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Noor Ahsan
Noor Ahsan
Old Man
Published On Aug 4th 2013
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There was a man
who had a magic can
old man banged
when he needed the can
his face was flat
but he was glad
his nose was long
he lived in Hong Kong.
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Comments 14
yamna !!!!!!!!!!!!!!LOL!!!!!!!!!!!!WHAT?????????? Yamna
Aug 24th 2013
 
 
zona I luuuv it its humurous and cool Zona
Aug 24th 2013
 
 
nazish So sweet moor.and your poem contains rhyming words which you use very nicely. Nazish
Aug 20th 2013
 
 
Allama Inaam Beta aap ka talent mjhe nazar aa raha hai aapki iss kawish sai..aap mazid mehnat karain gay to aap aik shaair bhi ban sakty hain..!! :-) Allama Inaam
Aug 15th 2013
 
 
Ibrahim \\\\/////sooo nice dear\\\\\///// Ibrahim
Aug 15th 2013
 
 
rabia Good.... Rabia
Aug 10th 2013
 
 
Areeba Oh soooooooooooo nyc :) Areeba
Aug 8th 2013
 
 
Ajwa Iz kay... Ajwa
Aug 6th 2013
 
 
Ajwa Iz kay... Ajwa
Aug 6th 2013
 
 
eesha Ur welcum noor :) Eesha
Aug 6th 2013
 
 
Rafia Ur welcome dear.......... :) Rafia
Aug 6th 2013
 
 
noor Ginkiz yhankz for liking it rafia and eesha Noor
Aug 5th 2013
 
 
Rafia OOH!!!!!! really sweet :) Rafia
Aug 5th 2013
 
 
eesha Cute :) Eesha
Aug 4th 2013
 
 

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