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Abdur Rafay Khan
Abdur Rafay Khan
Beaconhouse School System Pechs Campus,karachi
The Diamond Robbery (part 3)
Published On Aug 18th 2013
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The diamonds were then given for DNA tests. When the results came Dr. Alan McPhill said, "the two fingerprints...well, the first one is of a Siamese Cat, a young kitten..."There was laughter from some policemen but Colonel Jeff told them to be serious.
Dr. Alan said, "the second print is of a person named Alex Maxwell."
"Alex Maxwell is a criminal but isn't he behind the bars? But how could he be in the shop? He is in jail right now!" said Morris.
"You're right Morris. Alex is in jail and I know that someone is trying to fool us into making wrong assumptions. This is not enough; we need more evidence to catch the criminal!" said Stephen. After this, Stephen went back to the shop to investigate. He searched more carefully this time and found shoe prints on the floor. They were in the direction where the missing Sky Diamond was placed. Stephen carefully looked at the pattern of the shoe and deduced that it was an army boot. Stephen went back to the station and gave his conclusion, "The culprit we are looking for wears army boots, has a Knight Hawk pistol and has some connection with the guard dog and Alex Maxwell and the Siamese kitten."
"But don't robbers wear design-less shoes?" asked Holmes.
"Exactly, so I deduce that the robber is someone from our premises, I mean he is one of some police officers," said Stephen.
TO BE CONTINUED.....

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Comments 40
eesha Yep i agree w8 u Aisha n i dont have a problem w8 it.......its Ibrahim that has a problem w8 v shine Eesha
Sep 5th 2013
 
 
Aisha You are welcome Rafia....Also Esha dear vshine may not be a slow site but you see many children send their stuff and vshine has lots of other technical and other work to do, due to which approval of things is delayed... Aisha
Sep 5th 2013
 
 
Rafia Ooo0000!!!!!! right .... thnx for replying Ayesha dear :):):) Rafia
Sep 5th 2013
 
 
Aisha Ibrahim bro vshine is a really trusted institution and i am sure does not accepts stuff with discrimination...Don't lose heart....If you go through the FAQ's of vshine you can see that there are many reasons as to why your stuff is not being published....but still if you thing that your work is without fault and worthy of publish than why don't you contact vshine yourself....but please remove such uneducated, racial feeling from your heart....Hope you understand Aisha
Sep 4th 2013
 
 
Rafia Don't worry frnds :) they will get published INSHALLAH :):) Rafia
Sep 4th 2013
 
 
Irum Aweeeeeeesome, So many awesome stories By Abdur Rafay, I have to go to each and every one to say its awesome. Its almost annoying!! (just kidding):) Irum
Sep 4th 2013
 
 
Irum I said that was my little brother , Rafia. Irum
Sep 4th 2013
 
 
eesha They will..vshine is slow at getting stuff approved :( Eesha
Sep 3rd 2013
 
 
Ibrahim Esha ur one story didnt get published my 9 story i have send they have not gotten published. Ibrahim
Sep 3rd 2013
 
 
eesha @Ibrahim........ Hey??????Where did that thought occur to u??????no ones stuff is getting approved......don't be soooo emotional....there r also other pple whose stuff is not getting approved.....my story hasn't got approved for 4 months bt i don't say anything lyk that.............. Eesha
Sep 3rd 2013
 
 
Ibrahim To write and they don't get published what's wrong.A lot of time before i am writing to vshine my page.but till today my one letter is not get published.at least i have wrote more then 40 letters an shape of poem article story drawing.i grante that my letter were nice letters.if u thank there were any grammar mistake.i thank no there were no grammar mistake because i show them to my english grammar teacher in language center.what's wrong because i am a baloch that's why my letter dont get published.♥♥I am now fed up to write story,article,drawings poems and sent them to my page .after today i will not write any poems article or story for my page.it is better for me to write letters and articles to send them to dawn newspaper dily time and there are many english magazines.♥♥♥♥My sin is that I am a Baloch♥♥♥♥ Ibrahim
Sep 2nd 2013
 
 
Khadijah It's been like a month since you wrote this this part. Khadijah
Sep 1st 2013
 
 
Rafia I agree ........ we should standup for Rabia ....... united Muslims can bring a gr8 change :) we should b united :):):) Rafia
Sep 1st 2013
 
 
Khadijah Oh, Ok AjWa Khadijah
Sep 1st 2013
 
 
Ibrahim ☻☻☻Nice dear keep writing☻♥♠○◘•♦ Ibrahim
Sep 1st 2013
 
 
Hiba Gr8 Hiba
Aug 31st 2013
 
 
talha Waiting for next part.......... Talha
Aug 31st 2013
 
 
rizwan INSHA'ALLAH............!!!!!!!!! Rizwan
Aug 30th 2013
 
 
Ajwa I was just being 'ironic' .....Khadija...!!!! Ajwa
Aug 30th 2013
 
 
Syeda Maryam Yes very true Hamza!! Syeda Maryam
Aug 29th 2013
 
 
Fatima Agreed with every positive comment..... waiting for the next part...... :) Fatima
Aug 29th 2013
 
 
Hamza Waqas WE ARE WITH RABIA AND WILL BE WITH RABIA UNTILL DR.MUHAMMAD.MURSI WILL BE THE PRESIDENT OF EGYPT!!! Hamza Waqas
Aug 26th 2013
 
 
Rafia Who ayesha?????????? Rafia
Aug 25th 2013
 
 
raveeha U r an amazing writer!!!!!!!!! Raveeha
Aug 25th 2013
 
 
Irum AAAAAAAAAAA.. Ooops.DAt ws ma lil bro Irum
Aug 24th 2013
 
 
nazish M waiting impatiently 4 da nxt part. Nazish
Aug 23rd 2013
 
 
nazish I don't have words to admire your story.i was so involved in your story that my mom called me 3 times but i didn't hear.what a lovely story rafay. Nazish
Aug 23rd 2013
 
 
Sidra Can't wait for the next part! Sidra
Aug 23rd 2013
 
 
eesha N i agree w8 Minahil...cudn't stir while reading :-) Eesha
Aug 22nd 2013
 
 
Soha Cool! Soha
Aug 22nd 2013
 
 
Rafia Thnx dear Maryam ........... :):):):) well how r u???? Rafia
Aug 22nd 2013
 
 
Minahil I couldn't make a move while reading it I totally agree with eesha:-} Minahil
Aug 21st 2013
 
 
Usman Awesome!!! Whens the next part coming??? Usman
Aug 21st 2013
 
 
Syeda Maryam Yes Rafia ur really true!!! Syeda Maryam
Aug 21st 2013
 
 
Sana Gr8!! Eating my nails for the next part! Sana
Aug 20th 2013
 
 
Rafia Abdur Rafay ........ we r again having those fab stories on vshine by u after along time!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :) IT'S MINDBLOWING...... Rafia
Aug 19th 2013
 
 
Aisha Uptil now it fantabulous.....How awesome will the later parts be???? Aisha
Aug 19th 2013
 
 
Khadijah That's what the story is about...AjWa Khadijah
Aug 19th 2013
 
 
eesha MiNd BlOwInG.... Eesha
Aug 19th 2013
 
 
Ajwa Omg....why do u guyz stop at d suspencious part....!!!!???? Ajwa
Aug 18th 2013
 
 

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