH :)) Rafia
Nov 21st 2013
 
 
Hamzah Nazish plz like my poem Hamzah
Nov 17th 2013
 
 
Hamzah Ok!thanks for ur information :)) Hamzah
Nov 16th 2013
 
 
Rafia Well... it will b establish in FORUM Ofcourse! but u know nowadays topics r not getting approved for forum ..... the ones there r toooooooooooooooooooooooooooo old .... Rafia
Nov 15th 2013
 
 
Hamzah Hellooo!!!RAFIA . I asked u something when will u reply Hamzah
Nov 15th 2013
 
 
nazish Ur welcome hamzah. Nazish
Nov 15th 2013
 
 
Hamzah Thanks nazish Hamzah
Nov 14th 2013
 
 
nazish Hilarious poem hamza. Nazish
Nov 14th 2013
 
 
Hamzah I wanted to ask that if we send a topic on me in forum then where will it get approved i mean that where will it be established. Hamzah
Nov 13th 2013
 
 
Rafia Well .. thats why we say vshine is SLOWWWW!!!!!! u will definetly get it INSHALLAH :)) but where is the question that u were gonna ask me??!!?? :) Rafia
Nov 12th 2013
 
 
Hamzah I think so i will not get the prize becus still i didnt got it:( Hamzah
Nov 8th 2013
 
 
Rafia Hamza ... problem isn't with chatting with BOYS .... i was just generally saying that i didnt had a comment chat with a boy u know ..... nd SURE u Can ask any question ... go on :):) Rafia
Nov 6th 2013
 
 
Hamzah But i wanted to ask u a question will u reply Hamzah
Nov 5th 2013
 
 
Hamzah First of all y u dont chat with boys. If u will chat with boys wat will happen Hamzah
Nov 5th 2013
 
 
Rafia I AM SERIOUS ..... i am sooooooooooooooooooooooooo sorry about that hamza ..... really very sorry but all the truth is proved in my story "the old woman part 2" .... go on nd check ... em really sorry ... Rafia
Nov 5th 2013
 
 
Arwa Really rafia??? Arwa
Nov 5th 2013
 
 
Hamzah Dont lie to me :((if hacker replys my comments then he would he would say bad about my stuff and abuot me.first of all id cant be hacked on vshine but ids can be hacked facebok only Hamzah
Nov 5th 2013
 
 
Rafia ASSALAM 0 ALAIKUM Hamza ........ well, today what i am gona tell u is really very bad i know but it is the truth u know! OK.... all the comments frm the start weren't by me ... infact u weren't talking to me but .... THE HACKER u know ..... i just sent the comment ragarding ur poem .. the very first one "Gooooood! awesome! fantastic!" .... the others r not by me!!! sorrrrRRRRy :( but cant help it my id was hacked otherwise in my entire life i havent had a comment chat with ANY boy except Rizwan Bhai .... again sorrrRRy Rafia
Nov 4th 2013
 
 
Hamzah Last year i went pakistan i collected 6000 rupees .i told my dad to take 6000RS from me and give me 400SR.i sent them on fun and my favorite game in PS2 is grand theft auto4,tekken6,need for speed hot pursuit 3,midnight club los angles, brain lara2007 and PES2012 Hamzah
Nov 4th 2013
 
 
Hamzah Thanks for congrtz Hamzah
Nov 3rd 2013
 
 
Rafia Ooh! so u r not happy w8 ur prize hamza??? :):):) well, about stationary ... I LOVE IT ... i do have alot of collection of diaries n pens nd lots more u know .... :) however about toys em with u .... i m also not interested in them ... i also love to collect money! i have collected 847 but i dont know where to spend them .... about playstation ... my uncle gifted it to all of us (me nd my sisters/brothers) .. i love to play playstation2 ... i mostly play DRIV3R nd need for speed Undercover nd lots more ... :):):) what about u?? :)) Rafia
Nov 3rd 2013
 
 
Hiba Congratz Hiba
Nov 2nd 2013
 
 
Hamzah Ellina i think so u r new here Hamzah
Nov 2nd 2013
 
 
Hamzah Thnx ellina Hamzah
Nov 2nd 2013
 
 
Hamzah Oohhhh!!! I hate stationary and toys.i am interested in playing games on my playstation2 and collecting money.i had 700 SR i bought playstation 2 for 400SR Nd bought a cycle for 300 SR now i have zero money Hamzah
Nov 2nd 2013
 
