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Fatimah Latif
Fatimah Latif
Pakistan International School (pisj)
The Haunted Island (part 6)
Published On Jul 1st 2013
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We are going to die, I thought. There was nowhere to go, they were everywhere. Suddenly one of them turned and faced the others and then made some kind of annoying loud sounds from its mouth and pointed at us, I didn’t know what it was saying or doing but I defiantly didn’t like the way they looked at me and James. Impetuously Jamie fell and lay on his front, motionless, a huge rock lay beside his head, which was now bleeding.
“Jamie, Oh no! Jamie gets up” my frightful cries were echoing everywhere.
Just then I felt a sudden sharp pain at the back of my head. It all happened so fast and the pain was so agonizing that I fell to the ground just beside James. Once again mist covered my eyes, everything started to disappear slowly and numbness covered my body.
The burning heat from a nearby bonfire woke me up. Slowly and gradually I realized where I was but had no Idea what had happened and how on earth did I got here. At first I thought I was in my bed but my back was on something hard and rough. I was still a little dizzy. I tried to move my hands and legs but they felt as if they were tied stiff. I looked down and no sooner realized that I was tied to a huge tree by a rope. Then it hit me and I remembered everything but I dint knew how long had I been fainted. But something was very strange, very strange indeed. Yes, those ‘things’ were nowhere to be seen. I dared not made any kind of sound because what if those creatures were around here somewhere and what if they were waiting for me to wake up and then………I dint even wanted to think about it. I looked around, well just moved my eyes because I was really afraid those things would come back any minute from where ever they were. All was dark, except the light which was coming from the bonfire. Where were those things? Then from the side of my right eye I saw something move. I turned and saw James, tied to a tree which was a few feet away from mine.
“James, pssst……. James, are you alright?” I asked almost in a whisper.
“What….. What happened? Where are we?”He asked, surprised as, he too, didn’t remember what had happened.
“We are still where we were a few hours ago before those creatures threw stones at us to make us unconscious so that they could tie us to these trees and then when we wake they would barbeque us on that fire and eat us up and THIS IS ALL YOUR FAULT” I said as anger started bursting into me.
“Hey hold on, MY FAULT, you were the one who wanted to build a raft and that’s what brought us here” he said.
My mouth open wide and I was about to yell at him when he said “Shhhh…. They would listen”
I instantly closed my mouth and tried to relax.
“Ok there is no point of fighting; we are just wasting our time. Those things would be back any minute” I said.
“You are probably right, I am sorry. Now how do we free ourselves” he said wriggling and twisting.
“Man, these are strong, I wish I had a knife” I said.
“A knife, yes, that’s it” James said excitement covering his face. “Hey Sarah, remember when I was examining those knifes? Well I now remember putting one of them into my back pocket”
“Well why didn’t you use it while those creatures were attacking us?” I asked.
“I was, err... A bit scared and anyways it wouldn’t have worked as there were so many of them and we were only two with one weapon” he said.
“Can you reach it?” I asked impatiently.
“I am trying……..wait…..ummm... Got it!”
“Good!”I said, relieved.
He cut himself free and then came to help me. He was just about to begin when we heard a blood-curdling scream.
“Oh no, not again, fast Jamie, FAST” I screamed at him.
The rope loosened and Jamie and I started running when I stopped stiff.
“What? What’s the matter?” his face, white again.
“We need the ropes, wait here I will get them .I turned before he could reply and ran back, reached down and took the rope. Another high pitched scream was heard, louder than before. I looked up to see those creatures coming this way.

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Comments 28
Aug 26th 2013
Soha GREAT! Soha
Aug 12th 2013
Arooba Hello fatimah how are you? Arooba
Aug 12th 2013
fatimah ThnX Marwa, Fizza Mansoor and Manahil u guys just MADE a huge smile on ma face...which i think i wont be able to remove Fatimah
Jul 31st 2013
Manahil Nice story! Manahil
Jul 31st 2013
FIZZA Its very very very!!!!!!!!!!!nice story. Please please please please accept my friend request:). Fizza
Jul 24th 2013
FIZZA Its a nice story Fizza
Jul 22nd 2013
Jul 18th 2013
fatimah Good to know !!!! Fatimah
Jul 16th 2013
Irum Same here, Fatimah!!! =D Irum
Jul 13th 2013
fatimah If it wasnt for u guys, i would have still not completed the story. ur encouragement just gave me a boost. the credits go to u alllll!!! Fatimah
Jul 11th 2013
fatimah Awwww...Ayesha. (i know this is late) but Ramadad Mubarak to u tooo. i srly never had a friend like u. loveeeeee uuuu!!! Fatimah
Jul 11th 2013
Irum Love it!! Ramadan Mubarak to you especially, Fatima, Coz you're a great friend to me ... Keep rocking!! ;) Irum
Jul 11th 2013
fatimah Just like uuuuuuuuuuu...... ;) Fatimah
Jul 9th 2013
 яυмαιsα ur story.................its totaLLy AwwwsuM!!!<3 яυмαιsα
Jul 9th 2013
fatimah By bus Fatimah
Jul 7th 2013
Khadijah It't tooooooooooooooo far. How do you get to school? Khadijah
Jul 6th 2013
fatimah Well i live in jamiah near king Abdul Aziz university Fatimah
Jul 6th 2013
Khadijah Fatima Baji, Where do you live in Jeddah because I live right next to the masjid in front of PISJ. Khadijah
Jul 5th 2013
Khadijah I can't wait................. Khadijah
Jul 5th 2013
fatimah Hi Eeman, gud to know bout u well i live in Jeddah and study at PISJ. Fatimah
Jul 4th 2013
Eeman Hello i am from makkah .study in al-fazal what about u Eeman
Jul 2nd 2013
eesha @ Fatimah........Hahahahaha no wonder they were annoyed ;) Eesha
Jul 2nd 2013
fatimah Well fatima, u see, i have to type alot and then VSHINE always takes two weeks to post the parts. this time they took like 4 weeks and i had to keep sending it everyday. Fatimah
Jul 1st 2013
Saad I’ve joined an open group on facebook. It is VSHINE Readers and Writers. Boys are likely to be added. So everyone check out that group. Just type “VSHINE Readers and Writers” in search box and there you are. Saad
Jul 1st 2013
Fatima Why do u send the parts soooooooooo late??? I have to read them all over again when u send the next part.... Fatima
Jul 1st 2013
fatimah Yeah, thankfully. i would have send it to them like ten times. they must be rly annoyed with me :p Fatimah
Jul 1st 2013
eesha It's just a Big WOWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!! :D I'm rly getting in luv with ur story.At last it's published :) Eesha
Jul 1st 2013

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