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Saad Salman
Saad Salman
Beacon House School System
The End Of The World
Published On Jul 3rd 2013
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Once upon a time there lived two Astronauts, Nasir and Jamshed. They both were great friends and they both had a wish, they wanted to discover the Black Hole. One midnight, the both astronauts were sleeping. They felt like someone is shaking their bed. Nasir woke up and looked down from the window. It was an Earthquake. Nasir opened the television and started reading the news. It said that the Earth is being dragged to the Black Hole. Nasir pushed Jamshed and he woke up. Jamshed read the news and became unconscious. Nasir picked up Jamshed and went in his biggest rocket that NASA gave him. He opened the engines of the rocket and went to the space. He saw that the world was near the Black Hole. Jamshed woke up and saw the view and became unconscious again. Now it was up to Nasir to save the Earth. Nasir stopped the rocket at a place. He wore his space suit and went outside the rocket. He tied two ropes on the rocket and went inside the rocket again. He went closer to the Earth and tied the two ropes with two hard poles that cannot be plucked out easily. Nasir pressed the boost button and started dragging the Earth to its place. The Earth was saved but the Astronauts weren’t, the rocket’s fuel was finished and oxygen was also finishing. The two astronauts died. They sacrificed their lives to save the Earth.

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Comments 32
Ebad Thank hurria!for commenting on my comment...!! :) Ebad
Feb 15th 2014
manal Dude, cool story but everything is sooo abrupt. Aur ye " once upon a time" ki starting se lgta hai k koi princess ki story hai Manal
Oct 19th 2013
Taibah Iam Hoora sister please add me Taibah
Sep 13th 2013
Hiba Gr8 Hiba
Aug 31st 2013
Aug 26th 2013
manal WOW!!! Manal
Aug 24th 2013
wafa Wowwwwwwwww lyc it saad Wafa
Aug 21st 2013
Anam You just don't know the true meaning of sacrifice Ajwa and Rumaisa! Anam
Aug 19th 2013
 hurria Nice story saad,ur stories are always imaginative and fantastic. the funniest part was when jamshed became unconcious and nasir alone had to do every thing.LOLz Ebad. Hurria
Aug 7th 2013
Ajwa I also agree wid rumaisa but this story was really like..............I dono.......impossible.....never mind......its gr88 fr little kids...........(-_-) Ajwa
Aug 5th 2013
 яυмαιsα Thnx minahi...4 agreeing with me..and saad dont write stories for lil' kids........cuz ur stories r 4 kids..-____-!!!! яυмαιsα
Jul 31st 2013
Hiba Lyked all and want lyks for mine tooooooooo Hiba
Jul 30th 2013
Ebad Bhai nasir aur jamshed kiun likha.. Nasir jamshed pora naam hy... doosra naam gayle rakh lety.. :D B-) :P Ebad
Jul 28th 2013
Minahil I agree with rumaisa:)(NO OFFENSE) Minahil
Jul 24th 2013
Noor Good! it would me brilliant if u publish a book Noor
Jul 21st 2013
manahil Saad why always your stories start with 'ONCE UPON A TIME' make your tart different. and secondly don't wrote these kid stories.:D Manahil
Jul 20th 2013
 яυмαιsα Seriously.......lik ur stories r always sooo lik meaninglesss..............i mean did that Nasir guy tied the rope to the Axis pole..Omg...Lolzzz...WTh...-_-!!!! яυмαιsα
Jul 13th 2013
fatimah The Jamshed part was the story!!!! Fatimah
Jul 12th 2013
Abdul ali Please add me in your friends list as i am new to v shine Abdul Ali
Jul 8th 2013
Abdul ali The end was very trajedic. Please make stories with positive ends. Otherwise it is a good story. You have used your brain very creatively Abdul Ali
Jul 8th 2013
Ahmed Please visit and like this page. It has got the cutest cats on planet! Ahmed
Jul 7th 2013
eesha Hahahahahahaha.I laughed so much whenever Jamshed got unconscious.A v.nice story. Eesha
Jul 7th 2013
Rafia Good 1.......!!!!!!!! Rafia
Jul 6th 2013
manal Nice story saad Manal
Jul 6th 2013
Laibah Ok sadia but still its not good 2 laugh Laibah
Jul 6th 2013
Muhammad Hassam Good story Muhammad Hassam
Jul 5th 2013
Syeda Maryam I am'nt making fun??Im too appreciating!!!!!!I said he is very talented,laiba.......... Syeda Maryam
Jul 4th 2013
Laibah I agree with nazish Laibah
Jul 4th 2013
nazish Oh saad whenever i read your story i have 2 admire bec you are such a best writer Nazish
Jul 4th 2013
hafsa It good Hafsa
Jul 4th 2013
Laibah There is nothing funny about it sadia and very good story with no spelling/grammatical mistakes. you are a good writer !!!!!!! Laibah
Jul 4th 2013
Syeda Maryam Giving lives to save the earth Ha haa haaaa!!! Syeda Maryam
Jul 3rd 2013

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