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Hafsa Rahmat
Hafsa Rahmat
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Allah The Maker
Published On Sep 24th 2013
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Everything that we see around us,
Allah made it for us.
 Allah made the sky and the land,
 Allah made the sea and the sand.
Allah made the plants and the trees,
 Allah made the birds and the bees.
Allah made the hills and the rivers,
Allah made the beautiful flowers.
Allah made the sun to give us heat and light,
Allah made the moon to brighten the sky at night.
Allah made the twinkling stars,
Allah made us as we are.
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Comments 77
lovina How are you doing my der Lovina
May 14th 2016
 
 
hafsa Hibaaa its a long long time we didnt talk Hafsa
Jun 21st 2015
 
 
hafsa Hiba Hafsa
Sep 29th 2014
 
 
Hiba Ohh. anyways how r vactions going? are u going anywhere? Hiba
Jun 24th 2014
 
 
hafsa Helloo . no my exams are going now vacations will start in 17 june Hafsa
Jun 13th 2014
 
 
hafsa Helloo . no my exams are going now vacations will start in 17 june Hafsa
Jun 13th 2014
 
 
Hiba Hii hafsa, im free now, vactions started since 15 may. have ur vactions started? how were ur exams? how was ur result? Hiba
Jun 4th 2014
 
 
hafsa Hi hiba how r u . yes dear i miss u too Hafsa
May 25th 2014
 
 
Hiba Hahah, same. how ARE u busy? I MISS u soo much Hiba
Apr 30th 2014
 
 
hafsa Hi mein be masroof hon tum bataoo Hafsa
Apr 24th 2014
 
 
Hiba :) . Yaar, I was having my assessments :(. Today was the last one . Anything new? when is ur summer vacation starting? Hiba
Apr 9th 2014
 
 
hafsa Tum kahan ho by the way my ife is good what about urs Hafsa
Apr 5th 2014
 
 
Hiba Haha, Hafsa where r u ? hows life? Hiba
Apr 2nd 2014
 
 
hafsa Lets talk about small brothers and sister like hhow are they [tell the truth] just joking Hafsa
Mar 10th 2014
 
 
Hiba Oh acha. lets talk about something different. U suggest a topic to talk about. Hiba
Mar 2nd 2014
 
 
hafsa Weather is hot nowadays and i am in class7 and now iwill go in 8 Hafsa
Feb 28th 2014
 
 
Hiba Oh, my exams are first from the 24 th of march and again in may :(. Anyways, how's the weather in Dubai? Which class are u in ? Hiba
Feb 25th 2014
 
 
hafsa Study is going on on these days our exams r going to start by 2 march and thats final exams thats why i am less active in vshine Hafsa
Feb 23rd 2014
 
 
Hiba Oh. whats going on these days hafsa ? why r u less active on vshine ? Hiba
Feb 22nd 2014
 
 
hafsa Hi, my is on 8 july and i was born in 2001 year Hafsa
Feb 19th 2014
 
 
Hiba Where r u Hafsa? Hiba
Feb 15th 2014
 
 
Hiba Well dear , my birthday is on 30 march. Which year were u born in ? Anything new? Hiba
Feb 7th 2014
 
 
hafsa Same situation here too about studing. dear i will come in karachi in june . and my birthday come in 8 july. when is ur birthday. Hafsa
Jan 30th 2014
 
 
Hiba Yaar buss kiya batoon ? :P. studies r driving me crazy. donnt get time to do anything at all. why doont u come to karachi ? when will u even come ? . when's ur birthday ? Hiba
Jan 29th 2014
 
 
hafsa Dear i have published my another stuff but it will take some time to come and about coming to karachi i will make visit there in july insallah because we are coming to pakistan [islamabad] in july but i do not exactly sure about it. .. so tell me something about u? what going on? Hafsa
Jan 27th 2014
 
 
hafsa No problem dear its ok . Hafsa
Jan 26th 2014
 
 
Hiba It's okay Hafsa :) , why don't u send more stuff to get published dear ? When r u planing to visit Karachi dear ? :D Hiba
Jan 26th 2014
 
