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Sarah Khawaja
Sarah Khawaja
Rosan's Islamic School
Boastful Jane
Published On Sep 24th 2013
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There was once a girl. Her name was Jane. She was very boastful. Her friends got tired of her always saying something or other. She boasted about her frocks, “You know my aunty gave me two new frocks. You should see them. They are wonderful…” And went on and on. One day, as she was going home from school, she saw a small man coming towards her. He said, “Hello, I am Sparky and I am a gnome. I have heard of you. Aren’t you boastful Jane? I have two brothers. They are the best boasters in fairy land. Their names are Pip and Joe. I bet even you couldn’t beat them in boasting”. He took Jane to his home. She was amazed by his two boasting brothers. She boasted to them about her clothes. Pip said, “I have 50 hats all different”. Jane said, “You are lying”. “Come here”, said Pip, “I will show you that I am not lying” and showed her 50 hats all different in a large cupboard. Then Joe said, “I have a pair of shoes made of gold” and showed Jane the gold boots. Jane stood mouth open in surprise. Then she saw a chocolate bun on the shelf. She was so hungry that without asking, she ate the whole bun. Pip and Joe screamed. Pip said, “You ate the stop-boasting bun!” Jane got very angry and went home. The next day in school, she boasted, “I have been to a mountain that nobody has ever gone to before”. Her nose started getting really long. She at once stopped boasting. When she stopped boasting, her nose got to the same size again. From that day forward, she stopped boasting.
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Comments 15
sajahir Great story and guys who say her cheater they should be ashamed of their selves. Sajahir
Feb 8th 2017
Afrah Nice story sarah Afrah
Oct 16th 2016
Irza story and guys plsssssss CUT IT OUT OR ELSE! Irza
Dec 15th 2015
Rida Guys I know that this story is cheated but i guess that u guys should not say rude things to any person's attempt in writing.I guess u should just stop fighting whenever this kind of situation occurs Rida
Nov 3rd 2014
Tooba Nice Tooba
Apr 22nd 2014
Tooba Nice Tooba
Apr 15th 2014
Gul Noor And BTW i expect more from an 8 year old.Duh...your"innocent" so-called attempt is plain CHEATING!! i think you are DUMB to try to fight against something that 3 people are saying is a lie!!! Gul Noor
Apr 6th 2014
Gul Noor U havnt taken ideas u just skipped some! author:enid blyton book:peter and the magic shadow and other stories story:boastful brenda and the brownies Gul Noor
Oct 19th 2013
ajwa Dont be over smart sarah...youve copied from one of enid blyton's stories !!!!!! i know cuzz ive read almost 32 ov them sooo.... no need ov telling us that u havent !!!!! Ajwa
Oct 17th 2013
Sarah And thank you Anam n Rafia Sarah
Oct 12th 2013
Sarah Reply to Wajeeha and Ajwa: I did not copy it and I did not cheat. I took ideas from here and there and also added things on my own. What else do you expect from an 8 year old??? Give complete reference of the story that you think I have cheated from including book name, writer name and story name. You have no right to comment so rudely on a third grader's innocent attempt to write. Sarah
Sep 28th 2013
Ajwa Copiiiiiiiiiiiied!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Ajwa
Sep 27th 2013
wajeeha It is in my story book ,so cheater! Wajeeha
Sep 27th 2013
Anam Wow imagination is this Anam
Sep 26th 2013
Rafia Great story nd awesome moral :) Rafia
Sep 25th 2013

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