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Saad Salman
Saad Salman
Beacon House School System
The Friends
Published On Jul 1st 2013
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Two friends, Saad and Umair, planned to go hiking in the woods. They packed their things, lugged them over their shoulders and started out. One evening, while walking through the dense forest, they heard a bear growl. They were very scared and started to run away, but "Twick, twick", they could hear the twigs breaking with each step the bear took towards them. Desperate, Saad saw a low branch hanging from a tree. He quickly caught hold of the life-saving branch and climbed on top of the tree as soon as possible. He was so scared that he did not even look at his friend once. Umair, who was behind the first, was not so lucky. The bear was right behind him and when he saw Saad save himself, all he could think of doing was to throw himself flat on the ground. And that's how the bear found him. Face down on the ground and not even daring to breathe. The bear put his nose close to Umair’s ear – and then he sniffed and sniffed and sniffed. He was trying to make out whether Umair was just pretending or if he was dead.
Then finally he stopped sniffing. Umair dared to take small breath. Then the bear growled, and Umair’s blood ran cold. But by then the bear had decided that Umair was not alive and it is well-known that bears will not touch dead meat. So the bear slouched off into the forest.
Seeing that the worst of the danger was over, Saad slowly climbed down the tree where he was hiding. Walking up to Umair, who was still so shaken up that he could hardly stand, Saad he laughingly asked, "Hey, what did Master Bear whisper to you?" Umair gave Saad a long steady look. "He told me," said Umair very slowly, "never to trust a friend who deserts you at the first opportunity he gets. So, if you'll excuse me..." Saying that, Umair picked himself up, brushed off the dust, and walked away.

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Comments 22
Hamza Waqas WE ARE WITH RABIA AND WILL BE WITH RABIA UNTILL DR.MUHAMMAD.MURSI WILL BE THE PRESIDENT OF EGYPT!!! Hamza Waqas
Aug 26th 2013
 
 
manal U love ur name don't u saad;) BTW nice story Manal
Aug 24th 2013
 
 
Ajwa Its a veryyyy old stooryyyy!!!!!how cm u think that ppl will appreciate it...!!! Ajwa
Aug 12th 2013
 
 
Marwa Saad is it u in the story. If its u then thats very mean saad. Marwa
Jul 10th 2013
 
 
Uswah Raveeha i think this is kinda rude!!!!!! * no offence! Uswah
Jul 8th 2013
 
 
raveeha Can't anyone else write stories except Saad &Saad plz write your own stories this 1 I have read already. Raveeha
Jul 7th 2013
 
 
Fatima You might have written it your self BUT the idea IS COPIED Fatima
Jul 6th 2013
 
 
Maarij Maqsood Saad u copied Maarij Maqsood
Jul 6th 2013
 
 
manal U have talEnt SAAD!! Manal
Jul 6th 2013
 
 
Uswah Sorry saad its amzing I read all the stories yesterday! U r a great writer! Uswah
Jul 4th 2013
 
 
Saad Read all my new stories if you think I have copied all of them. Saad
Jul 3rd 2013
 
 
Uswah All of Saad's work is copied! You can't name one story by him that i have not read! I tell you this story saad has sent, i still have it in my small story book with morals! Please Saad i believe in you, in everyone, even myself! U can write awesome! Try it! ;) Uswah
Jul 3rd 2013
 
 
Shehryar Saad its a pretty old story which you have copied and just changed names of characters.Plz write stories yourself involving new ideas. Shehryar
Jul 2nd 2013
 
 
nazish No it has not been copied.saad is so talented he has written it by himself. Nazish
Jul 2nd 2013
 
 
Syeda Maryam Saad u have very nice story writing talent.Why dont u write urself??????????? Syeda Maryam
Jul 2nd 2013
 
 
areesha I have read this story many times .its cheated Areesha
Jul 2nd 2013
 
 
Emel Its not copied Emel
Jul 2nd 2013
 
 
Fatima This is copied. You can search on the net "A friend in need is a friend indeed"........... Fatima
Jul 2nd 2013
 
 
Maarij Maqsood Saad bahi i think that vshine is just uploading your stories Maarij Maqsood
Jul 2nd 2013
 
 
Syeda Maryam Really!!O k then very guud!!! Syeda Maryam
Jul 2nd 2013
 
 
Saad No it's not copied i wrote it myself Saad
Jul 1st 2013
 
 
Syeda Maryam Saad u copied this right??????I think everything u send is copied!!!!!!!! Syeda Maryam
Jul 1st 2013
 
 

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