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Rafia Ahmed
Rafia Ahmed
Usman Public School
The Old Woman
Published On Sep 24th 2013
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"Hey! that's a great idea to spend our vacations at our farmhouse." yelled Jessica with full excitement. Jessica  was a twelve year old girl who lived in England with her parents and 6 siblings. Jessica was the eldest of 12, then there was Elizabeth who was of 11, then Steven was their 8 years old brother, then there were twin Alice and Lois of 6 and atlast Andrew was a 3 years old sweet brother. Mr and Mrs. Wakefield decided that this time they should visit farmhouse as Mr. Wakefield had to do some work and Mrs. Wakefield will get some rest however, for the children, they need some fun. They all were too excited about the idea. The family packed the luggage and then the very next day they left for the trip. The trip of 2 or 3 hours seemed too much exciting. Jessica and her brothers and sister looked for a great holiday but they didn't knew that SHE was there to welcome them............
TO BE CONTINUED!!!!!!
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Comments 59
shehram Cool nyc story faboo!! Shehram
Aug 25th 2014
 
 
Tooba Sorry rafia Tooba
Apr 26th 2014
 
 
saman Rafia what have happened to tooba she is giving silly comments even on my poem and drawing Saman
Apr 11th 2014
 
 
Tooba Greedy fellow who wants comments yah.you said that to my brother ugly rafia Tooba
Apr 11th 2014
 
 
Nimra I luv u most.. :p anyways rafia wtz going on these days?? :) Nimra
Mar 22nd 2014
 
 
Nimra I luv u most.. :p anyways rafia wtz going on these days?? :) Nimra
Mar 22nd 2014
 
 
hibba Love this and the second part tooo Hibba
Jan 7th 2014
 
 
Rafia Yeah Gul Noor ... u r right dear :) i took the names from sweet valley :)) nd Yup! jessica nd Elizabeth r twins nd honey, u'll find that who is SHE in my stry "the old woman part 2" :)) ok?? Rafia
Dec 2nd 2013
 
 
Gul Noor In this story jessica n elizabith are twins,right?????n who is the SHE???? Gul Noor
Dec 1st 2013
 
 
Gul Noor Rafia u took names from this book: sweet valley right??? Gul Noor
Dec 1st 2013
 
 
Rafia Thnkuu dear areej :) Rafia
Nov 15th 2013
 
 
Areej Rafia :) its Owsum Areej
Nov 13th 2013
 
 
Rafia I love u more nimra :) Rafia
Oct 27th 2013
 
 
Nimra Luv u 2..!!! :) Nimra
Oct 15th 2013
 
 
Rafia Love u soooo much sweetie :)) Rafia
Oct 15th 2013
 
 
Nimra U always welcum dear rafia.. :)) Nimra
Oct 14th 2013
 
 
Rafia Thnku honey :))) Rafia
Oct 14th 2013
 
 
Nimra Gudd one keep it up rafia..!!! :))) Nimra
Oct 13th 2013
 
 
Rafia Well, what more do u lik to read???? :) Rafia
Oct 10th 2013
 
 
Irum Yh, its awesome.......... Irum
Oct 10th 2013
 
 
Rafia So did u liked it ?????? :))) Rafia
Oct 8th 2013
 
 
Irum Yes i have read it. Irum
Oct 6th 2013
 
 
Rafia REALLY DEAR ???????? thnkuuuuuuuuuuu honey!!!!! plz comment on the next one too :))))))) Rafia
Oct 6th 2013
 
 
Zainab Oooh so exciting i'm gonna read the next part right now Zainab
Oct 6th 2013
 
 
Zainab Oooh so exciting i'm gonna read the next part right now Zainab
Oct 6th 2013
 
 
Rafia Ooooo0000h!!!!!! em BIG FAN of Hunger games ....... have u watched the movie???????????? IT'S AWESOME :))))) Rafia
Oct 5th 2013
 
