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Zoya Shiraz
Zoya Shiraz
Lahore Grammar School
Divide And Rule (part 1)
Published On Aug 2nd 2013
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I was born to a rich family, but when Pakistan and India were separated my Father left all his wealth and migrated to Pakistan. We lived in a small hut near a dam. My father started business again and we moved from our hut to a house in town. Happy life for me started again but this life ended dreadfully when a high speed van hit my father, his soul reached God before reaching the hospital. My mother had learned from my father to be patient at all times, soon she bought a sewing machine on a loan. She worked at people's houses in the day and sewed clothes at night. My father wanted me to become a doctor, so I started going to the nearest public school. I was studying one night when it started raining hard. The roof of our hut started leaking, so I went to the only corner that was not leaking. My mother went to put a bucket under the leakage when suddenly the roof fell on her, I screamed the whole country screamed because East Pakistan had been separated and was now Bangladesh. Two sorrows together made me helpless after my mother's funeral I had two main problems how to live and second that my uncle was trying to take over my hut. One of my oldest neighbours suggested that I should start a job. The idea of a job seemed the only way out when after 2 days 3 men came to my hut and told me they had a job for me. I was only 7 at that time and did not know what was wrong or right. I agreed to go with the men. They put me in a truck with a few other children. After travelling for 4 days, one night when we were sleeping, we all woke up with a loud bang.......
TO BE CONTINUED......!

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Comments 30
Hiba Superb.......;p Hiba
Aug 31st 2013
 
 
Hamza Waqas WE ARE WITH RABIA AND WILL BE WITH RABIA UNTILL DR.MUHAMMAD.MURSI WILL BE THE PRESIDENT OF EGYPT!!! Hamza Waqas
Aug 26th 2013
 
 
eesha OHhhh it happens Zoya......V shine is slow at approving stuff Eesha
Aug 23rd 2013
 
 
Zoya Thanks guys for your appreciation i have sent the next part more than 18 days ago its still not approved Zoya
Aug 23rd 2013
 
 
Ajwa No no no!!!Ibrahim!ur totally wrong!!!!its the frst story I <3ed!!!and its like an autobiography...haven't u ever read an autobiography???? Ajwa
Aug 21st 2013
 
 
Rafia :) Rafia
Aug 21st 2013
 
 
eesha Thnks Rafia :) Eesha
Aug 21st 2013
 
 
Rafia Yup Eesha ............... u r right my frnd :) Rafia
Aug 20th 2013
 
 
eesha Ibrahim u seriously need to work on ur spellings n vocabulary....sooo many mistakes in last comment... Eesha
Aug 19th 2013
 
 
Ibrahim Thanks Manihal for saying me my mistakes because people learn from there mistakes.i am not expert in spelling but i do say i am expert in english grammar i have also done my Advance in english grammar.i know abt writing and i am also reading defferent kinds of writing books.thanks friends for saying me now i will start pretising my vakablare Ibrahim
Aug 15th 2013
 
 
eesha Minahil is ryt abdullah... Eesha
Aug 15th 2013
 
 
eesha Minahil is ryt abdullah... Eesha
Aug 15th 2013
 
 
Minahil Ibrahim you yourself don't know the spelling of sense and writer and even inshallah and by the way the story is mind blowing and splendid i love it:) Minahil
Aug 14th 2013
 
 
Ibrahim Nice friend but it is not having any sence.there are ways of writing try to read them anshala u will be a great writterkeep it up Ibrahim
Aug 13th 2013
 
 
Anam Veryyyyyyy interesting! Anam
Aug 13th 2013
 
 
tehreem When is da next part cuming Tehreem
Aug 12th 2013
 
 
Soha NICE and full of suspense..! Soha
Aug 12th 2013
 
 
Marwa Oh...... So full with suspense. Just waiting for the next part. I loved it ! :P :D :) Marwa
Aug 11th 2013
 
 
unaiza Nice theme . waiting patiently for the next part Unaiza
Aug 10th 2013
 
 
unaiza Nice theme . waiting patiently for the next part Unaiza
Aug 10th 2013
 
 
abdulmuiz Not real Abdulmuiz
Aug 8th 2013
 
 
Maarij Maqsood It is just Awesom:):)make the next part as soon as possible Maarij Maqsood
Aug 6th 2013
 
 
Ajwa Tick-tock-tick-tock..... Ajwa
Aug 6th 2013
 
 
Khadijah Is it true????????? Plz send the next part soon...... Khadijah
Aug 5th 2013
 
 
Urwa Intriguing... Urwa
Aug 5th 2013
 
 
Ajwa Pllleeeeezzzz write the next part!! Ajwa
Aug 5th 2013
 
 
tehreem Its awsome..keep it up Tehreem
Aug 5th 2013
 
 
eesha Nexttttt part!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! tick tock.......w8ing..tooo gud Eesha
Aug 4th 2013
 
 
Minahil Send the next part fast:)It is tooooooooooo interesting Minahil
Aug 4th 2013
 
 
Rafia Gooood... Rafia
Aug 4th 2013
 
 

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