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Yamna Izhar Ahmed
Yamna Izhar Ahmed
Al-majd Inter National School
It Is Melting
Published On Sep 24th 2013
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(Here in Saudi Arabia it is the culture that people usually stay up all night and sleeps in the morning including me, some of my friends even wake up 7pm)
Sidra usually wakes up at 1:30Pm or 2’oclock in summer but today she crossed all her limits, she woke up at ‘5Pm’! And her mom was ‘Super angry’. ‘SIDRA’, she screamed. Is it the time to wake up??You missed two of your prayers and my God when will you understand that Allah made night for sleeping and resting and day for working, and you don’t even do anything at night just waste your time, I can’t understand this generation, they must do something “unique”, you are young you have energy you should do something productive...... her mom wanted to say more but ‘sidra’ got annoyed and said :Mom can’t you see I just woke up, I am so hungry can  have something to eat??And then she left, n when she returned to the dining room her favourite pasta was awaiting her on the dining table. ‘YUM ’pasta she said, so you finally woke up ‘madam’, her elder brother Zayan said entering the dining room. That’s none of your business that what time I wake up, so just shut up, she replied rudely. ‘Whatever’ her brother replied and left the room. Now her mom came and sat next to her, still very enraged, so Sidra what time did you sleep last night; her mom enquired. Mom can i just eat in peace and the answer your questions? Sidra replied in a truly annoyed tone. “NO” you have to answer me right now!!Her mom said angrily. “Ok here you go, yesterday  i borrowed a book from Ayesha and had to read it, so i read it till like about 2:30 when Ayesha texted me to come online so went and ‘remember’ the sleep over we has at kiran’s house she a last posted those pictures on facebook, and the we were just commenting on those, they were like about 1000 pictures and then kiran came online and was telling us about the cat she bought, ‘OH’ mom even i want to have a cat, then it was like about “7am” when i went to sleep so now can you tell me how am I supposed to wake up at 9 in the morning”. Sidra replied. Her mom had no reply for this so she just sighed and said: “Ya Allah just show her the right path, and before she could say anything else, the phone rang, and sidra was relieved to hear that the phone was for her mom. “THANKS GOD” she said and began eating the delicious pasta. After 5min. her mom returned with a smiling face. Ali, sidra’s younger brother just entered the room, saw his mom smiling and asked. ‘Mom why are you so happy’? Mom replied,  ‘guess what? Aunty Jameela is coming’.            ‘Yeah’.Ali celebrated, But when mom? He asked again.  “TODAY”. Mom replied. ‘Awesome’,Ali said         . OH,NO, not Jameela!!!Sidra got depressed she was the last person sidra ever wanted to see .Jameela was a beautiful lady, in her late thirties, she was her moms friend since middle school, but according to sidra she talked like “grandmaas’”, and hated her company, but as for her younger brother the situation was completely different, he love Jameela aunty and waited eagerly for her visit. “I don’t understand why that stupid Ali likes that annoying Jameela? sidra once said that to her best friend Ayesha. Now sidra ran to her room to call her friends and see i she could go to their house to escape “AUNTY JAMEELA”. She called all her friends, but to her bad luck some  of them were sleeping ,some were busy and others were not attending the phone. “All are traitors”, she thought angrily. The bell, now sidra could never escape Jameela aunty, so after a few minutes she went down. When Jameela Aunty saw her coming she stood up and said “Asallamualekum”, sidra sat on the couch without shaking hands with her and said ‘Walekumassalam’                           unenthusiastically. “How are you my dear”? Jameela aunty asked with great love. “I was totally fine before you came”, was what she wanted to say, but rather said ‘fine’, very dryly. Now Ali interrupted, and said very eagerly, ‘ aunty you were about to tell me something’ ‘YES’, i was she replied and began. “ It was a hot summer day, and the man who sold ice, was standing on the edge of the road and screaming “please people help me,please my means of profit and investment is melting,please buy the ice. In the mean time a man was passing by the same street and when heard the ice man fainted, soon people gathered around him and took him to one of the shopkeepers house.When he regained his consciousness people asked him “Sir why did you faint?”. ‘He replied ‘My profit and my investment is melting and i didn’t even noticed that. “How sir?”some body asked.See my life is melting and i didn’t even notice it ,every moment passes by reduces my life, the ice man made me realise it!. He replied. “so we should use our time productively and not waste it,as it is shrinking every moment!.Jameela aunty said. Sidra was startled,my life is melting. And from that day onwards she tried her best to use her time productively.
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Comments 31
Aliza  Gr8 Aliza
Jun 17th 2016
Ghashia Whoa :) Ghashia
Apr 24th 2015
Laibah Very nice Laibah
Jan 23rd 2014
yamna Yes we do, so how does ur days goes, tell me sm thin about ur self!!!!!! Yamna
Nov 19th 2013
eesha Then v have a similarity Yamna :) Eesha
Nov 14th 2013
yamna No problem dear khadijah!!!!!! Yamna
Oct 28th 2013
Khadija Thanks for being my friend!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Khadija
Oct 27th 2013
yamna Girl, m crazy about reading books!!!!!! Yamna
Oct 26th 2013
eesha Yeah...well do u lyk reading books? Eesha
Oct 26th 2013
yamna Twilight saga, thats wat we're talking about right? Yamna
Oct 25th 2013
eesha Which book yamna? Eesha
Oct 25th 2013
yamna Yup, let me tell u that i read 1 book a lot of times so i have read it over and over again but trust me its just a waste of time!!!! Yamna
Oct 20th 2013
eesha I dont knw of sum pple told me that it was not gud.....have u read them? Eesha
Oct 20th 2013
yamna So true, they r not even for adults,even the book is so embarrassing!!!! Yamna
Oct 19th 2013
eesha Hahaha me 2...i didn't watch any of twilight sagas......they r not for childrens u know... Eesha
Oct 18th 2013
yamna I lyk him too, but just as cedric, not as edward!!!!!!! Yamna
Oct 18th 2013
eesha Ohhh i lyk him Yamna :)))) Eesha
Oct 17th 2013
yamna Thnks!!!!!! do u like robert pattinson??? Yamna
Oct 13th 2013
afifah Like your picture very much.. Afifah
Oct 12th 2013
yamna Thanks guys!!!!!!, thnks for the love!!!! Yamna
Oct 12th 2013
eesha I LUVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVV IT <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 Eesha
Oct 12th 2013
Anam Great story so nyc so nyc Anam
Oct 6th 2013
 яυмαιsα AWSSUM STORY DUDE..............!!!! яυмαιsα
Oct 5th 2013
Manahil Loved it!! Manahil
Oct 2nd 2013
 hurria I love it,great job :) Hurria
Sep 29th 2013
Ajwa Amen... Ajwa
Sep 27th 2013
yamna Thank u guys!!!!!!!!! Yamna
Sep 27th 2013
Aisha Great story loved.....And the topic you addressed is really nice and an important one..... Aisha
Sep 27th 2013
Anam Ameen sooooooo nyc Anam
Sep 26th 2013
Irum AMEEN Irum
Sep 25th 2013
Rafia Sooooooooooooo nyc :) Rafia
Sep 25th 2013

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