 
Irum Nope, dont read it. Anyways, now Sweet Valley Twins is too childish fr me. Nwadays I read books which are Young adult literature, Alternate history, Science Fiction, Adventure fiction, Speculative fictionor Utopian and dystopian fiction, like Hunger Games!! Irum
Oct 5th 2013
 
 
Rafia Thnkuuuu Khadijah :))) Rafia
Oct 4th 2013
 
 
Rafia Areeba nd Unaiza ..... JAZAKALLAH my frnds for ur support ..... nd Unaiza thnx for correcting me :))) INSHALLAH next time I'll take care of it :):) Rafia
Oct 4th 2013
 
 
l Good one.. L
Oct 4th 2013
 
 
Areeba Great work :) No words left to describe the awesomeness of ur stories Areeba
Oct 3rd 2013
 
 
unaiza Masha Allah , this story seems to be quite good. There is one mistake in the last line, there should be "know" instead of "knew". Altogether its a good , thrilling story Unaiza
Oct 3rd 2013
 
 
Rafia Thnkx alot!!! :) Rafia
Oct 3rd 2013
 
 
Asrar Nice.......! Asrar
Oct 2nd 2013
 
 
Rafia Zainab thanx alot dear :) Rafia
Oct 2nd 2013
 
 
Rafia Yup!! Ayesha i hav read sweet valley!! they r soooo cool ...... do u read babysitters novels??? :) Rafia
Oct 2nd 2013
 
 
Rafia Thankyou Affan :) Rafia
Oct 2nd 2013
 
 
Rafia Hafs dear thnx alot !!!!! :) Rafia
Oct 2nd 2013
 
 
HAFSA Rafia dear this is a veryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy nice story:) Hafsa
Oct 2nd 2013
 
 
Zainab Sure best friend Zainab
Oct 2nd 2013
 
 
Irum Hey! You read Sweet Valley too? Its awesome!! Irum
Oct 2nd 2013
 
 
Affan Awsome Affan
Oct 1st 2013
 
 
Rafia Hey! Yup! i got that dear ....... so u r my frnd right dear?????? :) Rafia
Sep 30th 2013
 
 
Zainab Oh hi Rafia you told me to introduce myself just click on my name next to my comments. then you can read all my information in the "about me" option. Ok? Zainab
Sep 29th 2013
 
 
Rafia THNX ALOT JANDA ND HIBA ....... well, YUp! where r the winners????? :) Rafia
Sep 29th 2013
 
 
jandad Veery gooooood,,, Jandad
Sep 28th 2013
 
 
jandad Veery gooooood,,, Jandad
Sep 28th 2013
 
 
Hiba Cant wait for the next part, please ask the vshine people to approve it quickly and when will this months winners be announced? Hiba
Sep 28th 2013
 
 
Rafia Hamzah, Manal and Bismah ....... em sooooooooooo happy for ur all comments :) thnx alotttttttt!!!!!!! :) Rafia
Sep 28th 2013
 
 
Bismah Awesome..... Bismah
Sep 27th 2013
 
 
Hamzah Wooooow!!! Very intresting Hamzah
Sep 27th 2013
 
 
manal Awwsoome raffiaa dear...... Manal
Sep 27th 2013
 
 
Rafia Well, well, my dearest frnds thnx alottttttttttttt for such appreciation nd beautiful comments .... i am sending the next part just at the moment .. nd HIBA :) thnkuuu for ur hope :)))) Rafia
Sep 27th 2013
 
 
eesha Wooooow...osum plzzzz tell who was SHE....cant w8 yaar tooo interesting Eesha
Sep 26th 2013
 
 
Maryam Like it and waiting for next Maryam
Sep 26th 2013
 
 
Hiba That's really nice. Rafia can't wait for the other part of the story , congratz for getting it published, hope that u are a winner Hiba
Sep 26th 2013
 
 
Anam Wow rabia do send next part Anam
Sep 26th 2013
 
 
feriha Thatx realllly nyxe dear...... :) Feriha
Sep 26th 2013
 
 
Rafia Thnx alot vshine!!!! dear frnds plz comment nd like it .... however it's a REAL one :) Rafia
Sep 25th 2013
 
 

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