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Zuha Sohail
Zuha Sohail
Dawood Public School
Mothers Are All Rounders
Published On Sep 25th 2013
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Eve was really excited to go to her first Dylan Wayman concert in New York. Eve really adored Dylan Wayman and he was her idle. In fact, Eve was a garrulous girl and talked about him day in and day out. Often her mother Mrs. James Garwood asked her to have a prudent choice and follow someone who is more chivalrous and robust but Eve never took her advice seriously and insisted on that Dylan Wayman is her favorite personality and she wants to be her spitting image when she grows up!
When they were about halfway to New York, Eve heard an eerie noise from her throbbing brain. "Oh no! how hideous this is. Now we will be late," she exclaimed stolidly, realizing that they have a flat tire.
There wasn't much room on the side of the road, but Mrs. James pulled the car over and climbed out. Sure enough, their right rear tire was completely flat.
Mrs. James opened the trunk to get the jack and the spare tire. Traffic continued to whiz by at seventy miles per hour. Meanwhile Eve complained and complained being vicious about it making her mother angry because of her notorious words.
"Mom, are we going to die or keep on being the target of malign?" Eve asked. She was really scared and the thought of missing the concert made her fidget.
"Don't worry honey! And stop being relent, I'll be quick," Mrs. James said as she started to jack up the car.
Eve was baffled at what her mother was doing."Wow Mom, how do you know to do this?" Eve was shocked momentarily at her mother's secret talent.
Then Mrs. James took off the flat tire.
"Wow Mom, how do you know to do that?" Eve wondered.
Mrs. James just laughed. Then she put the spare tire on. On which Eve said, "Mom, who are you? A wonderful cook, a tenacious lady, a dedicated teacher, the perfect lover and care taker and now a mechanic? I must say that you have loads of secret talents…I am indeed lucky to have you as my mother"
The entire tire change took only 10 minutes. They both climbed back into the car and Mrs. James assured her daughter who was quenched, "I'm so sorry honey, but we can't drive all the way to Albany on this spare tire. We're going to have to stop and buy a new tire. We might be late for your concert."
"That's okay, Mom," Eve said, "I must confess that you're my favorite personality now! I have learnt that singers and actors are just stars on television while my mother is a real life star ,You know how to deal with challenging situation and you are multi talented …YOU HAVE MADE AN IMPRESSION FOR ME AND FROM NOW ONWARDS I'VE REALISED THAT YOU ARE MY INSPIRATION I WANT TO BE YOUR DUPLICATE...!!"
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Comments 31
Tooba Splendid Tooba
May 21st 2014
areeba Nice.. Areeba
Mar 12th 2014
Nimra U always welcum zuha & np.. :) ;) Nimra
Feb 18th 2014
Mahnoor Stop it u guys!it's as lame as could be but i love it!;) Mahnoor
Jan 15th 2014
Hiba :):):) Hiba
Dec 28th 2013
Dec 18th 2013
Zuha Thank you so very much nimra ajwa and eesha.. ;D Zuha
Oct 21st 2013
Zuha Hahaahaha hiba this is called mun mia mithoo.. but there is no doubt about it just kiddin.. Zuha
Oct 21st 2013
eesha I agree w8 ajwa Eesha
Oct 18th 2013
ajwa Laibah..what more awwsome moral do u want!!?? Ajwa
Oct 16th 2013
Nimra Fantastic 1 zuha.. :)) Nimra
Oct 14th 2013
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Oct 9th 2013
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Oct 8th 2013
Zuha Hiba saad finally my story gets published.. Zuha
Oct 8th 2013
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Oct 8th 2013
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Oct 8th 2013
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Oct 8th 2013
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Oct 5th 2013
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Oct 2nd 2013
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Sep 30th 2013
Sep 29th 2013
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Sep 28th 2013
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