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Maryam Aamir
Maryam Aamir
Notorious Room Part 1
Published On Sep 11th 2013
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I was having my exams after two months. For good preparation I thought in solitude I could get better atmosphere to study. Therefore I was eager to have a room in hostel. As my parents allowed me to do so I tried to find a room suitable for me but failed to find any.
At last I went to the hostel a bit out of my city. I asked from the lady at reception. "Hello! Can I have a room here?"
She replied "No there is no room in our hostel."
I requested her to check the record once again. But her answer was same.
After a lot of requests she said "we have only one room no one owned that room because it is notorious. I can give you that room on your responsibility." I agreed.
I started living in the last room of top storey. The room was covered with darkness even in day time. My first day was over but nothing happened. I thought the lady lied to me. While  I thought that.....
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Nimra Haha yeah, happy holidays to you too. My last final was on 13th. Done with result too Allahumdulilah O levels and now promoted to 9. Aww it means alott dearr ^_^ nothing much these days, boring vacations u tell anything new? :D Nimra
Jun 5th 2016
Maryam Allhamduillah you are feeling better now... My last exam was on Monday- physics. It was a lot difficult than i imagined. now i am finally free yay! Finally got some time to open vshine. I only open it for sweety. lastly happy holidays. it's been a while since last summer.. so any thing new?? Maryam
May 31st 2016
Nimra Where are you lost? Although I know we in this busy schedule don't have much time to talk with each other. Anyways so how's everything? What's going these days? Anything new? :'D I don't have anything new except that I was having High fever, Vomits and Jaundice from last 2 to 3 weeks. Allahumdulilah recovered now. :') Today was my 1st Final paper. Physics and bio. Both went good Allahumdulilah ^_^ Last paper is on 13th :D This time idk ( I don't know) how my papers are ending so early anyways good thing it is. :D Will wait for your reply if got time to open vshine again :p Byee.With loads of lovee :* Nimra
May 3rd 2016
Nimra Hahah babee :* same here. Actually i was missing you :p anddd... nothingg muchh.. 2nd assessments from 1st march. :/ Nimra
Feb 22nd 2016
Maryam Boring life, hard studies, weekend on YouTube and nothing much important... what are you doing these days?? :o :D Maryam
Jan 21st 2016
Nimra Oh that was good. :) so em heree. After a longg timee. :o Hows everything at your side? :D whats going on these days? And wht abt studies? :p ;) Nimra
Oct 23rd 2015
Maryam Yes i did.. i went to pak n it was fun... Maryam
Sep 4th 2015
Nimra Aww.. :* oh same here. :) so anything new.? Did you enjoyed your summer vacations.? :D My schools r opening from 4th August. Nimra
Jul 27th 2015
Maryam I used to visit vshine just to see ur comment... since u didnt came here for so long i left checking for ur comment...any ways my life is extra busy.... my exams are over long ago in april and my result came in july..... n i miss u too i hope so u wil reply soon.... :)) :o Maryam
Jul 17th 2015
Nimra Maryam.? where you lostt...? :/ em missingg youu baby :* well em soo happyyy tomorrow is my last final paper. :D ;) Nimra
May 26th 2015
