Always obey your mother Once upon a time there was a boy lived near a forest. His name was Egeus. As he was not so like in the study so his mother always use to say him to study but he used to ignore his mother. Whenever he obeyed her he used to get full marks in test and exams. But when he didn’t obey her mother he failed or get bad marks from which he used to be ashamed in his class and because of this no one wants to be his friend and he always use to be alone his class and in his free time. From this we can say that always obey your mothers. One day Egeus was playing his favourite game and was on the last level of that game and is mother called him to eat the dinner but he refused to eat and his mother said that she is not going to give him dinner to eat afterwards and he agreed and replied that he is also not going to eat the dinner afterwards. He didn’t use to obey his mother so he loosed his level. So he decided to eat the dinner first because now he has to start the game from the first level. When he came outside and sat for the dinner his mother said, “Why are you here now? You’re not going to eat the dinner.” He replied that “I loosed the level because I didn’t obeyed you I’m really sorry” From this we can say that always obey your mothers. After a week in the evening Egeus said to his mom that he is going to the forest with his friends. His mom said that don’t go you might be lost but he ignored and went. When they reached the forest they enjoyed very much but as the night arrived they forget their way. So they decided to stay that night over there and they found a place and slept. Next morning when they woke up they still didn’t know their way back to home. During that situation they saw a bird singing a beautiful song and it also looks pretty. They decided to follow it and they did that. By following that bird they reached a house made up of cupcakes, sweets and chocolates. At that time they were very hungry so they started to eat that things from which the house was made. When 6they were eating suddenly a lady came from the window she cannot see so she used to see with her glass which she uses to hang around her neck. She welcomed Egeus and his friends and they went inside. She gave them good food to eat and a place to sleep and they slept. When Egeus slept the lady came in the room and watched the children and went in her room. The friends of Egeus were following that lady and by following her they reached a room in which they saw that the lady was a witch. They were very surprised to see that. When they were looking the witch suddenly looked at them and they were nervous that what to say. The witch made them her servants and kidnapped Egeus. She decided to eat him when he will be fat. But he was not becoming fat so she said that she is going to eat him right now. After that when she was going to put Egeus in the oven luckily her magic stick was in the control of his friends so they operate it and changed the positions of Egeus and that witch and they put that witch into oven and it ruined. So they ran and outside their parents were standing and they ran and said sorry to their parents and promised that they are always going to obey their parents. From this we can say that always obey your mothers.
U hav taken it from hansel and gretel but nice.u said he didn had any frends and when u started the scene of the forest u wrote that he said 2 his mother that i am going with my frends 2 the forest but plz do not mind cuz i dont want 2 fight with u but it is very very very very very nice keep it up
Mashallah i thought this story was Hansel and Gretel
Aug 13th 2013
Hey... A bit from Hansel and Gretel... And Bismah, I just want to give you a suggestion... Plz try not to write so many things in just one sentence. You can write as many sentences as you want (but not useless). I hope you'll sort out it in your story but for an example, here is a sentence:
One day Egeus was playing his favourite game and was on the last level of that game and is mother called him to eat the dinner but he refused to eat and his mother said that she is not going to give him dinner to eat afterwards and he agreed and replied that he is also not going to eat the dinner afterwards. And as for moral, it was nice.