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Fahad  Farooqi
Fahad Farooqi
Beacon Light Academy
The Lonely Girl
Published On Sep 24th 2013
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Once upon a time, there was a hostel was a in there their girl who was always in her room and nobody came to his room because she never wanted any to come in. Her friends smell outside her room and they got a smell of smoke the friends were just shocked to smell that and then when she come outside her  friends tease her that she smoke in the room and she is a smoker but the girl never replied them.                                              
She always just keeps quiet but the friends never realized that how she felt. At least for four years she was in the hostel and in these four years the whole hostel tease her. But when she was gone the students of the hostel who tease her went in her room and then they got to know that every day the sweeper came to the window of her room and burn the rubbish and then the students realize the feeling of that girl.  
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Comments 17
Anmol WOW!!!!!! But some grammatical mistakes. Keep it up!! Anmol
Apr 29th 2016
 
 
Ayesha UH! BORING!!!!!!!!!!! Ayesha
Jan 24th 2015
 
 
Ayesha UH! BORING!!!!!!!!!!! Ayesha
Jan 24th 2015
 
 
 Shiza Nyc but really who's GUYZ here????????????????? Shiza
Feb 18th 2014
 
 
taha Nice yar...............achi hai Taha
Feb 15th 2014
 
 
zerwah Achi story thi mistakes bhi thein lekin ........... good work Zerwah
Feb 11th 2014
 
 
zerwah Achi story thi mistakes bhi thein lekin ........... good work Zerwah
Feb 11th 2014
 
 
zerwah Ooohhooo mister uper ki line mein kitne mistakes hein Zerwah
Feb 11th 2014
 
 
Rafia Who's "GUYZ" over here???? well, ur welcome :) Rafia
Oct 24th 2013
 
 
Fahad Thank you guyz...!!!For your comments and views.... Fahad
Oct 21st 2013
 
 
eesha WoooowwwwwwwWWWww....... Eesha
Oct 5th 2013
 
 
HAFSA Good Hafsa
Oct 2nd 2013
 
 
Ajwa ..... Ajwa
Sep 27th 2013
 
 
Anam Woww i just love !i Anam
Sep 26th 2013
 
 
Irum Good Irum
Sep 25th 2013
 
 
Laibah Nyc story :''('``'`' Laibah
Sep 25th 2013
 
 
Rafia Thatz true!!! whenever someone's not near us .... at that time we realizes his/her importance....... some gramitical mistakes (just some) otherwise a gr8 imagination :) Rafia
Sep 25th 2013
 
 

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