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Raiyan Ahmed
Raiyan Ahmed
Beaconhouse Middle Ii
The Fierce Maneater
Published On Sep 11th 2013
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I despised seriously when my parents left me alone at home and went somewhere specially at night, I mean what kind of act is that. They probably thought that I would sleep soundly but they were totally absolutely wrong! Anyway I was on my roof gazing at the stars shining brightly above in the sky with a slight smile on my face. I thought that was the only thing left for me to do besides reading books, writing diaries, recounts or even poems.
My eyes were fixed on the dark blue sky when suddenly I heard a knock on the door, I was very sleepy so I simply thought it was deceiving to my mind and relaxed but after a minute someone slammed the main door from inside the house. I thought that my parents had arrived so I ran down deeply hoping my parents would be astonished to see me widely awake at twelve thirty but my mouth felt open to see that there was no one down. As I turned back and headed confused towards my room not knowing who pulled my leg, I slipped from the stairs and crash landed onto the floor of the Dining room. Thank God my head didn’t bang on the floor or I would have been finished that instant, Whoosh! When I opened my eyes I was nearly dead or you can say unconscious to see a real life man eater giving me a ravenous look. I sensed quickly that it was not a friendly look. With his red eyes, hairs all over the body, pointed yellow teeth sticking out of his mouth and sticky saliva was dripping off, Urrgh! He looked incredibly horrible. I tried to crawl quietly out of his grip but I couldn’t. I tried to scream at full of my voice but it seemed to be stammered, It was useless, I couldn’t do anything to get out of his grip. Suddenly I remembered that I had a lighter in my pocket, I took it out, lit it and threw it at the monster. As I expected he started to burn black smoke rose and a very bad pong came out of his dirty skin. Just then my father arrived; he heard me scream and ran in. I told him the whole case and expected him to listen carefully as he hauled the man eater into our garden. The moonlight shone brightly on him and in a few moments he turned to dust. The dust flew in air as the wind blew and that was the end of the fierce man eater.
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Comments 10
mohammad aashir IT IS BORING Mohammad Aashir
Feb 7th 2014
Raiyan Thank u guys Raiyan
Jan 6th 2014
taskeen Gr8 Taskeen
Oct 21st 2013
Usman Ecellent!!! Usman
Sep 17th 2013
Irum Awesome! Irum
Sep 14th 2013
Anam Great first i thought it would be thieves but then.....simply awesome!!♥♥♥-T♀ Anam
Sep 13th 2013
Aisha Great... Aisha
Sep 13th 2013
Rafia Great one :):):) really appreciable :) Rafia
Sep 11th 2013
Ibrahim Nice story i apprachet you for writing such great story♥♥♥-T♀ Ibrahim
Sep 11th 2013
Hasan Good Hasan
Sep 11th 2013

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