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Bassam Khan
Bassam Khan
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The Watch Dog
Published On Aug 4th 2013
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Frownone day Anas parents wanted to go shopping. Although Anas wanted to go with them they didn’t allow him. They told Anas he had to stay at home and complete his homework. Anas said that he already done his homework so his parents felt sorry about him and decided to take him along. Their family dog brownie wanted to go too. He started wagging his tail and followed them to the door. Anas parents were firm and shook their heads. Brownie was upset to be left at home. Brownie went to his mat. He was sad and hungry. Poor brownie he felt like chewing juicy bone but there was no bone to be found. He fell asleep on his mat. Suddenly brownies ears pricked. He could hear some noises coming from upstairs. He crept up the steps quietly. Brownie noticed two men climbing up the window of his master’s room. The two men ran away quickly. At the moment Anas parents arrived. Anas’s father chased the man and Anas mother called the police. The police arrived immediately and they managed to catch the two thieves. They were taken to the police station. ANAS and his parents were proud of brownie. They were glad that they had left brownie to guard the house. Otherwise the two mans would have stolen the money and jewellery. Brownie was awarded a big juicy bone. Brownie was very pleased with himself.Smile
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Comments 15
Hiba Gr8 u r talented Hiba
Aug 31st 2013
 
 
Hamza Waqas WE ARE WITH RABIA AND WILL BE WITH RABIA UNTILL DR.MUHAMMAD.MURSI WILL BE THE PRESIDENT OF EGYPT!!! Hamza Waqas
Aug 26th 2013
 
 
Hamza Waqas WE ARE WITH RABIA AND WILL BE WITH RABIA UNTILL DR.MUHAMMAD.MURSI WILL BE THE PRESIDENT OF EGYPT!!! Hamza Waqas
Aug 26th 2013
 
 
safdar Nyc Safdar
Aug 14th 2013
 
 
Mahnum Good Effort Mahnum
Aug 14th 2013
 
 
Soha Nice! Soha
Aug 12th 2013
 
 
Laibah Very good Laibah
Aug 11th 2013
 
 
unaiza A little mistake is there. Man is singular and its plural is men Not mans. I think the people reading this story should not only appreciate but also point out the mistakes and help the writer to overcome his/her mistakes. Unaiza
Aug 10th 2013
 
 
Usman Nyce Usman
Aug 7th 2013
 
 
eesha Gud :) Eesha
Aug 6th 2013
 
 
Ajwa Woooowww Ajwa
Aug 5th 2013
 
 
rabia Tooo good Rabia
Aug 5th 2013
 
 
Rafia Goooooooood:) Rafia
Aug 4th 2013
 
 
Bassam Awesome story Bassam
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Bassam Awesome story Bassam
Aug 4th 2013
 
 

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