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Abdur Rafay Khan
Abdur Rafay Khan
Beaconhouse School System Pechs Campus,karachi
The Diamond Robbery (final Part)
Published On Sep 6th 2013
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"When Rhodes decided to steal the diamond, he was on duty at that time, so he didn't have time to change his appearance, but he needed to steal quietly so he went in through the back door. But the guard dog was there and it didn't bark at him as it knew him from sight. But Rhodes was still worried so he shot the mastiff and no gunshot was heard through which I deduced that a silencer must be attached to the pistol. The finger print of the criminal Alex was also not a difficult deduction. Rhodes is policeman and he obviously had access to prison, so he must have taken Alex's fingerprint and applied it on the diamond."
"And the Siamese cat fingerprint?" asked Holmes.
"You remember that Joe Blackwell told us that Jack had told him that he was going to throw away a box in the alley. I figured out that the box must have the Siamese cat in it so Jack must have opened the shop and placed false prints. And today I went to the park and I saw Rhodes playing with his son and a Siamese kitten." concluded Stephen.
Everyone was speechless. Chris Stephen had proved himself once again as the great detective. Now Jack Rhodes was brought in and was arrested for stealing the Sky Diamond. At first he disagreed but when he was shown the evidence, he pleaded of being guilty and was sent in jail for 5 years. Stephen was congratulated once again for his great detection.
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Comments 16
Andlib Write more..where are u now,detective? Andlib
Dec 21st 2013
Nuzhat Very very very nice stories Nuzhat
Nov 21st 2013
unaiza Lovely theme. Unaiza
Oct 15th 2013
Rafia I agree with affan :))) Rafia
Sep 15th 2013
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Sep 15th 2013
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Sep 12th 2013
Rafia Hey Ayesha!!!!!!! I do think the same :):):) Rafia
Sep 11th 2013
Ibrahim Nice Ibrahim
Sep 11th 2013
Irum You re the most fabulous member of VShine, I think, Coz you have TONS of stories, and u dont fight! Irum
Sep 10th 2013
Usman Awesome Story!!!! Usman
Sep 8th 2013
Rafia WOAH!!!!!!!!! what a end !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AWESOME ... Rafia
Sep 8th 2013
Aisha Loved the story...Every part was amazing.....Looking forward to many more great stories like this from you........ Aisha
Sep 7th 2013
Khadijah Your Stories are the best. ;) Khadijah
Sep 7th 2013
Soha AWESOME!!!!!! Soha
Sep 7th 2013
talha Nice story...i liked it.... Talha
Sep 7th 2013
eesha Like always......... EXCELLENTTTTTT!!!!!!!!!! Eesha
Sep 6th 2013

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