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Asrar  Ali
Asrar Ali
F.g Boys Public High School ,multan Cantt
My Father
Published On Aug 2nd 2013
Total Comments : 49
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August 2013
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Oh! My father: Oh! My father
You are very nice
You do hard work for us.
You are the Hero of my heart
Oh! My father: Oh! My father.
You are like a flower
You spread your fragrance in my world
You are like a light bulb
Which help me to see the right way
Oh! My father: Oh! My father.
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Comments 49
M Salman <3 <3 <3 M Salman
Sep 27th 2013
 
 
Rafia AGHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! this is gonna giv me a headache !!! plz be true asrar ...................... plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz Rafia
Sep 24th 2013
 
 
jandad Very nice.... Jandad
Sep 19th 2013
 
 
Irum Ok sure..... *still not sure* Did you jump a class or anything? Double promotion??? Irum
Sep 19th 2013
 
 
mohsin Great Mohsin
Sep 18th 2013
 
 
Rafia YUP!!!!! Asrar how IS it POSSIBLE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Rafia
Sep 17th 2013
 
 
Asrar I am of 10 years and in grade 7th all things are possible :) Asrar
Sep 17th 2013
 
 
Irum You know Asrar, You shud be In Grade 5 now....... But Its not possible that in 7th and 10 years old Irum
Sep 16th 2013
 
 
Salwa Congrats and great work...should be appreciated..keep going..!! Salwa
Sep 14th 2013
 
 
Anam Great and cngraaaaaaatzzz Anam
Sep 14th 2013
 
 
Soha Nice try and congratzzzzzz! Soha
Sep 14th 2013
 
 
Bismah Great..... Bismah
Sep 14th 2013
 
 
Rafia But.................. how????????????????? Rafia
Sep 13th 2013
 
 
Momina I am also in grade 7th and of 12 age. In 6 it was 10! Momina
Sep 13th 2013
 
 
afifah Good poem and congrats Afifah
Sep 13th 2013
 
 
Usman Very Nice Poem.Congrats Usman
Sep 13th 2013
 
 
Asrar Thanks to all to Cngrt8x me Asrar
Sep 12th 2013
 
 
Asrar Ya.............!!!!! I am of 10 years and in grade 7th Asrar
Sep 12th 2013
 
 
Rafia Em too a bit confused ........ age=10 and GRADE= 7 ??????? REALLY!!!!!!!!!!! :/ Rafia
Sep 12th 2013
 
 
Bushra Hafeez Cngrt8x Bushra Hafeez
Sep 12th 2013
 
 
Asrar Yes......! Asrar
Sep 11th 2013
 
 
talha But asrar....10 years and in grade 7 ???? Talha
Sep 11th 2013
 
 
Abrar Congragulations Asrar Abrar
Sep 11th 2013
 
 
Fakiha Most Congrats to you Asrar Fakiha
Sep 11th 2013
 
 
Asrar You are already my friend hoora Asrar
Sep 11th 2013
 
 
Asrar Hi gys....!! my height isss too increasing then my age my cozns and friends also surprise to see my increasing height even my parents Asrar
Sep 11th 2013
 
 
Hoora Congrats Asrar Hoora
Sep 11th 2013
 
 
Hoora Vry good poem plzz add me as your frnd (Asrar) and snd rqsts Hoora
Sep 11th 2013
 
 
Hoora Nyc Asrar plzz add me as frnds and to all of u plzz send me rqsts Hoora
Sep 11th 2013
 
 
Irum Ew! is that you on ur profile picture? How come youre 10 yrs of age in Grade 7? You should be 12 yrs of age!! Irum
Sep 10th 2013
 
 
fareeha Very good 9yc Fareeha
Sep 2nd 2013
 
 
Rafia Oh right!!!!!!! well then thnx alot Asrar :):):):) Rafia
Sep 2nd 2013
 
 
Asrar Yes I give this comment to you Rafia Asrar
Sep 2nd 2013
 
 
Rafia Ooo000000 right :):):) well thnx :) Rafia
Sep 1st 2013
 
 
Abrar I think asrar give this to you Abrar
Aug 31st 2013
 
 
Rafia ????????? Abrar now to whom was ur's comment ????????? :) Rafia
Aug 15th 2013
 
 
Ibrahim Asrar i like the people who love writting and rerading nice keep writting| have a good luck Ibrahim
Aug 15th 2013
 
 
Abrar Yes Abrar
Aug 14th 2013
 
 
Rafia Is that comment to me???????? :) Rafia
Aug 13th 2013
 
 
Asrar Most welcome Asrar
Aug 13th 2013
 
 
rabia ZABARDAST.................... Rabia
Aug 12th 2013
 
 
Rafia Ur welcome :) Rafia
Aug 12th 2013
 
 
Asrar Thanks to all of you Asrar
Aug 11th 2013
 
 
nazish Great.owsm. Nazish
Aug 9th 2013
 
 
Rafia Nyc:) Rafia
Aug 4th 2013
 
 
Fakiha Bohat nice Fakiha
Aug 3rd 2013
 
 
eesha Wooooooowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!! Eesha
Aug 3rd 2013
 
 
Abrar Very nice Abrar
Aug 3rd 2013
 
 
Bushra Hafeez Goooood p0eM Bushra Hafeez
Aug 3rd 2013
 
 

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