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Anam Abbasi
Anam Abbasi
Roots International School
The Mystery Vacation
Published On Sep 13th 2013
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September 2013
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Sara, Farah, Maryam and Sana were four friends. They went to school together, worked together and played together. Whenever it was Summer Vacations, they went to the clubhouse of Farah's father. But they were shocked when they found out they couldn't stay there this year. "Oh why"! Sana said. "Its because Dad said he has invited some friends over in the clubhouse. I can't do anything." said Farah. And the four of them walked home sadly. Suddenly, a house, with an overgrown garden caught sight of Sara's eyes. She thought that it was a great place to spend there vacations. She told the others and they agreed. And soon the packing started. They took a few clothes and food and water. Then they set off to find the house together. They moved the plants out of their way and then washed their hands from the tap in the garden. When Maryam, the youngest washed hers, she immediately cried out "Blood! Blood!" and the others came to look where they found nothing but water. They were surprised. Then they went inside the house. It was full of dust and webs, but they soon cleared it and went into a room to pray. After that, they ate some food they had brought.
After that, they slept. Suddenly, Maryam woke up. She had heard some noise. She opened the door and saw a shadowy figure coming towards their room. She woke the others and told them to pray, as it was the time of Fajr. After that they searched for that figure but couldn't find it. "We will look for it tomorrow morning. It's quite dark right now." said Sara. So all of them went to sleep. The next morning, after having their breakfeast they decided to search again. At last they were tired, and leaned against a wall with a big picture. Suddenly, the picture went inside and they saw a big tunnel. They went inside and found themselves in a big room, filled with golden chests. They opened some and found money, gold and books inside. Maryam phoned her father and he brought the police with him to that house. The police took the books to the library  and gave the away the gold and money to the poor. Maryam's father told them about the house. It was the house of the richest man in the city, and how his brother had killed him and took over the house and the money and books. The figure Maryam had seen was his brother's ghost who would capture and kill anyone coming into the house.The ghost hadn't killed them because they had prayed. After that they never went into that house and soon it was demolished too.
Sara, Farah, Maryam and Sana were four friends. They went to school together, worked together and played together. Whenever it was Summer Vacations, they went to the clubhouse of Farah's father. But they were shocked when they found out they couldn't stay there this year. "Oh why"! Sana said. "Its because Dad said he has invited some friends over in the clubhouse. I can't do anything." said Farah. And the four of them walked home sadly. Suddenly, a house, with an overgrown garden caught sight of Sara's eyes. She thought that it was a great place to spend there vacations. She told the others and they agreed. And soon the packing started. They took a few clothes and food and water. Then they set off to find the house together. They moved the plants out of their way and then washed their hands from the tap in the garden. When Maryam, the youngest washed hers, she immediately cried out "Blood! Blood!" and the others came to look where they found nothing but water. They were surprised. Then they went inside the house. It was full of dust and webs, but they soon cleared it and went into a room to pray. After that, they ate some food they had brought.After that, they slept. Suddenly, Maryam woke up. She had heard some noise. She opened the door and saw a shadowy figure coming towards their room. She woke the others and told them to pray, as it was the time of Fajr. After that they searched for that figure but couldn't find it. "We will look for it tomorrow morning. It's quite dark right now." said Sara. So all of them went to sleep. The next morning, after having their breakfeast they decided to search again. At last they were tired, and leaned against a wall with a big picture. Suddenly, the picture went inside and they saw a big tunnel. They went inside and found themselves in a big room, filled with golden chests. They opened some and found money, gold and books inside. Maryam phoned her father and he brought the police with him to that house. The police took the books to the library  and gave the away the gold and money to the poor. Maryam's father told them about the house. It was the house of the richest man in the city, and how his brother had killed him and took over the house and the money and books. The figure Maryam had seen was his brother's ghost who would capture and kill anyone coming into the house.The ghost hadn't killed them because they had prayed. After that they never went into that house and soon it was demolished too.
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Comments 34
Anam AOA...sense of humour Amna? Haha! thanks,and btw anyone can write stories. just keep trying! Anam
Apr 14th 2015
 
 
ayesha Wonderful job anam you have a good sense of humour and congratulation dear good luck!!!!!! i wish i can also write stories...!! Ayesha
Apr 11th 2015
 