Nimra Aww maryam dear :* em backk but after so longg timeee.... OMG :o kia batun still so busy these days.. FINALS are on HEAD :'( you tell whats going on? :) on 15th may its my first paper and on 27th it will be last..! this time my papers will finish so latee >_< :'( are ur finals started.? and when will they end!? :P Nimra
May 9th 2015
Ayesha I made the century of coments iam the hunderd comenter !!!!!!! Ayesha
Apr 19th 2015
Maryam Nimo kahan chali gayee!!! :( Maryam
Jan 24th 2015
Maryam Mention not. :) ^_^ Maryam
Jan 1st 2015
yusra Its my pleasure maryam! Yusra
Dec 25th 2014
Maryam Thank you Yussi :)) :o) Maryam
Dec 25th 2014
Maryam What should I start with?? so busy weeks.... :(( I think I opened Vshine after months.. well at least I did it.. :))) :D so how are you?? Maryam
Dec 25th 2014
yusra Like it! Yusra
Dec 24th 2014
Nimra Aww. np its ok..! :) so r u fine now..? ;) ahaah thanks dear :D :* Nimra
Nov 27th 2014
Maryam First of all I am SO SO SORRY for commenting toooooooo late. Mujhe fever tha :( :< SECONDLY the most IMPORTANT thing is that ..........!!!>>>HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO DEAR NIMO<< Maryam
Nov 26th 2014
Nimra U knw wht yesterday (saturday 22nd nov) ws my birthdayy and i was too happyy ..! :'D :') ;) Nimra
Nov 23rd 2014
Nimra Aww ok Inshallah i wl pray for u..! :) well thanks for appreciating ..! :D :') :* ;) Nimra
Nov 13th 2014
Maryam Wow Mashallah acha result hai 82% A+...... happy happy :)) :o) mere paper abhi khatam nahi hue next math ka hai phir bio then the END :)) :o) bus tum mere liye dua karna k mera result bhi batanay k kabil ho bare bure paper huay hain. :(( Maryam
Oct 30th 2014
Nimra Oh dear no prblm i can understand ur situation ..! :) wl miss u and wl wait for ur replyy..! :D :* ;) :) well u knw wht my papers r already don nd today ws my result and em soo happy i got 82% Allahumdulilah..! :D :) ;) :p :') Nimra
Oct 17th 2014
Maryam Sorry Nimo!!..!!... I will reply so late so late...... becoz my exams and If I will pass them with good marks then my admission will be sent to fbise :( any ways I will wait for exams to end so I can talk to you :o :p :* Maryam
Oct 15th 2014
Nimra Hehehe lolzz samee..! :p :'D ;) :v Nimra
Oct 7th 2014
Maryam LOLzz my bakra is tasty :o :p :** I ate it today. :p :d :** Maryam
Oct 5th 2014
Nimra Ahaah lolzz sho sweet of u thankyou..! :** yes i missed her ofcouse em even angry cux she havent replied my comments..! :'( haha yo samee..! i even wish same to have a secret id,..! ;) :v :p well eid mubarak to u as well..! :) :D ahaah my bakra is evn cute..! :p ;) :v :D Nimra
Oct 4th 2014
Maryam THEY DONT LET ME PLAY QUIZ. m00d: extremelyyy angeryyyy Maryam
Oct 3rd 2014
Maryam Hahaha..!! :o :-> so piyari AZAADI :o) :p ^_^ tomorrow is my EID yeah..! I am sending you lots of rest and AARAM Karo..!! :o :D chuti hoti kis liye hai?!?!?! :o :* :d Our BAKRA is cute..!! I wiish I couldd makee a secretee id heree to answerr all! rudee peoplee. :o :p :o) I am also missing some one *RAFIA*. :( :-< do you also miss her??? OOOfcorse u do...!!! ....!!!!....****Advance EID MUBARAK****....!!!!.... I hope u reply soon in chuties. (what a plural ) :p :O :o) Maryam
Oct 3rd 2014
Nimra Haha lol okk :p yess samee we will buy 2 bakras..! :D :v they will cum todayy..! i like adventure games :D and puzzle one to sometimes..! :P ;) u knw wht todayy ws my last monthly paper and last day of school..! :D now will enjoy on EID ki chutiyaan..! ;) feeling too tired but still here to reply u..! :* ;) :p :) ^_^ oh yeah and sorry for late reply as i tld u abt my papers so thats why this week i ws very very busyy..! :p didnt even get time to take rest..! :/ but now finallyy AZAAD :D Nimra
