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Sarah Khawaja
Sarah Khawaja
Rosan's Islamic School
Boastful Jane
Published On Sep 24th 2013
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There was once a girl. Her name was Jane. She was very boastful. Her friends got tired of her always saying something or other. She boasted about her frocks, “You know my aunty gave me two new frocks. You should see them. They are wonderful…” And went on and on. One day, as she was going home from school, she saw a small man coming towards her. He said, “Hello, I am Sparky and I am a gnome. I have heard of you. Aren’t you boastful Jane? I have two brothers. They are the best boasters in fairy land. Their names are Pip and Joe. I bet even you couldn’t beat them in boasting”. He took Jane to his home. She was amazed by his two boasting brothers. She boasted to them about her clothes. Pip said, “I have 50 hats all different”. Jane said, “You are lying”. “Come here”, said Pip, “I will show you that I am not lying” and showed her 50 hats all different in a large cupboard. Then Joe said, “I have a pair of shoes made of gold” and showed Jane the gold boots. Jane stood mouth open in surprise. Then she saw a chocolate bun on the shelf. She was so hungry that without asking, she ate the whole bun. Pip and Joe screamed. Pip said, “You ate the stop-boasting bun!” Jane got very angry and went home. The next day in school, she boasted, “I have been to a mountain that nobody has ever gone to before”. Her nose started getting really long. She at once stopped boasting. When she stopped boasting, her nose got to the same size again. From that day forward, she stopped boasting.
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Sarah Guys this was years ago so don't judge me by it. Also, I know people may not like it when someone else cheats and takes credit for a story they have not written but before commenting you should keep in mind that because of you some poor kid could easily get discouraged and stop trying to write. It's easy to blame and hate on someone but if it happens to you especially at such a tender age you might not like it as much as you like framing someone for cheating a story. Sarah
Jun 16th 2017
 
 
Berha Now ppl who r saing her cheater boastful, especially Ajwa. And I quote (These are the exact words of Ajwa) "i know cuzz ive read almost 32 ov them sooo" Quote end. As you can see so much boasting oh and I'm not taking sides as I quote (This is Sarah's) "You have no right to comment so rudely on a third grader's innocent attempt to write." Quote end. I dont think this was innocence... I am taking nobody's side. But really! Cant a person share a good moral story!!!??? Y r u even fighting she even said that she took ideas!!!! Okay enough of that, I will copy/paste another comment written by Aleeza Zafar to Aisha on Feb 27th 2011 on the story Mother & son. "Dear Aisha.. JazakAllah for your comment...But let me tell you something too..First of all..There are some moral stories from which each of us can get a Real Lesson.SO why not share them instead of keeping them inside of us..why not let other people to learn something too...so in my point of view..i dont call it copying i call it sharing..In Vshine you can share your thoghts,stories and many more.. Okay!! u have heard this many times but maybe for some of us it is new.So..and maybe it can taught someone a good lesson. Dear Aisha i know i may be wrong too..but i want to clear that i do not want people to appreciate me or im show-offing.InshAllah next time for such type of stories i will write the name of Author too. I hope i have cleared my self.But if still there is some confusion you are most welcome:) And for your advise,i really like and i want to tell you that i am a permanent writer for children magazines..and i have wrote dozens of stories by myself,but the there level is kind of high for below 10 years children so i dont share them Well thanks" Hope this will help anything else I have lots evidence in fact dont believe me??? Here's the link http://www.vshineworld.com/mypage/content/1089/mother--son Hope this helped. It is very long but it's useful read it understand it then follow it Berha
Jun 6th 2017
 
 
sajahir Great story and guys who say her cheater they should be ashamed of their selves. Sajahir
Feb 8th 2017
 
 
Afrah Nice story sarah Afrah
Oct 16th 2016
 
 
Irza V.nyc story and guys plsssssss CUT IT OUT OR ELSE! Irza
Dec 15th 2015
 
 
Rida Guys I know that this story is cheated but i guess that u guys should not say rude things to any person's attempt in writing.I guess u should just stop fighting whenever this kind of situation occurs Rida
Nov 3rd 2014
 
 
Tooba Nice Tooba
Apr 22nd 2014
 
 
Tooba Nice Tooba
Apr 15th 2014
 
 
Gul Noor And BTW i expect more from an 8 year old.Duh...your"innocent" so-called attempt is plain CHEATING!! i think you are DUMB to try to fight against something that 3 people are saying is a lie!!! Gul Noor
Apr 6th 2014
 
 
Gul Noor U havnt taken ideas u just skipped some! author:enid blyton book:peter and the magic shadow and other stories story:boastful brenda and the brownies Gul Noor
Oct 19th 2013
 
 
ajwa Dont be over smart sarah...youve copied from one of enid blyton's stories !!!!!! i know cuzz ive read almost 32 ov them sooo.... no need ov telling us that u havent !!!!! Ajwa
Oct 17th 2013
 
 
Sarah And thank you Anam n Rafia Sarah
Oct 12th 2013
 
 
Sarah Reply to Wajeeha and Ajwa: I did not copy it and I did not cheat. I took ideas from here and there and also added things on my own. What else do you expect from an 8 year old??? Give complete reference of the story that you think I have cheated from including book name, writer name and story name. You have no right to comment so rudely on a third grader's innocent attempt to write. Sarah
Sep 28th 2013
 
 
Ajwa Copiiiiiiiiiiiied!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Ajwa
Sep 27th 2013
 
 
wajeeha It is in my story book ,so cheater! Wajeeha
Sep 27th 2013
 
 
Anam Wow imagination is this Anam
Sep 26th 2013
 
 
Rafia Great story nd awesome moral :) Rafia
Sep 25th 2013
 
 

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