 
Tooba Awesome Tooba
May 11th 2014
 
 
hibba Sarah i also live in wah cantt in lala rukh on the mall... which school r u in??? Hibba
Jan 13th 2014
 
 
Anam Sarah i got the gift hamper a week ago............it was stationary Anam
Dec 19th 2013
 
 
Anam Sarah i live in shahwali colony h.b146 st.9 Anam
Nov 6th 2013
 
 
sarah So where do u live ? in officer's colony or in basti ? hey i want to come to taxila after my this class in 10 th so plz can u tell me that how many classes are there ? if i come i can see u then we will be friends ;) Sarah
Nov 5th 2013
 
 
sarah What????? how what happened? dont they give gift hampers really , did u told then that u r not recieving any gift hamp? Sarah
Nov 5th 2013
 
 
Anam Sarah actually i haven't got the gift hamper!!!!!!!!!! Anam
Nov 2nd 2013
 
 
Khadija Its Cooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooool!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Khadija
Nov 1st 2013
 
 
sarah So what did u recieve in ur gift hamper when u won? and when will the oct winners will be announced? Sarah
Nov 1st 2013
 
 
Anam Yes sarah i often thought that i might find someone living in taxila or wahcantt and now i have Anam
Oct 30th 2013
 
 
sarah Nice well i live near wahh cantt in taxila cantt and i visit aslam market alot so its nice knowing someone near. Sarah
Oct 30th 2013
 
 
Anam Which poem hamzah thi s is story Anam
Oct 28th 2013
 
 
Hamzah I loveed ur poem its cooooll:D Hamzah
Oct 26th 2013
 
 
taskeen I like ur story very much thats gr88888888888888 Taskeen
Oct 22nd 2013
 
 
Saamiya Wow i love your story and it is so scary it gave me shivers when i read this so scary read my story of ella and her magic day love your stories keep playing and commenting on V SHINE Saamiya
Oct 15th 2013
 
 
mahnoor I love this story Mahnoor
Oct 13th 2013
 
 
Usman Very Nice.Congrats!!!! Usman
Oct 12th 2013
 
 
afifah Congrats:) Afifah
Oct 12th 2013
 
 
Anam Ajwa i have brought vshine of oct and there wasnt my story in it....but i will get the gift,wont i???? Anam
Oct 12th 2013
 
 
Arwa Aoa, friends plz visit my website syedafatima2012.wix.com/about-pakistan Arwa
Oct 8th 2013
 
 
ajwa Anam..actually..the winner's story doesnt get published(mostly)...and ..no..urz isnt.............if the magazine is not available in market ...u can just read it on the website!!! :D Ajwa
Oct 8th 2013
 
 
Anam Guys if u have bought oct magazine of vshine,did u find my story? i cant buy it because it isnt available in market now Anam
Oct 4th 2013
 
 
Areeba Congratz honey! I enjoyed thoroughly reading this story! Good Job dear :) Areeba
Oct 3rd 2013
 
 
Arwa Congratzzzz :) :) :) Arwa
Oct 2nd 2013
 
 
Anam I don't understand how i am the winner,coz it's october and in the september edition i didn't find my story Anam
Oct 2nd 2013
 
 
Ajwa Well done!!!!!!!!!!!!..........you shud be really happy that ur the winner!!!!!!!!! Ajwa
Oct 1st 2013
 
 
hadya Exellent Hadya
Sep 30th 2013
 
 
Maarij Maqsood GOOD Maarij Maqsood
Sep 29th 2013
 
 
Anam Laibah i don't know to bcoz when i checked it it was like this Anam
Sep 29th 2013
 
 
Laibah I do but u rote it 2wice Laibah
Sep 28th 2013
 
 
Ajwa Yeah,,i like it Ajwa
Sep 27th 2013
 
 
Anam Hope you like my story! Anam
Sep 26th 2013
 
 

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