Oct 3rd 2014
Maryam Hahaha here Eid is so boring I enjoyed celebrating Eid in Pakistan although i was in fever. :o) :-> We haven't bought the Bakra yet :) :o so which animal you decided for Qurbani I think we will buy bakra. :p :D So which games do you like. racing, puzzle, action, adventure..............!!! I like adventure games more than any other category games. Oh and horror one to. :o) :o Maryam
Sep 26th 2014
Nimra Haha acha aww luckyy you..! :D :) :p np dear its ok i ws even busy and em still busy as i have my assessments from Monday urghh...! >_< :'( :/ the weather in Karachi is fine sometimes its very hot wrna its fine weather ..! u tel whts going on so have u don ur Eid's preparation..!? :o i have not even started it yett xD..! :o :p ;) as i tld u very busyy these dayss burden of studies..! :/ ._________. :( Nimra
Sep 25th 2014
Maryam Sorry Nimo! :o I was not allowed to use net because of tests yesterday I gave the last test and on 28 sep they are haunting back for revenge I guess. :o) :o =) Oh you also don't want to give monthly test Although they are good for us:p I know who wants to give tests!!!!! :8 :p I have found a advantage of test( finally a good thing in test) there is no written HW!!!! :o so how is weather in Karachi????? here same hot weather which never change.... Oh BTW today is saudia's national day for celebration today is officially Off..... :o) :d yeah!!!!! hurrah!!!!! and I wish to go to park for watching some firework.... :o :p =/ Maryam
Sep 23rd 2014
zarmala WOW,MYSTERIOSE........I LIKE IT! Zarmala
Sep 21st 2014
Nimra Now where u lostt maryam..?? :o :3 Nimra
Sep 18th 2014
Nimra Ahaaah lol samee..! very sadd..! :( :'( dont wanna give monthly tests xD..! :P :/ :( bye talk u soon will miss u..! :) :* :p Nimra
Sep 14th 2014
Maryam Sure dear. well my school is going really bad just after a week my tests starting. on sunday the first test so don't have time. bye see you later. Maryam
Sep 12th 2014
Nimra Hahaha lol okk finee..! :) :p ;) but i think we should tlk abt sumthng else..! ;) why we tlking abt politics dnt u think it kinda boringg..!?? :p :3 so hows ur school and studies goingg..!? :p :) Nimra
Sep 7th 2014
Maryam Oh!!!! dear!!! plz don't call him mad cuz I am supporting Imran Khan :p :d or mera matlab tha k >><<" mein ne comment nahi karna" >><-->. Maryam
Sep 6th 2014
Nimra Haha lol okk samee..! :p :/ noo noo bhaii i es not that much khuwar k main dharnayy main jatii..!! :p actually i think it all useless and imran khan has gon madd..! :p there's no need to do all these things..!! :3 and yeahh em supporting nawaz shareef :P :) so why would i go in dharna..!? :o :p ;) Nimra
Sep 5th 2014
Nimra Urghh em veryy angryy on vshinee thatt my commnets arent postingg...!!! huhh >___________< .____________, i tried it 2 3 times..! :/ :( Nimra
Sep 2nd 2014
Maryam Hahaha!!>> Nothing special I am doing my homework << BTW can I ask you a question? tum dharna de rahi ho? today is such a booorrrrrrrriiiiiiggg day....... Maryam
Aug 30th 2014
Nimra Ohh reallyy lol ohkk..!! :p ;) so whats goingg on these dayyss..!!? ;) :) how's ur studies goingg..!? :p ;) :D Nimra
Aug 28th 2014
