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Liza Khan
Liza Khan
Ladybird Grammar School
The Magic Carpet
Published On Mar 19th 2011
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Once upon a time there was a girl named Susan. She was very clever her father have changed her bedroom carpet at night she was sleeping and the carpet was moving around the bedroom. At morning she was sitting on the carpet and the carpet was going down stairs she cried Mom, Mom then her came she said to carpet please come down then Susan tell her mother about magic carpet then Susan’s mother call her father and tell about magic carpet then her father come to home and carpet was lying on the floor.
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Comments 12
hibba Nice Hibba
Jan 20th 2014
 
 
Anam Momina if i say u stink then?????try 2 understand others feelings yaar Anam
Nov 22nd 2013
 
 
Aliza Nyc Aliza
Oct 23rd 2011
 
 
Wania Nice!!! Wania
Aug 16th 2011
 
 
Momina Its not complete Momina
Aug 8th 2011
 
 
Itachi It is nyc but there r gramatical mistakes and i think it isnot a complete story Itachi
Jul 3rd 2011
 
 
Momina Here's my thought: IT DOUBLE STINKS! Momina
Jun 13th 2011
 
 
Zahra I cannot under stand Zahra
Apr 13th 2011
 
 
shahzaman Its correct and good Shahzaman
Mar 31st 2011
 
 
Aleena I think it's not a complete story! Aleena
Mar 21st 2011
 
 
Naila GOOD!!!!!!!!! Naila
Mar 21st 2011
 
 
Bint waseem I didnt understand....can u plz explain me? Bint Waseem
Mar 19th 2011
 
 

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