 
Hiba Hafsa , I'm Here :) . Actually I was very busy these days. Hiba
Jan 24th 2014
 
 
hafsa Sory hiba i known ur name is hiba i think i have typed wrong i am sorry dear. and life in dubia is cool. dear. Hafsa
Jan 24th 2014
 
 
hafsa Where r u hibaaaaa?????????????? Hafsa
Jan 23rd 2014
 
 
hafsa Where r u hibaaaaa?????????????? Hafsa
Jan 23rd 2014
 
 
Hiba Well dear hafsa , my life is even going good. sorry for the late reply and my dear , my name is hiba not hida :). u tell hows dubai? Hiba
Jan 23rd 2014
 
 
hafsa Soorry i have done mistake of hiba and awsome Hafsa
Jan 21st 2014
 
 
hafsa Hida dear i also miss u toooo and yes life in dubia is ausome i am living here happily what about u Hafsa
Jan 17th 2014
 
 
hafsa Thx duaa Hafsa
Jan 17th 2014
 
 
Hiba I miss u even more :). A nyways study hard. Hows life in Dubai ? Hiba
Jan 16th 2014
 
 
dua It is nice. :) Dua
Jan 16th 2014
 
 
hafsa Ya i am ok and everythings allright i was very busy from these days because our maths teacher has gone for a very long holiday so we have a lot of work to do on our on now our new teacher has come so i was busy but now i am free. i miss u toooo dear Hafsa
Jan 14th 2014
 
 
Hiba Where r u Hafsa ? I miss u. It's been so many days since u didn't comment. Every thing ok? I hope for the best :) Hiba
Jan 13th 2014
 
 
Hiba Yaar , my vacations have started since the 18 th but result will be on 18 Jan. And school is opening on 8 th. And we went to Dolmen city mall , ocean mall and nue plex cinemas . We will go to port grand tmrw IA. And get well soon. And a very happy new year to u . May u have a great year ahead and may all ur wishes come true . So when is ur school re opening ? Hiba
Jan 1st 2014
 
 
hafsa We have gone ras al khaimah at 18-12-2013 and went to al ain yesterday and today i have too much fever. because it was very cold there i am soo weak now . kuch spiecal nahi ho raha bohut jaga gomein hain abb tora araam karien gay aur tum bataoo kay tumara result agaya ya nahi aur agar cutiyan hovi hain to kahan gomnien gay tum . Hafsa
Dec 30th 2014
 
 
Hiba Okay , so whats going on these days ? waise which city do u visit ? Hiba
Dec 29th 2013
 
 
hafsa Next year i think but for my sister i am not sure that i will come or not sahyid meri small sisster mere sat yahan rahay gi or mere father ya to pir mein pakistan aoongi i dont known mere parent soch rahay hai agg kal desigen tay ho gaya to tomay jaroor bataoongi ok Hafsa
Dec 25th 2013
 
 
Hiba So hafsa dear , when do u guys plan to come to pakistan? Hiba
Dec 22nd 2013
 
 
hafsa Ya ur right the weather is not good but it seems that it will rain in coming sunday and monday or mein kiya sunooo agg hum shopping kay liyay gay and kal sayad kahein gomanay gayain gay. Hafsa
Dec 19th 2013
 
 
Hiba Yeah Hafsa where in uae do u live? its a safe place to live in but the weather is not good. anyways my vacations just started and tmrw is my last day . no plans for vacations :(. tum sonao :D Hiba
Dec 18th 2013
 
 
hafsa Hiba dear ur right that dubia and the whole UAE is very beautifull and it is a place where we can live without fear . uae got two trofees of safe country in the whole country Hafsa
Dec 18th 2013
 
 
hafsa Han yahan ka weather tora good hai tori achi hava cal rahi hai or according to weather update it is known that it will rain and agar yahan rain ho to hum sukkar katay hain because UAE pehlay ik desert ta to abb sheik zayed jo hai jo foth ho gai hain onhon nay hi desert ka half part cities kay liyay bana hai or abb bi little part desert hai . or sunooo Hafsa
Dec 17th 2013
 
 
Hiba Hafsa dear my exans will finish tomorw IA. so do u live in Dubai? I just love it. its such a nice place. hows the weather in Dubai? Hiba
Dec 16th 2013
 
 
hafsa Ya and u known my father is a business man so he also took 25 holidays with us we also have 25 holidays and ya we will go to many places and insallah we will go to burj al kalifa. and is your exams finish? Hafsa
Dec 15th 2013
 
 
Hiba That's great hafsa. congratzzz :). so whats up? any plans for vacations? Hiba
Dec 13th 2013
 
 
hafsa Sorry my result has came today. my rank is 3rd in my class and our winter vacation has started in 9 december till 4 jan. sorry for mistake that i said it is in 13 date . i wa confuse between these dates13 and 12. Hafsa
Dec 12th 2013
 