Maryam Hahaha!!!!! Jubail is a small village city :o) there is Industry I don't which kind but it is :o :D now there is a large shopping center which is too far from my home and there are four main roads all the city lies between these although there are small streets !!!!:o) :-] lol !!!!! and there is no airport here so we need to go other city :(( , many time grater than Jubail you can find it on 'Google Earth' :o :p :d that' s all about it. its too hot here the winter is mild :o :b the lowest temperature I have seen is 4 degree Celsius. :o) you know what I have seen MHSA and Waar on ARY I liked them. :o) :D :*) Maryam
Aug 27th 2014
Nimra Haha lol kk no prblmm..!! :P same heree...! :p no bhaii i cantt drink tap water i drink mineral waterr...!! :D :) :p ;) haha lol yeahh soo manyyy questionss..!!! :p :D ohhkkk lolzz...!! :P ;) no em very perfect in short formss...!!! :D ;) :p well i live in Karachi , Pakistan.. My school name is Progressive Public School ..! :) i study in grade 7 and em 12 years oldd..!! :P ;) i have 3 sisters including me and 1 borther..! :p i have 2 nephews and i luv them alot alott...!! :) :D <3 <3 :* :* theyy r veryy attached to mee thats why i even miss them alott..!! :/ :( :'( well soo my hobby is playing games on net and outdoor + indoor games + net surfing..!! :P ;) :D and yeahh i also dnt listen songss if yes them very very less...! i even watch movies very less too..! i have watched some hindi and animated movies bothh..! ;) and some english one too..!! :) :D and yeahh my typing is soo fastt even i write soo quicklyy in my class others r slow writerss...!!! :P thats why i can easily write an essay in not more than 10 minss..! :) :D ;) and as its also a kind of essay and em enjoying typing itt..!! :P ;) well so lets now tell me something abt jubail..! ;) i wnt to knw itt...!! :p cuxzz i have never wentt their even i have listened its name first time from u..!! :o :p :'3 Nimra
Aug 26th 2014
Maryam And Oh I just submitted the 5th part of my story before that essay comment. hahahah lol forget to tell you some thing I am very bad in short forms!!!!!!!! lol lol lol!!!!!!!!!!!! what about you. Maryam
Aug 24th 2014
Maryam SOOOOO many questions!!!! at a time I read the comment many time to answer all the questions I don't have time to punctuate my comment but I will try:D. I am in 10th and in Pakistan International School. I live in Jubail 'village city' because it is a very small city!!!!! Atmosphere is almost same as Karachi!!!!! I can't drink tap water by the way can you???? Toooooo salty water so my best friend is mineral water yeahhhhhh. Hair fall is biggest problem and.......!!!!!!! to many problems. I don't know why the B key is so hard to press; my key board is old. I turned 14 this year.I only have 1 sis my Ammi, Abu and rest of family is in Lahore. why I write Ammi Abu in Urdu!!!!! My hobby is reading and playing games on net:-D I watch english and animated mostly but I have seen some hindi movies. I used to listen songs but my father told me that songs are 'haram'. the 1st 'PERCY JACKSON' I read was the sea of monsters i just liked it but I love the Battle of Labyrinth. B key again!!!!!! Well now its your turn to answer these questions. such a long comment!!!!! Now i should decorate my comment it looks like essay;) Maryam
Aug 24th 2014
