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Shehryar Larik
Shehryar Larik
Bay View Academy
A Bad Dream
Published On Jul 7th 2013
Total Comments : 15
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I was playing in the park
The clouds soon got dark
I felt water dipping
The clouds were bumping
I saw the lighting
It was immensely terrifying
Then I heard sounds of thunder
I ran away further
Heavy rain started
My mind was jolted
I was seeking shelter
But my house was farther
I felt lost
I needed help at any cost
But no one heard my sobbing cry
I felt soon it was dry
I was feeling better
My mom asked whats the matter
I was thinking and winking
My mother realised i was dreaming
She laughed and told my situation
I smiled at my condition
I got out of my bed
Opened the window and saw everything was set
The weather was windy and pleasant
I forgot my dream and felt no tension
Sometimes dreams seem scary
And in them you feel dreary
I was wrong
Everything was dingdong!

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Comments 15
Anam So so scary!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Anam
Nov 1st 2013
Ajwa Too long .couldn't read.half was gr8 Ajwa
Jul 31st 2013
Bushra Nice poem Bushra
Jul 26th 2013
neha Hahahaha amazing in which class you are Neha
Jul 23rd 2013
tehreem Its really great..keep it up....... Tehreem
Jul 20th 2013
Rafia Oh really... well u will see them on my screen!!!!!!:) Rafia
Jul 10th 2013
Bushra Hafeez Yes why not........... i hav also sent.... :) Bushra Hafeez
Jul 9th 2013
Rafia Bushra I have send jokes..... I will be really happy if u will see and comment!!!!!!!!!!:) Rafia
Jul 8th 2013
Nimra Brilliant poem Nimra
Jul 8th 2013
Nimra Brilliant poem Nimra
Jul 8th 2013
Bushra Hafeez Preety go0d Bushra Hafeez
Jul 8th 2013
Abuzar When did you publish this because I also tried to publish mine but it didn`t work. Abuzar
Jul 8th 2013
Rafia Well done....... it's a nyc 1!!!!!! Rafia
Jul 7th 2013
nazish Ooh nyc poem very rhyming words.luv your poem. Nazish
Jul 7th 2013
saaniya True sometimes dreams seem so scary Saaniya
Jul 7th 2013

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