 
Rafia Well ... it was like my id wasnt made at that time nd i had lots nd lots of poems of mine ... i wanted to publish them at vshine so i used my sister's id to publish them nd they got published at the magazine ... i got a prize of stationary (geometry box, pencils, erasers, sharpeners nd pointers nd pens) :):):) u r pretty excited for them?? :) Rafia
Nov 2nd 2013
 
 
Hamzah Rafia which prize did u got Hamzah
Nov 1st 2013
 
 
Ellina That is gud Ellina
Nov 1st 2013
 
 
Hamzah How was it ur poem:) Hamzah
Oct 31st 2013
 
 
Rafia Well ... i had been a winner on mind game once nd on vshine quiz too but not in mypage :( well ... my sis RABIA AHMED had been mypage winner but the poem was mine! :) well .... why ? :) Rafia
Oct 31st 2013
 
 
Hamzah Rafia have u ever been a winner in mind game or in my page winners Hamzah
Oct 29th 2013
 
 
Rafia U'll get it soon INSHALLAH :) aur ap ko eid mubarak itna jaldi kese yaad aaya? :) Rafia
Oct 28th 2013
 
 
Hamzah Eid mubarik to every one:D :D Hamzah
Oct 26th 2013
 
 
Hamzah Oooohh!! Iam waiting for my prize.I didnt got it yet Hamzah
Oct 26th 2013
 
 
Hamzah Thanks!!:))ramshah Hamzah
Oct 25th 2013
 
 
ramshah Congratulations Ramshah
Oct 25th 2013
 
 
Rafia HEHEHEHE!!!! well done then :):):):) i am surprised that u REALLY thought :):) u know u were the first one to ask a question frm me ... nd then at different pages ppl started asking questions :)) U WERE THE ONE WHO TAUGHT THEM THAT HAMZA!!!! :)))) Rafia
Oct 24th 2013
 
 
Hamzah I thout that really u r the editor:)) Hamzah
Oct 23rd 2013
 
 
Hamzah Ooooopps!! Iam really sorry i asked u the rong question sbout editor.so r not the editor. Yeah Hamzah
Oct 23rd 2013
 
 
Hamzah U r the editor but i cant believe it.i think so u r making me fool.prove it that u r the editor Hamzah
Oct 23rd 2013
 
 
Rafia Hmmm ... :):):) well, the way u asks me questions makes me think that REALLY AM I THE EDITOR OF WEBSITE???? :D :D :D........... it really seems funny 2 me :)) however main ap ko mana nahi kar rahi .. carry on! i'll answer ur each question :) Rafia
Oct 22nd 2013
 
 
Hamzah Ok :)) rafia Hamzah
Oct 21st 2013
 
 
Rafia OFCOURSE!!! i really agree with u ...!! but dont b sad ...... i also send a million stuff and it didn't get approved........ but still i had believe in myself and then got my stuff published..... see if u have believe in urself, then nothing is impossible or unbeatable :) INSHALLAH everything will b alright :)) alright ?? :)) Rafia
Oct 21st 2013
 
 
Hamzah I have sent a poem about my father a month ago but still it isnt approved I have sent many jokes,poems and stories but still they aren't approved. I love vshine magazine but i think its website is very slow :((:( Do u think it is slow? Hamzah
Oct 20th 2013
 
 
Rafia Hey!! after some investigations :P i hav come to know that it's about ur ms.paint program size ... like if ur screen of ms. paint is really big or if it's really small so it cannot b accepted !! SorrrrrrRRRRRRRRRyy for late reply but u know i didnt knew about it ... HOWEVER hamza u r good at writing poems .. where r ur other poems??????? :)))))))) Rafia
Oct 20th 2013
 
 
Hamzah Ooookkk!!! Rafia. |-( Hamzah
Oct 19th 2013
 
 
Hamzah Oookkk! Hamzah
Oct 18th 2013
 
 
Rafia Opzzzzzz ........ em soooooooo sorry but thatz the same problem w8 me :(:( but wait!! let me ask if someone helps .. alright ??? :):) Rafia
Oct 18th 2013
 
 
bisma Gud....keep it up Bisma
Oct 18th 2013
 
 
Hamzah Rafia whenever i submit a drawing after submitting it there is written u have exceeded the size limit. I would be grateful if u will help me in solving this problem Hamzah
Oct 16th 2013
 