Nimra Haha lol samee..!! :D :p ;) okk well nthng much busy in studiess..! :p :/ well wht u wanna sayyyy???? :o :p hmm no ywrr filhal to i dont have any idea to tlk abt wht sumthng..!! :p well u tell wht to tlk abt cuxzz em really bored here..!! :/ and dnt even have time to open vshine in week dayss..! :'3 ohh yeahh so in which class r u..!? u r in 10th matric..!? :o :p well in which school do u study ..! name..!? :) and where do u livee..!!?? :o i live in Karachi Pakistan..!! :D :) and well whts ur agee..!!?? :) :O :p plzz tell me something abt ur school , family and freindss..!! :) :D and ohh yeahh..! whts ur hobby? :p do u watch movies or listen songss..!? :o if yes then which kind of movies hindi movies , english movies or the animated onee..!?? :P ;) and yess i even read ur about me todayy wo be 1st time xD .! :p well i luv it..!! and yess i also have read Percy Jackson when i ws in Grade 6..! :p bt i have onlyy read ''PERCY JACKSON AND THE SEA OF MONSTERS'' ..! it ws sumthng gud like bt idkk why i hated it..!! xD..! :p well so em in grade 7 and 12 years oldd..! :p ;) and yess noww finallyyy i have got sooo manyyy topicss to tlk abt...!!! :D ;) :p curiouss to knw each and every thing abttt uuu..!!! :P :) :D ;) soo waiting impatientlyy for ur replyy..!! :D :p ;) hope u wl reply mee soonn..!!! :D :p ;) Nimra
Aug 24th 2014
Maryam Nothing special just praying for the best of Pakistan you know what I wanna say.................well what you are doing these days????? yeah lets talk on something!!!!!! what something ummm..........!!!!!!! any idea?????? Maryam
Aug 21st 2014
Shaheer Cool story btw are you scared of ghosts? :-/ Shaheer
Aug 18th 2014
Nimra Oh acha np its ok..! :) haha lol.. :p ohh samee.. :) yeahh for suree..!! ;) :) :D so whts going on these dayys? lets wanna tlk abt sumthng..!? :) ;) Nimra
Aug 17th 2014
Maryam !!***SORRY***!! I didn't check vshine for past few days except for my independence day picture. My school will be open again on 7th of September and I haven't done my homework yet I know lazy me. I also missed you a lot and happy to read your comment again. hope to read many many more and more and more ;)) Maryam
Aug 16th 2014
Nimra Finally my schools r started..! :o :/ and today ws my 1st day and i enjoyed alott!! :D :) where u lostt?? :o :/ miss u :* Nimra
Aug 11th 2014
Nimra Ohh maryam samee.. :/ so whts goingg on these dayys? :) did u enjoyed ur summer vacations?? :) when r ur schools opening i mean from which date?? my schools r opening from Monday 11th august :/ :p so then we wont be able to tlk..!! :/ may be only in weekends..!! Nimra
Aug 6th 2014
Maryam Thanx again Maryam
Jul 11th 2014
Hafsa I am very amazed Hafsa
Jul 4th 2014
Maryam Thank you Maryam
Jul 2nd 2014
Laibah Good story Laibah
Jul 1st 2014
Ayesha Very nice story my dearest sis Ayesha
Jun 29th 2014
Maryam Pata hai kitni der baad use kar rahi hoon. @ nimo studies mushkil se mushkil hoti ja rahi hai. @ tooba Thank you sweety Maryam
Jun 12th 2014
Tooba Amazing story Tooba
Jun 1st 2014
Hiba Inshallah u will fullfill all ur aim in life :) (Ameen). I am praying for u Maryam , God is there with u at all times . I wish for the best for u. Hiba
Mar 9th 2014
Nimra Then may be my cmnt ws nt posted.. i wrote hey maryam hw r u?? wtz going on?? :) hw ur studies going.. or may be i wrote thix that hey friendx long time no tlk... pata hai 1 year had past i had nt used vshine wx very busy in studies.. :/ :( Nimra
Mar 8th 2014
Maryam I really too lost. on 18th march my first board seems like first hurdle of successful life,like 6 on last ball. I can't explain. You know i want to be heart surgoen so my marks should be arround 480. With 480 marks i can think for addmission in good collage.okay thats it i'm in car so difficult to type. :))) Maryam
Mar 6th 2014
Hiba Whats going on Maryam ? u seem to be lost :p i misss u :* Hiba
Mar 2nd 2014
Maryam About what??? Maryam
Feb 26th 2014