 
Hiba U are the most welcome and tell m ur result. when do ur winter vacations start? Hiba
Dec 10th 2013
 
 
hafsa No. result yahan hai 13 date ko hain result . thx Hafsa
Dec 7th 2013
 
 
Hiba Busss kya batoon , exams ho rahay hain :( they will end on the 17th IA. And when is ur result? If it's here then tell me and ur new profile pic is very cute :) Hiba
Dec 6th 2013
 
 
hafsa Nothing special. i have given my exams very well . nowadays i am free. or batoo tumaray din kese ja rahay hain. Hafsa
Dec 6th 2013
 
 
Hiba Awww that's so sweet of u Hafsa. now we are best friends for life and u can even see ur name as my best friend in my about me. so whts going on these days? Hiba
Dec 5th 2013
 
 
hafsa Ooh . thx i was waiting for a friend like u . i dint have so good friends in my life from now on we r best friends i will never hurt u Hafsa
Dec 2nd 2013
 
 
Hiba Oh dear Hafsa sure I'll introduce u to my self. well my dear I live inkarachi , Pakistan . I am 14yrs old and I am the middle child . I have a younger Sis who is 4 and an elder brother who is 18 . And he studies in college . And I love to make new friends and I never hurrt my friends . It's better not to make friends then to Hurt them . So what's going on these days ? My exams are starting from Monday , areeba Ahmed is my cousin. Hiba
Nov 30th 2013
 
 
hafsa I hope u will understand it is because my keyboard is karab . that is why i hope u can understand . but when my father will bbring it then no mistake will be in comments. soRry. Hafsa
Nov 30th 2013
 
 
hafsa Oops. sorry 2 time or 1one correct hai or 3one wrong. Hafsa
Nov 30th 2013
 
 
hafsa I also want to know about u Hafsa
Nov 29th 2013
 
 
hafsa Dear Hiba ,I will be glad to be my friend . sure i can introduce u . ok i live in united arab emirate and in it i live in a town .umm al quwain in a villa . i am 13 years old and i have four sister (including me).and i have a brother. i am the 2 last in my brothers and sisters . my brother is the elder one and he is studying in china university. and i have sister younger than my brother .she is also studying in a university in pakistan apattabad. then i have another sister younger than her is studying in 12class she will go to university and her younger sister is me i am in class 7 . and i have one more sister the smalest she study in class 3. i will like to be ur best friend . but plz dont hurt me i have been hurt before i request u . thats all about me and i have sorry i have my parents too. Hafsa
Nov 29th 2013
 
 
hafsa And i wabt to know about u to Hafsa
Nov 29th 2013
 
 
hafsa Dear Hiba ,I will be glad to be my friend . sure i can introduce u . ok i live in united arab emirate and in it i live in a town .umm al quwain in a villa . i am 13 years old and i have four sister (including me).and i have a brother. i am the 2 last in my brothers and sisters . my brother is the elder one and he is studying in china university. and i have sister younger than my brother .she is also studying in a university in pakistan apattabad. then i have another sister younger than her is studying in 12class she will go to university and her younger sister is me i am in class 7 . and i have one more sister the smalest she study in class 3. i will like to be ur best friend . but plz dont hurt me i have been hurt before i request u . thats all about me and i have sorry i have my parents too. Hafsa
Nov 29th 2013
 
 
Hiba U aRe the most welcome dear . So Hafsa , do u want to be one of my best friend on vshine ?? If yes then please introduce urself to me . I'd love to know u and have u as my best friend . :) Hiba
Nov 29th 2013
 
 
hafsa Thx . Hafsa
Nov 26th 2013
 
 
hafsa Thx . Hafsa
Nov 26th 2013
 
 
Hiba Nice one Hafsa Hiba
Nov 23rd 2013
 
 
hafsa Hi Hafsa
Oct 18th 2013
 
 
hafsa Hi rafia how r u. Hafsa
Oct 13th 2013
 
 
hafsa Thanks Hafsa
Sep 28th 2013
 
 
hafsa Rafia how is rabia baji why was she in the operation thether :-(. Hafsa
Sep 27th 2013
 
 
Rafia No need of thnx my frnd :) nd it's AWESOME :) Rafia
Sep 27th 2013
 
 
hafsa Is it really good Hafsa
Sep 26th 2013
 
 
hafsa Rafia thanks for liking it Hafsa
Sep 25th 2013
 
 
Rafia True ! Rafia
Sep 25th 2013
 
 

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