 
Hamzah Syeda fatima i have sent many jokes,riddles,drawings and topics on me in forum a month ago still it is not approved.i am sick and tired of this website do u think this website slow? Its not slow its tooooo sloww Hamzah
Oct 15th 2013
 
 
Rafia Ooo0000h!! right Ibrahim .. so "welcome to vshine" :)) nd u keep on submitting ur stuff ... (write a bit short nd write ur own) :))) it will get submitetd nd approved INSHALLAH ... :)) Rafia
Oct 15th 2013
 
 
Hamzah Ur welcome. My dear Hamzah
Oct 15th 2013
 
 
Arwa Thanks Hamza:) Arwa
Oct 13th 2013
 
 
afifah Congrats Afifah
Oct 12th 2013
 
 
Hamzah I visited your websit its very bad. Hehe joking its not bad its coooooooolllllll. I like it Hamzah
Oct 12th 2013
 
 
Arwa Plz friends visit my website syedafatima2012.wix.com/about-pakistan Arwa
Oct 11th 2013
 
 
Ibrahim Rafiay i am new here and if i post a poem or story would not be submited plese help Ibrahim
Oct 10th 2013
 
 
Rafia JAZAKALLAH dear Fatimah :))))))))) u r also soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo gooooooood honey !!!!!! :))))) Rafia
Oct 8th 2013
 
 
ajwa My pleasure!!=) Ajwa
Oct 8th 2013
 
 
Arwa Its Nice habit Rafia... seriously dear u r soooooo goooood:) Arwa
Oct 7th 2013
 
 
Rafia Hamza ..... itni requests!!!! but em sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo soooooooooooooooooooooooo sooooooooooooooo sorry but, i dont add boys ...... SORRYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!! i hope u understood ..... sorryyyyyy once again ...... Rafia
Oct 7th 2013
 
 
Hamzah Rafia plz plz add me as a friend Hamzah
Oct 5th 2013
 
 
Rafia U r right :) don't worry they WILL get approved INSHALLAH :) nd about forum .... i send some stuff one moth ago ..... itz still not approved :( Rafia
Oct 3rd 2013
 
 
Hamzah Rafia i have already sent it a month ago still its not approved I have sent many more jokes,riddle and poems but still they r not approved I think vshine is awesome but slow Hamzah
Oct 2nd 2013
 
 
Arwa Congratzzzzzzzz:) :) :) Arwa
Oct 2nd 2013
 
 
Rafia Well .... first of all JAZAKALLAH for liking my stuff :):):):) em really really happy :) so, u r new on vshine website ...... right ??? "WELCOME TO VSHINE!!" :) using forum is not much difficult ... first if u want to discuss on any topic than u click on "FORUM" that is written on the upper bar ..... then u click on any of the topic .... like "drinking milk" and then u can post ur reply at it .... but if u want to submit your own topic than when u click on "FORUM" at the end you will see a bar of submitting topics .. u can write it over there than u can submit! SIMPLE :):):):):) well, are u gonna send any topic???? if yes, than plz send it soon i WILL comment INSHALLAH :):):) thnx alot again for liking my stuff :) Rafia
Oct 2nd 2013
 
 
Hamzah Thanks!! Ajwa Hamzah
Oct 1st 2013
 
 
Ajwa CONRAAATTTTZZZZZ !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Ajwa
Oct 1st 2013
 
 
Hamzah Rafia i am new here Plz can u guaid me how to use me " ME IN FORUM" Hamzah
Oct 1st 2013
 
 
Hamzah I also loved your poem,stories,articles & jokes. And i adedd them in my like list Hamzah
Sep 29th 2013
 
 
Rafia Ur welcome :)) well ...... i should thank u for submitting such a gr8 poem :D Rafia
Sep 28th 2013
 
 
Hamzah Thanks! Alot Hamzah
Sep 27th 2013
 
 
Rafia I LOVED UR POEM!!!!! keep the way going .. nd well, i hav added it in my like corner :) Rafia
Sep 27th 2013
 
 
Hamzah Rafia please like it Hamzah
Sep 25th 2013
 
 
Hamzah Wow!reallly gooood Hamzah
Sep 25th 2013
 
 
Rafia Gooooood! awesome! fantastic! Rafia
Sep 25th 2013
 
 

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