Nimra Oh axcha ok np no prblm.. :) yup i told u abt that!!!.............. Nimra
Feb 24th 2014
Maryam I've seen your comment after a long time my dear Nimo! but sorry guys I'm not on facebook in fact no one in my family use facebook! Maryam
Feb 23rd 2014
Nimra Ya maryam r u on facebook?? & if yes than by which name? :) Nimra
Feb 21st 2014
Hiba Aww :). but u will have to come to karachi then :P. r u on facebook? :) Hiba
Jan 29th 2014
Maryam Wow I also want to hear your smile. Maryam
Jan 27th 2014
Hiba I even smile a lot and my laugh is famous in my family , everyone wants to hear it :P Hiba
Jan 23rd 2014
Maryam So what about you do you smile a lot like i do or you are a serious girl. Maryam
Jan 17th 2014
Hiba Thats great . We should always smile , its contagious :D Hiba
Jan 16th 2014
Maryam I smile a lot. Maryam
Jan 13th 2014
Hiba Aww , u too :) Hiba
Jan 12th 2014
Maryam :))) keep smiling Maryam
Jan 6th 2014
Hiba :D Hiba
Dec 29th 2013
Maryam Good good Maryam
Dec 22nd 2013
Hiba Awww Maryam , today I even sent a story , I hope it gets approved :D Hiba
Dec 13th 2013
Maryam Acha hai hamien bhi genius girl ka stuff parhne ko mile ga. COOL! ;) Maryam
Dec 12th 2013
Hiba Maryam i have sent a few poems but they havent been published yet :(. i sent them in june Hiba
Dec 10th 2013
Maryam Thank you Hiba. y u haven't send any thing Although you are genius girl?? And Isha it's my pleasure to be your friend. Maryam
Dec 7th 2013
Hiba I just love the way u are creating suspense and keep going this way :) Hiba
Dec 7th 2013
Amna 'cept m req dude. Amna
Dec 7th 2013
Maryam My pleasure Munkashay. Maryam
Nov 7th 2013
Munkashay Your Welcome! Munkashay
Nov 7th 2013
Maryam Thank you so much Munkashay! Maryam
Oct 29th 2013
Munkashay Wow.... Continuous suspense! Munkashay
Oct 28th 2013
Rafia Ooooo0!!!! i hav read it honey :)))) thatz gr8 :) Rafia
Oct 7th 2013
Maryam Thanx dear but no need of sorry now i hav send the second part too Maryam
Oct 4th 2013
Rafia Em sooooooo sooooooo soooooo sooooo sooooo soooooo sorry that i didnt commented ....... THATZ AWESOME DEAR :))))) Rafia
Oct 4th 2013
Maryam Thanx dear Anam Maryam
Sep 27th 2013
Anam I can't wait Anam
Sep 26th 2013
Maryam Thankyou sweet Minahil and Ajwa. and my brothers ibrahim bhai and rehan bhai Maryam
Sep 23rd 2013
Maryam Thankyou dear Esha Maryam
Sep 23rd 2013
Maryam Thanks Khadijah i had stop listening it and i will soon remove it from my profile. my sis is Ayesha Aamir. well y u r asking? Maryam
Sep 23rd 2013
Sep 23rd 2013
Khadijah I read your profile Maryam Baji, there is something to tell you that MUSIC IS HARAM which Allah prohibited. So plz stop listening to it. And what is your Sister's ID? Khadijah
Sep 22nd 2013
Maryam There is some problem in my net browser. SORRY guys especially dear Khadijah It took time:-(. but i will try to send from my sis id :-) Maryam
Sep 20th 2013
eesha Coooollll w8ing for next part........tick tock Eesha
Sep 20th 2013
Khadijah I really, really, really, really, extremely can't wait. Khadijah
Sep 20th 2013
Minahil When is the next prt cumin,??????????? Minahil
Sep 20th 2013
Ibrahim Nice story Ibrahim
Sep 19th 2013
rehan Hostel Sweet home :) Rehan
Sep 18th 2013
Ajwa Suspecius.....gud... Ajwa
Sep 16th 2013
Minahil Agreeing with khadijah:} Minahil
Sep 15th 2013
Maryam Thank you dear Khadijah, sweet Ayesha and bf Rafia Maryam
Sep 14th 2013
Irum Awesome! Irum
Sep 14th 2013
Khadijah Waiting anxiously.................. Khadijah
Sep 12th 2013

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